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like a ghost(august)
in a crowded ocean
your eyes call me
guidance from raging waters
fear of waves overtaking me
cease
peace as others flail
to shore around me
eyes locked in heavenly embrace
leading me away to safety
your eyes call me
guidance from raging waters
fear of waves overtaking me
cease
peace as others flail
to shore around me
eyes locked in heavenly embrace
leading me away to safety
Published 16th Aug 2014
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30th Oct 2014 3:02pm
Nicely done.. Well written.. Love your flow, and phrasing.. To me it says no matter how deep the waters, and the feeling like you're about to drown.. Someone watches over you.. So you're never truly alone.. Just an opinion.. Loved this..
Dave
Dave
2nd Nov 2014 2:03am
