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21st Century Courting

He paints his target and sets in for the kill
Of the girl with the purple skirt with the frill.
He thrills her with his overconfidence and
Hence she goes along with the pretence.
Flattery (and drinks) will get him anywhere, he thinks.
And as I catch sight of the fright of his tongue in her mouth
And his hands headed South, I realise
He's right.

Written by Sslowcheetahh

Published 1st November 2009 4:53pm Read all poems by Sslowcheetahh
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re: stunning

Written on 29th November 2009 12:04pm by Sslowcheetahh

Thank you :)
The people I wrote this about are, ironically, still together.
Haha, life can be interesting. x

proper good

Written on 10th January 2010 8:27pm by Rebecca Hewlett

this is top! This was the one you sent m before Uni, loved it then, love it now.

true

Written on 11th January 2010 3:20pm by Blackwolf

enough the guys these days are jerks.

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