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The Rain

God is in the water
he watches us through the rain
he lives with in all of us
and lets my mind
and world
be sane

He's the care between two creatures
the joy one brings to others
patience and tolerance some of his features
and love between life's brothers

Water is life
life is for living
living is caring
and caring is sharing
in the experience of life.
Written by Duncan (Duncan Alexander)
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