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he says, she says
he tells her she's pretty
and dirty in all the good ways
she tells him he's handsome
and rough in all the right places
there's a balance in their chaos
their world, their rules
and dirty in all the good ways
she tells him he's handsome
and rough in all the right places
there's a balance in their chaos
their world, their rules
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6th Jul 2014 00:19am
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Anonymous
6th Jul 2014 00:39am
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6th Jul 2014 1:16am
You're too kind Jack.
You know how to make a girl shine from the inside out.
Thank you for your wonderful comment. ;)
You know how to make a girl shine from the inside out.
Thank you for your wonderful comment. ;)
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6th Jul 2014 1:37am
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6th Jul 2014 3:06am
I appreciate you reading me Savaja. Thank you for your wonderful comment. :)
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6th Jul 2014 5:51am
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6th Jul 2014 8:15pm
The realizations of being compatible. You write, I read! Works for me. Enjoyed.
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Anonymous
1st Aug 2014 6:32pm
Great balance in this one, fun to read :)
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1st Aug 2014 6:46pm