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Euphoria
I think of you and my head spins, I ache
wishing to seek nirvana, wanting to please
imagining your intoxicating smell and flavor
thoughts of your taste brings me to my knees
Your power controls my carnal rapture
the touch from your fingers, your lips
feeling your tongue slide across my skin
the heat as you plunge between my hips
Mutual gratification provides euphoria
the ecstasy we share as our bodies unite
sweet friction stimulates insatiable desire
primal need drives our climaxes to a new height
wishing to seek nirvana, wanting to please
imagining your intoxicating smell and flavor
thoughts of your taste brings me to my knees
Your power controls my carnal rapture
the touch from your fingers, your lips
feeling your tongue slide across my skin
the heat as you plunge between my hips
Mutual gratification provides euphoria
the ecstasy we share as our bodies unite
sweet friction stimulates insatiable desire
primal need drives our climaxes to a new height
Published 22nd Jul 2014
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22nd Jul 2014 4:49am
Desire is such a mystery. It is totally without logic and full of surprises. It seems a force outside of us. In a sense, we can never know its true face. Your poem is a masterful, brief study of this elusive matrix of erotic behavior.
22nd Jul 2014 4:53am
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22nd Jul 2014 6:33am
The built up anticipation is so intense that at the conclusion I find myself craving more!
22nd Jul 2014 5:19pm
22nd Jul 2014 10:07am
There's something about a lover's scent that can be addictive - you captured that urgency well here ...
22nd Jul 2014 5:19pm
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Anonymous
22nd Jul 2014 8:44pm
Deborahlee3313 ,
When properly applied, the senses can be the most powerful love potion of all and your application of them is right on target! Enjoyed!
tornado
When properly applied, the senses can be the most powerful love potion of all and your application of them is right on target! Enjoyed!
tornado
29th Jul 2014 2:26am
22nd Jul 2014 10:24pm
i hanker
have hankered
and all my life will hanker
they say bank
on a hamper
rolled in
69 69 69
then no more
hamper nor hanker
you are a wonderful poet
all say
again
but alas send me messages
my dull actions
remain
alas in vain
have hankered
and all my life will hanker
they say bank
on a hamper
rolled in
69 69 69
then no more
hamper nor hanker
you are a wonderful poet
all say
again
but alas send me messages
my dull actions
remain
alas in vain
29th Jul 2014 2:27am
28th Jul 2014 11:28pm
There's an underlying intensity here as though we are watching the scenes play out, eagerly awaiting the climax. Enjoyed.
29th Jul 2014 3:17am
