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Cloud 9
Compressed between your soft pressure
I shiver in your atmosphere
Gathered in your cloudy precipitate
I am enwreathed in your smothering peaks
Exuded in your humidity
My turgidity is liberated by your pouring release
Clutched in your passing turbulence
I find my solace in your fading breeze
Our limbs bowed in storms’ passing
I shiver in your atmosphere
Gathered in your cloudy precipitate
I am enwreathed in your smothering peaks
Exuded in your humidity
My turgidity is liberated by your pouring release
Clutched in your passing turbulence
I find my solace in your fading breeze
Our limbs bowed in storms’ passing
Published 28th Jan 2015
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28th Jan 2015 12:50pm
Love the humidity line
You've gone there before
The humidity part
It sums up the heat so well ....
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You've gone there before
The humidity part
It sums up the heat so well ....
Big Like
30th Jan 2015 8:02am
Thank-you Poet - Humidity is definitely my favourite wet noun. I really wish there were more!
In fact I am finding myself very much in this 'wishing for more sexy wet words' space these days!
What has DUP done to me?
In fact I am finding myself very much in this 'wishing for more sexy wet words' space these days!
What has DUP done to me?
30th Jan 2015 12:01pm
DUP removes your innocence and then it's hard to go back. To much temptation to explore the sexual nether world. No censorship does that ...
That's why I write under this name now. It's the softer side of me. When I want to be bad, I let Poetspeak do the dirty work ...
That's why I write under this name now. It's the softer side of me. When I want to be bad, I let Poetspeak do the dirty work ...
28th Jan 2015 3:37pm
And the forecast calls for sexual arousal, with ejaculation spotted on the horizon. It sounds like you're in the tropics rather that Australia, Frank. Or maybe you're on vacation. Somewhere between her thighs. Send me a postcard!
30th Jan 2015 8:06am
What a fine idea you have there Crowfly 'Postcards from Carnality'. Now there is a series of cards I would be happy to own, of course I would be sure to send copies with personalised missives to all of my DUP friends whilst on holiday in that special place!
Alas not all forecasts are accurate...
Alas not all forecasts are accurate...
28th Jan 2015 4:56pm
I love this. Great flow and just beautiful imagery. It creates a very lovely mood.
30th Jan 2015 8:07am
Thanks for briefly drifting away with me Sammy.
Wouldn't it be nice if we could experience weather like this every day!
Wouldn't it be nice if we could experience weather like this every day!
29th Jan 2015 2:10am
Soft and sensual. You've contextualized 'cloud 9' perfectly. Much enjoyed!
30th Jan 2015 8:09am
Thank-you WoundedHeart, this is definitely the kind of cloud cover I could handle on a regular basis!
Anonymous
29th Jan 2015 5:18pm
wait. where are we, frank?
in a tropical rainstorm
or between her legs?
in a tropical rainstorm
or between her legs?
30th Jan 2015 8:20am
Anonymous
30th Jan 2015 9:29am
i have only one
answer to this tropical
storm of raging lust
i prefer the rain
but men are different from me
thighs before the rain
answer to this tropical
storm of raging lust
i prefer the rain
but men are different from me
thighs before the rain
