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COWBOY COFFEE at the Haiku Erotic Restaurant
white guys and black girls
mix spit good percolation
soon hot creamed coffee
candycrier vows: "It's the best! And always plenty of sugar at hand for you sugar addicts."
mix spit good percolation
soon hot creamed coffee
candycrier vows: "It's the best! And always plenty of sugar at hand for you sugar addicts."
Published 29th Dec 2014
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You rustled my eternal sleep here at Woodlawn Cemetery, Candy. I always liked clever chaps, and I think you're one. When Huck and Tom went on camping trips they used to fix some Cowboy Coffee for us older folks. I remember, yes I think they did. Anyway, your play on words seems a metaphor, a bit risque, my friend, but don't take offense. I believe I once wrote a very risque thing called, if I'm remembering right, 1601. It caused a lot of blushes and criticism. Good luck on your writing. Mark Twain
29th Dec 2014 11:55pm
Oh my God! I am so honored! Thank you Mark, or should I address you as Mr. Twain? So honored! Yes, thank you and thank you again and again and again and again...
30th Dec 2014 00:26am
Brovo great Senryu Mr. Crier and it was funny too!
Haiku is nature senryu is like this
Always Together
Two peas in a pod
One still on Earth, One with God
Together Always
Inspired By Nathan Leccese"s Contest "Two Peas In A Pod"
3rd Place
Haiku is nature senryu is like this
Always Together
Two peas in a pod
One still on Earth, One with God
Together Always
Inspired By Nathan Leccese"s Contest "Two Peas In A Pod"
3rd Place
30th Dec 2014 00:47am
Thank you for your praise and your crisp senryu.
And not to forget your spilling some coffee on your reading list!
And not to forget your spilling some coffee on your reading list!
