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8th Midnight Crush, Future Skies

 
Intro(track singing down and play in the background)
By the pond...
We both looked at each other...
I looked at your wounds(Inside and Out)

Verse 1
Are you okay(Please help me)
I will always take care of you
(Every night is Special with you)
With you...
WITH YOU

Chorus(SING high on each part except for the line in parentheses/without any capital letters)
MIDNIGHT CRUSH(OHHHH!)
FOREVER SKIES
I LOOK AT YOU AND SEE BLISS UPON OUR MIDNIGHT CRUSH
FOREVER IN THE SKIES
(I'm glad you love me)
IM GLAD YOU LOVE ME

Bridge
Are you okay(Please help me)
I will always take care of you

(Breakdown, I'm gonna describe this part in 2 ways in how to scream, Scream High on the first 3 lines, then Growl or do Low Screams the words next to the 3rd line in Parentheses/on the next 3 lines and finally Scream high on the last 2 lines)
WHY DID YOU TREAT HER THAT WAY
I WILL NEVER UNDERSTAND WHY
YOU CANT CONQUER YOUR DEMONS(WHEN YOU GO TO CHURCH)
WHAT DO YOU FEEL
WHY HAVENT YOU CHANGED
(IM NOT PERFECT AS WELL)
DONT TELL ME
DONT TELL MEEEEEEEEE

Chorus
MIDNIGHT CRUSH(OHHHH!)
FOREVER SKIES
I LOOK AT YOU AND SEE BLISS UPON OUR MIDNIGHT CRUSH
FOREVER IN THE SKIES
(I'm glad you love me)
IM GLAD YOU LOVE ME

Verse 2 Repeat Intro leading to an Extended Breakdown
By the pond...
We both looked at each other...
I looked at your wounds(Inside and Out)

Extended Breakdown
WHY DID YOU TREAT HER THAT WAY
I WILL NEVER UNDERSTAND WHY
YOU CANT CONQUER YOUR DEMONS(WHEN YOU GO TO CHURCH)
WHAT DO YOU FEEL
WHY HAVENT YOU CHANGED
(IM NOT PERFECT AS WELL)
DONT TELL ME
DONT TELL MEEEEEEEEE
YOU FELL IN LOVE WITH YOUR GREEDINESS
YOU ABANDONED ALL HOPE IN THE GIFTS(YOUR OWN)
I WILL NOT...
I WILL NOT BECOME THE BROKEN FATHER
(IVE ALREADY CRIED AND DIED SO MANY TIMES)
INSIDDDDDDDDDDDE...

Pre-Chorus(Play this like the intro/play I the background)
Are you okay(Please help me)
I will always take care of you
Are you okay(Please help me)
I will always take care of you

Chorus
MIDNIGHT CRUSH(OHHHH!)
FOREVER SKIES
I LOOK AT YOU AND SEE BLISS UPON OUR MIDNIGHT CRUSH
FOREVER IN THE SKIES
(I'm glad you love me)
IM GLAD YOU LOVE ME


Meaning
This song is a story concept and personal song.  I was thinking of an old song I wrote and I decided to continue it and give it an ending.  This song is influenced by a lot of things, music wise I've listened too "Memphis May Fire" whole album called "Unconditional" and a song called "Miles Away "off their other album called "Challenger".  While I wrote this song, I was also listening too "Pierce the Veil" song called "Hold on Til May."
I tried to picture the song setting in rain with a boy and girl  kissing each other under the rain at midnight.  Then I pictured the couple reminiscing and then moving on with their lives, getting married and living happily.  This was also another song with a lot of the lyrics I singed and screamed in the shower.  This is my last song and I wanted it to have every emotion in it containing Hate and Love, Right and Wrong and many things under that spectrum.
Written by Bjasper (Brandon Remigio)
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