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i cant believe you
you lied you bitch
you don't want me to be mad
bitch im not mad im pissed
can't believe you
why would you hide this from me
this is serious
yawl decided together not to tell me
your my sister
wife best friend
I don't know if I can trust you anymore
it makes me wonder what other shit your hiding from me
first you act like nothing then the word slipped
now I know
and now you want to hid it from me
bitch you need to start telling me shit its pissin me off
I love you with all of my he3art you are my world
but I don't know about our plans anymore
you lied you refuse to do anything about it either
you don't want me to be mad
bitch im not mad im pissed
can't believe you
why would you hide this from me
this is serious
yawl decided together not to tell me
your my sister
wife best friend
I don't know if I can trust you anymore
it makes me wonder what other shit your hiding from me
first you act like nothing then the word slipped
now I know
and now you want to hid it from me
bitch you need to start telling me shit its pissin me off
I love you with all of my he3art you are my world
but I don't know about our plans anymore
you lied you refuse to do anything about it either
Published 18th Nov 2014
| Edited 20th Nov 2014
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18th Nov 2014 9:44pm
20th Nov 2014 5:54pm
outrage and anger are the fuel for many a great writes---don't work so well when it comes to dispute resolution. Hope things a bit more tranquil; that assumes this piece isn't fictional.
One question; in the title did you intend to change the spelling of "believe"?
One question; in the title did you intend to change the spelling of "believe"?
20th Nov 2014 5:56pm
19th Nov 2014 2:47pm
Great ink! It is incedibly frustrating to find out that the one you trust has turned you down. Give her another chance to earn trust but whether you do or not is entirely up to you
20th Nov 2014 5:59pm
26th Nov 2014 3:03am
It's hard to trust after you have been hurt. The second chance is up to you. Good write very relatable material.
26th Nov 2014 10:16pm
Good piece...Have you ever heard the saying "The first time it's their fault.The second time it's yours."
29th Nov 2014 7:22pm
Wow, your pretty angry i could tell... IDK i personally believe everyone needs two chances if they mess them up, then that's when we need to let them go... I had this one person that was just like satan and i gave him more than two chances and he kept being a B****... those types of people dont deserve second chances... But hey at least you put your emotions out for the world... Better than keeping it in your heart... It's all about speaking up...Great Job!!!
30th Nov 2014 8:49am
Thanks so much I did gave her another chance we went to homecoming together we now inseparable again
