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Methods & Meanings of Breath Unto Death
"y'll never know what-I-know, but eye know y'll
know it more and better" - anonYmous
don'des
erve t'be olde
like this...like it's
like
a vast & mighty disservice to
com e to th is, thisway,that,or
whi chever
way of getting got here....
oldpeople smell f'unny
there ain't near'nough parfum nor
deo
dor
ant
to cover th'scent of mo'tality -
'malodorous' They
call it/well/actually/ just
stink(is
more likely
like it)/
thee science of stink has advanced so far & high,buttstill
wee
wee
wee gotta work it harder to find the right re'search
to quell thee smell(grammatically incorrect,eye
will concede, but po'etically pungent
as to be 'licensed')
o, poor ancestors!
how suffer did you
thee anguish of this?(no
wonder y'r all so fckn dead)
of this great breathin
livin metapho f'death's decompos
itions
and
[e] Xsti n k ' shu n ?
w'ill It ever smell
as pretty as it should?
(Ha!Ho!)
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20dkzk14poopms\/\FOTO:"Metapho'My'Ass"\/\BY:dkzk(aswell)
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know it more and better" - anonYmous
don'des
erve t'be olde
like this...like it's
like
a vast & mighty disservice to
com e to th is, thisway,that,or
whi chever
way of getting got here....
oldpeople smell f'unny
there ain't near'nough parfum nor
deo
dor
ant
to cover th'scent of mo'tality -
'malodorous' They
call it/well/actually/ just
stink(is
more likely
like it)/
thee science of stink has advanced so far & high,buttstill
wee
wee
wee gotta work it harder to find the right re'search
to quell thee smell(grammatically incorrect,eye
will concede, but po'etically pungent
as to be 'licensed')
o, poor ancestors!
how suffer did you
thee anguish of this?(no
wonder y'r all so fckn dead)
of this great breathin
livin metapho f'death's decompos
itions
and
[e] Xsti n k ' shu n ?
w'ill It ever smell
as pretty as it should?
(Ha!Ho!)
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20dkzk14poopms\/\FOTO:"Metapho'My'Ass"\/\BY:dkzk(aswell)
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Published 24th Oct 2014
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24th Oct 2014 4:13pm
there must be worse epitaphs than
he didn't smell so good
but he had great
taste...
he didn't smell so good
but he had great
taste...
24th Oct 2014 5:42pm
25th Oct 2014 8:51am
"the right re'search
to quell thee smell." you are too cute; love the poem :)
to quell thee smell." you are too cute; love the poem :)
25th Oct 2014 3:18pm
after reading 4-5 of my poems that a friend of mine hustled to
him from a mss that friend was helping me hustle back in the late'70's, (to precious little avail), Allen Ginsberg returned the
ms pages wit the annotation, in his distinctive script, "cute & acute".....
one of my brushes wit artistic greatness
(gone nowhere)
