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I lie here, , a mere silhouette - a fragile existence , my moral compass in tact , my heart beating profoundly - up until the moment when the magic in this world seems to mist beyond my eyes like a foul dust, my heart begins to thump in a heavy and distorted way , - my eyes close and i dream of you, my hopes blowing away with this icy wind, that seems to turn me cold, my feelings to cease and plummet into a distant and eerie world ...
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29th Jan 2015 8:50pm
Awwww, thank you so much Gabriel, your comments always make me smile (: i hope you have a lovely day (:
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30th Jan 2015 00:26am
Awwww My darling princess Enigma,
I know how is feels to miss someone so much it feels like death . Thanks for sharing keep writing!! did I get this right?
Zazzles xoxox
I know how is feels to miss someone so much it feels like death . Thanks for sharing keep writing!! did I get this right?
Zazzles xoxox
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30th Jan 2015 00:30am
Awwww, such a lovely comment from a beautiful woman, thank you so much zazzles, and yes aha, you did c:
hope you have a wonderful day c: xxxx
hope you have a wonderful day c: xxxx
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30th Jan 2015 6:28pm
You’re so descriptively gifted. Maybe there's a Cthulhu that lay dormant within you and the trigger is love. It is love and all its wonder that awakens and shakes the very depths of your being in the most fearsome of ways. It's endearing really. Anyone with a moral compass certainly has an edge. I could read the whole book Colette. Great job.
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30th Jan 2015 6:59pm
Awwwww, c: your comment cheered me up , thank you so much c: you're so sweet x) hope you have a fantastic day (:
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23rd Mar 2015 2:19am
A beautiful - yet inherently sad - work of art from a pretty specimen who seems to have a similarly described nature... How lovely. ^-^
(I don't mean to be presumptuous, but I'm inclined to be. Sorry...)
(I don't mean to be presumptuous, but I'm inclined to be. Sorry...)
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28th May 2015 9:16pm
looks like i found another i love!Dont let me down pump it up:3 keep blowing me away
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28th May 2015 9:22pm