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You give me
Your vulnerable
One moment at a time
Each syllable
Dancing
A rthymic flow
Graceful and amorous
Or a moody storm
Either way
I can't resist
The sweet sensation
Or your fiery finish
That is you
One moment at a time
Each syllable
Dancing
A rthymic flow
Graceful and amorous
Or a moody storm
Either way
I can't resist
The sweet sensation
Or your fiery finish
That is you
Published 25th Jan 2015
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25th Jan 2015 6:36pm
25th Jan 2015 6:51pm
Anonymous
25th Jan 2015 6:38pm
You are swingin' for the fences and sending everyone home with this one, cowboy. So good. So very, very good!
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25th Jan 2015 7:08pm
25th Jan 2015 7:25pm
Anonymous
25th Jan 2015 8:52pm
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Anonymous
26th Jan 2015 2:05pm
Beautiful love, delightful words :)
26th Jan 2015 2:10pm
26th Jan 2015 3:49pm
I am beginning to warm towards writing more erotic poetry - this piece makes me want to write more - its erotic and sensual without cock and balls speak.
great stuff :-)
great stuff :-)
26th Jan 2015 4:01pm
Thx David
Glad you get it. It really irks me when people write what I call "play by play sex" it's what you don't say that makes it hot.
Glad you get it. It really irks me when people write what I call "play by play sex" it's what you don't say that makes it hot.
