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Float in' on 'Cloud Find...'
There's such
a presence
to her essence
Yet, I can't be sure
still I think it's
her allure...
casual,
demurely designed
so perfectly aligned
her allegiance I vow
prancing like peacock,
defiantly proud
gosh damned I gotta
say out it loud...
NOW THAT
is a real woman!
alas, I'm simply
just lost inside
my mind's
'room' again...
a presence
to her essence
Yet, I can't be sure
still I think it's
her allure...
casual,
demurely designed
so perfectly aligned
her allegiance I vow
prancing like peacock,
defiantly proud
gosh damned I gotta
say out it loud...
NOW THAT
is a real woman!
alas, I'm simply
just lost inside
my mind's
'room' again...
Published 29th Aug 2014
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29th Aug 2014 8:38pm
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29th Aug 2014 9:57pm
29th Aug 2014 11:55pm
30th Aug 2014 2:36am
Thank you my sweet Grace, ur wonderful! Appreciate your continued support :)
30th Aug 2014 1:41am
Erotic ninja, luv :-* ~
This one is sweet and just a little lost boy sounding... :-*
I hope she shows up, luv, and proves to be everything you need and that she recognizes your worth.
This one is sweet and just a little lost boy sounding... :-*
I hope she shows up, luv, and proves to be everything you need and that she recognizes your worth.
30th Aug 2014 2:45am
Thank you my friend, yea lil lost huh? lol
Lucky for me I got pretty good navigational skills lol
Thanks a bunch for ur thoughts n time :)
Lucky for me I got pretty good navigational skills lol
Thanks a bunch for ur thoughts n time :)
30th Aug 2014 1:54am
Hey now Po, I love this manly bravado! Nicely said for sure!
You are so sweet I hope you find her soon I don't like you being all kinds of by yourself hun "D
Hugs
Broomie
You are so sweet I hope you find her soon I don't like you being all kinds of by yourself hun "D
Hugs
Broomie
30th Aug 2014 1:57am
Ah, my sweet PM.... You're so beautiful....
Love your poem & love your drawing.... :)
Love your poem & love your drawing.... :)
30th Aug 2014 2:49am
Aaaaawwww Broomie, U are sweet! Thanks for the smile
n always for your support :)
n always for your support :)
30th Aug 2014 2:51am
Sweetest Kate...thank I for ur continued support n ur wonderful
comments, I'm so grateful n wow u like my pic too!? Awesome! lol
comments, I'm so grateful n wow u like my pic too!? Awesome! lol
30th Aug 2014 2:52am
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30th Aug 2014 10:45am
Thank you my dear, yes I can say in particular
that I REALly saw this face n thought wow
how pretty, n so I drew it :)
that I REALly saw this face n thought wow
how pretty, n so I drew it :)
30th Aug 2014 5:33pm
oh tres belle Poe
"her allure...
casual,
demurely designed
so perfectly aligned"
that's some muse you have there
"her allure...
casual,
demurely designed
so perfectly aligned"
that's some muse you have there
31st Aug 2014 4:59am
Oh my beauty, you know how I love ur
wonderful praise! Sadly that 'muse' u speak of is simply
my imagination... Deeply n always grateful to you mami... :)
wonderful praise! Sadly that 'muse' u speak of is simply
my imagination... Deeply n always grateful to you mami... :)
