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Morning Lovely
She drips
lust
in the
introduction;
like I drip
perspiration
in that
final
moment
her left leg
peeping
out from behind
the covers
She
whispers
"enjoy your day"
in that
agonizing
husky
"wish I didn't scream"
tone
and she
didn't
[.]
Published 9th Jan 2015
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9th Jan 2015 4:09pm
25th Feb 2015 8:11pm
9th Jan 2015 11:25pm
I Love the flow of this poem, and I really like the stanza about the leg peeping out of the covers.
Sometimes less is simply more.
Great poem!
Sometimes less is simply more.
Great poem!
25th Feb 2015 8:10pm
Glad you like it, Franko. Thanks for popping in!
Yes I am indeed a lover of less, when these hit the forehead!
;)
Yes I am indeed a lover of less, when these hit the forehead!
;)
