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Tanka (Thursday, 24, July 2014)
three lines dance unrhymed
syllables five seven five
and one thought stated
two lines continue the thought
both are seven syllables
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Refresher for my other form, wonder if i am doing it right, but as the syllable is not the same as the "on"... can a westerner ever get it right...
syllables five seven five
and one thought stated
two lines continue the thought
both are seven syllables
============================
Refresher for my other form, wonder if i am doing it right, but as the syllable is not the same as the "on"... can a westerner ever get it right...
Published 15th Dec 2014
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17th Dec 2014 7:21pm
there are so many forms of structured poetry that you can find the one that you love, or even no structure at all
happy hunting :)
happy hunting :)
