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Submerge
Take a long wet swim
Into the ocean of ME
Surrounded by my iridescent aura
Feel all of your stress release
My waves washing over you
All of lifes's insecurities
Rushing out to sea
Buried within the abyss
Allow my fluidity to seduce you
Get lost in the song of your Siren
Carried by the sea breeze
Throughout the day and night
Feel the golden sun rise
Bring my smile each morning
As the soothing horizon
Tucks you at night
Into the ocean of ME
Surrounded by my iridescent aura
Feel all of your stress release
My waves washing over you
All of lifes's insecurities
Rushing out to sea
Buried within the abyss
Allow my fluidity to seduce you
Get lost in the song of your Siren
Carried by the sea breeze
Throughout the day and night
Feel the golden sun rise
Bring my smile each morning
As the soothing horizon
Tucks you at night
Published 1st Sep 2014
| Edited 2nd Sep 2014
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2nd Sep 2014 4:24am
2nd Sep 2014 4:28am
Thank you darlin'.....
Ive had quite an inspiring presence in my life lately
Ive had quite an inspiring presence in my life lately
2nd Sep 2014 4:26am
2nd Sep 2014 4:31am
Poetik ty sir.....
Dreamy fits cuz it did come to me n a dream like so many of my others have
Dreamy fits cuz it did come to me n a dream like so many of my others have
2nd Sep 2014 6:20am
Can imagine the man addressed to not help but want to jump in and take his plunge.
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Anonymous
2nd Sep 2014 2:56pm
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2nd Sep 2014 7:09pm
Jack im getting rather addicted to ur comments hun. They r becoming quite a habit.
Ur praise n generosity know no end
Ur praise n generosity know no end
Anonymous
2nd Sep 2014 8:05pm
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2nd Sep 2014 8:12pm
U r a mind reader Jack cuz i have contemplating doing just that. Due to a chosen very hurtful few. Who have taken upon themselves to bad mouth me and spread rumors. As u know im a sensitive n caring peeson who would never purposely hurt another soul
Anonymous
2nd Sep 2014 9:25pm
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2nd Sep 2014 11:43pm
Captured in the relax
Of Your doing
Bringing a calming
That same feel
Only death can bring
So please kill me
Over and over again
Wash away my life
Into the sands
That I sink into
Conforming
To your need
Please
Stunning write Bell
Of Your doing
Bringing a calming
That same feel
Only death can bring
So please kill me
Over and over again
Wash away my life
Into the sands
That I sink into
Conforming
To your need
Please
Stunning write Bell
Anonymous
4th Sep 2014 5:06pm
Belle,
consider me tucked in! ; )
tornado
consider me tucked in! ; )
tornado
