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In praise of women
In praise of women
Let me say
This:
Aromatic
Nectar
Of
The
Goddess
Slips
Between
My lips
Caressing
My mouth
Wreaking
Celestial
Bliss
On
My tongue
As
Honeyed
Ecstasy
Slides
Down
My throat
I could not contain myself
Forgive me
I skipped ahead
I should not have done so
Let me first address your breasts
It matters not to me whether they be
Voluptuous, overflowing, glorious or
Pert, luscious nibbles, superb
No matter their delicious form,
I
Want
My lips
And
Tongue involved
Eventually teeth too, my dear
My hands
Will want to join in dalliance
As well
Playing symphonies
Upon
Your
Nipples
Areolas
And, Let's NOT forget those Bites upon your Neck
Let me also say
This:
Holding
Your
Rounded
Thighs
Splayed
Open
Before me
Upon
The
Bed
Or
Whatever
Surface
I
Find
To
Ravish
Your
Delectable
Femininity
Upon
Against
Over
Open
To
Me
Will
Bring
Me
Such
Immense
Euphoria
That
I will hold you there for hours, taking you over and over and over and over and over again. (To tell the truth, I could lose myself in you for days here)
I want it ALL:
Screams
Moans
Yells
Wailing
Abandon
Sighs
Incoherency
Babbling
Begging
And
I will have it
So
Will
You...
Let me say
This:
Aromatic
Nectar
Of
The
Goddess
Slips
Between
My lips
Caressing
My mouth
Wreaking
Celestial
Bliss
On
My tongue
As
Honeyed
Ecstasy
Slides
Down
My throat
I could not contain myself
Forgive me
I skipped ahead
I should not have done so
Let me first address your breasts
It matters not to me whether they be
Voluptuous, overflowing, glorious or
Pert, luscious nibbles, superb
No matter their delicious form,
I
Want
My lips
And
Tongue involved
Eventually teeth too, my dear
My hands
Will want to join in dalliance
As well
Playing symphonies
Upon
Your
Nipples
Areolas
And, Let's NOT forget those Bites upon your Neck
Let me also say
This:
Holding
Your
Rounded
Thighs
Splayed
Open
Before me
Upon
The
Bed
Or
Whatever
Surface
I
Find
To
Ravish
Your
Delectable
Femininity
Upon
Against
Over
Open
To
Me
Will
Bring
Me
Such
Immense
Euphoria
That
I will hold you there for hours, taking you over and over and over and over and over again. (To tell the truth, I could lose myself in you for days here)
I want it ALL:
Screams
Moans
Yells
Wailing
Abandon
Sighs
Incoherency
Babbling
Begging
And
I will have it
So
Will
You...
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re: Re: In praise of women
29th Jul 2014 2:31pm
Re: In praise of women
29th Jul 2014 12:29pm
re: Re: In praise of women
29th Jul 2014 2:38pm
Granite, luv :-* ~
This is incredibly high praise indeed! I find myself breathless that I have evoked such feeling in you, a Master of eroticism, master of dampness even ;-).
Thank you a thousand times, luv! :-* Thank. You.
This is incredibly high praise indeed! I find myself breathless that I have evoked such feeling in you, a Master of eroticism, master of dampness even ;-).
Thank you a thousand times, luv! :-* Thank. You.
Re: In praise of women
"Splayed
Open
Before me
Upon
The Bed
Or
Whatever
Surface
I
Find To
Ravish
Your
Delectable
Femininity"
that's done it, oracle of erotica... i'm embracing my inner lesbian again.
there's something very addictive about the softness of a woman and you capture it exquisitely here.
Open
Before me
Upon
The Bed
Or
Whatever
Surface
I
Find To
Ravish
Your
Delectable
Femininity"
that's done it, oracle of erotica... i'm embracing my inner lesbian again.
there's something very addictive about the softness of a woman and you capture it exquisitely here.
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re: Re: In praise of women
Ahhh, Snowcrystal, luv :-* ~
Thank you very much.
I must confess...
I WAS rather hoping you'd say that when I wrote this. ;-)
Naughty me...
Thank you very much.
I must confess...
I WAS rather hoping you'd say that when I wrote this. ;-)
Naughty me...
re: re: Re: In praise of women
woman, you drive me to distraction... if you are ever in need of a part time vagetarian for a collab please let me know xo
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Re: In praise of women
29th Jul 2014 3:46pm
Mmmmmm....now you r the one making me reread you over n over. Looks like we r going to keep repaying these favors. Extremely well written hun
Hugs
Belle
Hugs
Belle
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Thank you very much, lilsouthernbelle, luv :-*.
I'm glad I could cause you to take another look, woman, after the havoc you wrought the other day. ;-)
I'm glad I could cause you to take another look, woman, after the havoc you wrought the other day. ;-)
Re: In praise of women
29th Jul 2014 8:46pm
SO DAMN HOT sweets!!
Love your voice also!!
Hot write and read!!
Sir Lancelott
Love your voice also!!
Hot write and read!!
Sir Lancelott
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re: Re: In praise of women
29th Jul 2014 9:04pm
Thank you very much, Sir Lancelott, luv :-*. As you're no stranger to scorching with words, I am complimented indeed. Again, thank you, Sir Knight. :-*
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29th Jul 2014 10:34pm
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re: Re: In praise of women
Jack Tex, luv :-* ~
I do not know what to say to this. These are weighty words and are neither easily read nor easily set aside. I will carefully contemplate them.
Thank you, Jack, for such lucid and transpicuous belief in me and my potential for that is ever priceless and causes me to strive.
I do not know what to say to this. These are weighty words and are neither easily read nor easily set aside. I will carefully contemplate them.
Thank you, Jack, for such lucid and transpicuous belief in me and my potential for that is ever priceless and causes me to strive.
Re: In praise of women
Anonymous
29th Jul 2014 11:17pm
Brilliantly done, Savaja, masterfully crafted
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re: Re: In praise of women
30th Jul 2014 5:43am
Thank you very much, SugarSkull, luv :-*. You are very sweet to say so.
What has happened to my irreverent, incorrigible, cruisin' bad boy?!
So serious. :-p
What has happened to my irreverent, incorrigible, cruisin' bad boy?!
So serious. :-p
Re: In praise of women
30th Jul 2014 5:57am
sitting quietly in the shadows, enjoying the sultry romance of woman-with-woman, lavishly portrayed in your benediction to Sappho...
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Ah, thank you, JohnFeddeler, luv :-* ~
You are wise and understand much of tribute,indeed. :-*
You are wise and understand much of tribute,indeed. :-*
Re: In praise of women
30th Jul 2014 6:20pm
Wowzers ur saucy as hell here n I'm loving it!
Of course it'd be better in person! Besides u may
Need an assistant to aid you in holding her still! Lol
Of course it'd be better in person! Besides u may
Need an assistant to aid you in holding her still! Lol
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Thank you very much, Erotic Ninja, luv :-* ~
Your offer is generous and certainly in another time and place, say To bind or be bound, is most welcome indeed. ;-)
However, here and now? I'll decline, luv. :-* Be content now to see...
Your offer is generous and certainly in another time and place, say To bind or be bound, is most welcome indeed. ;-)
However, here and now? I'll decline, luv. :-* Be content now to see...
Re: In praise of women
30th Jul 2014 9:46pm
They, above have said it all Savaja...you're a wild wild animal....
What more can I say?
Oh yeah....add me to your lust, I mean lust, my god I'm trying to type list....there, got it.... lol...of admirers... ;)
What more can I say?
Oh yeah....add me to your lust, I mean lust, my god I'm trying to type list....there, got it.... lol...of admirers... ;)
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re: Re: In praise of women
31st Jul 2014 2:28am
Ahhh, GeniusGirl, luv :-* ~
I can't really say I'm distraught whatsoever by your er, digital distraction.
Ever since you started reclaiming words and gaining SuperBITCHpowers, well, really, then erotica and sex museums, clitoral truth, bike chains/bdsm, melting tenderness, and the coup d'etat of rain?
There really IS only so much self-restraint I have, luv. ;-)
Hmmm...I think I will add you to my lust...
I can't really say I'm distraught whatsoever by your er, digital distraction.
Ever since you started reclaiming words and gaining SuperBITCHpowers, well, really, then erotica and sex museums, clitoral truth, bike chains/bdsm, melting tenderness, and the coup d'etat of rain?
There really IS only so much self-restraint I have, luv. ;-)
Hmmm...I think I will add you to my lust...
Re: In praise of women
31st Jul 2014 7:39am
Steamy, Savaja.
In a word, labialicious.
Yes, a conjured contrivance, but fitting. :)
In a word, labialicious.
Yes, a conjured contrivance, but fitting. :)
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re: Re: In praise of women
31st Jul 2014 1:51pm
Why, thank you, VegasPoet, luv! :-*
I am honored, indeed, that you have coined a word to celebrate this art! :-*
I am honored, indeed, that you have coined a word to celebrate this art! :-*
Re: In praise of women
1st Aug 2014 7:58am
There is nothing missing in this erotic masterpiece. You do remind me of a Tantric Goddess in this piece. Delicious imagery...I'm with Katja in regard "rounded thighs splayed" Magnificent!
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Thank you very much, Gahddess_Worship, luv :-*! I am exceedingly glad that you, so intricately connected to the Goddess, and who puts forth such lushly glowing visions of Her feminine aspect, found the imagery within delicious and this an erotic masterpiece.
Thank you, again, for such abundant praise, luv :-*.
Thank you, again, for such abundant praise, luv :-*.
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2nd Aug 2014 7:55pm
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2nd Aug 2014 7:59pm
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2nd Aug 2014 10:03pm
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2nd Aug 2014 11:45pm
Thank you very much, xmar82, luv :-*. I do appreciate your concurrence as I believe you do savor women. :-*
Re: In praise of women
4th Aug 2014 5:17am
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4th Aug 2014 5:37am
Yes, you did, blackhyde, luv :-*. And, better that you came, than didn't come at all, why that would pall and not be fun at all. ;-)
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4th Aug 2014 2:10pm