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Overdose
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Overdose
Frightening as it was,
She overdosed on drugs.
The needle still in her vein,
A bruise without its pain..
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PleasuresOfPain
Published
1st Sep 2014
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ConfessionsOfADark
(ConfessionsOfADarkMind)
1st Sep 2014 4:06am
Very visual. Left me thinking... Also wondering what happened next..
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LobodeSanPedro
2nd Sep 2014 8:10am
Brilliant last line ... Love the word play.
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DaveyBoyC
18th Sep 2014 11:52am
Interesting. Evokes an image when reading that final line.
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