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drink from my garden
lips smooth as satin
sun kissed flesh
past bare hills
to my garden delight
there's something in
my bones only he owns
with petals unfolded
he drinks from me
my milk and honey
sun kissed flesh
past bare hills
to my garden delight
there's something in
my bones only he owns
with petals unfolded
he drinks from me
my milk and honey
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Re: drink from my garden
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13th Jul 2014 1:58pm
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Re: drink from my garden
13th Jul 2014 9:33pm
Sensual, erotic and paints a vivid picture in my mind. Luscious write Tommie. Enjoyed it.
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13th Jul 2014 11:56pm
Sensual perfection Tommie ... because every garden needs the right caretaker
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14th Jul 2014 00:38am
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Tommie, your imagery is so very hunger inducing, thirst producing...luscious indeed.
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17th Jul 2014 2:26pm
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16th Jul 2014 9:23pm
welcum the trainee do read
ur frnd jt asked me to not post on ur lovely ones did you ask him to say so
ur frnd jt asked me to not post on ur lovely ones did you ask him to say so
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Re: drink from my garden
19th Jul 2014 7:55am
So beautiful yet sensuous and every word had beautiful imagery. I loved it very much
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19th Jul 2014 12:16pm
Re: drink from my garden
21st Jul 2014 9:44pm
this appears exclusive for someone special i dare not intrude but the garden is tempting luscious juicy and sounds lovely as we from petals eat off our lips nectar delivered in ecstasy so lovely powerfully and sweet but of course exclusively
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Re: drink from my garden
Anonymous
1st Aug 2014 6:33pm
Really, really beautiful...
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1st Aug 2014 6:49pm