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Please?
I enjoy you soft
Flaccid
Slipping between my lips
So delicately
Caressing
Your soft skin
To rigidity
Growing before my eyes
Inside my mouth
To polished marble
I revel even more
In the taste of you
Your flesh
Salty
Slick
If I am fortunate
You have blessed me
With copious amounts
Of precum
That glorious elixir
You exude
In preparation
I must admit here
I am torn
Between
The taste of you like this
and
The taste of you after you have been inside me
I confess
I am greedy
I want them both
Further
(and here's a naughty thing)
I want the taste of orgasm as well.
Yes. Yours. Mine. Ours. Oblige me, please?
Flaccid
Slipping between my lips
So delicately
Caressing
Your soft skin
To rigidity
Growing before my eyes
Inside my mouth
To polished marble
I revel even more
In the taste of you
Your flesh
Salty
Slick
If I am fortunate
You have blessed me
With copious amounts
Of precum
That glorious elixir
You exude
In preparation
I must admit here
I am torn
Between
The taste of you like this
and
The taste of you after you have been inside me
I confess
I am greedy
I want them both
Further
(and here's a naughty thing)
I want the taste of orgasm as well.
Yes. Yours. Mine. Ours. Oblige me, please?
Published 2nd Jul 2014
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2nd Jul 2014 11:52pm
Sweet write
Ironically I posted a poem on this site entitled "Precum" about this subject
Ironically I posted a poem on this site entitled "Precum" about this subject
3rd Jul 2014 00:35am
Thank you, PoetSpeak. It took me a while to find that particular poem of yours, but I did. It's short and sweetly decadent as many of your poems are. You do seem to run the gamut in terms of poetic exploration. You are fearless, which is admirable.
3rd Jul 2014 00:39am
Thx
I don't have much shame. This is the kind of place where you can let it all hang out, so I do ...
:)
I don't have much shame. This is the kind of place where you can let it all hang out, so I do ...
:)
3rd Jul 2014 3:27am
Well since u were so very sweet to ask
Here: open up, n drink all you want! lol
Very naughty n super hot spill my dear :) lol
Here: open up, n drink all you want! lol
Very naughty n super hot spill my dear :) lol
3rd Jul 2014 4:57am
Ahhhh. Such ambrosia, Poetikmind. Thank you for the invitation. I'll keep that in mind... ;-)
3rd Jul 2014 4:01am
slow & steady is the way to the orgasmic pinnacle. it's so nice to come close several times before hitting the peak...
3rd Jul 2014 5:01am
JohnFeddeler, I like the way you think. I do know I'm asking a lot in this piece... ;-)
3rd Jul 2014 7:42am
"I want the taste of orgasm as well.
Yes. Yours. Mine. Ours. Oblige me, please?"
what a gloriously sensual conclusion to this sexy piece. tres belle, Savaja
Yes. Yours. Mine. Ours. Oblige me, please?"
what a gloriously sensual conclusion to this sexy piece. tres belle, Savaja
3rd Jul 2014 8:18am
Merci beaucoup, winter (_shadoe_). You are generous in your praise, glorious vixen; I've read that recent, wondrous poem of yours and am re-reading and re-reading until I can form a coherent comment worthy of it. :-*
4th Jul 2014 3:38am
4th Jul 2014 3:42am
Why, thank you, VegasPoet. I am always happy to encourage lascivious thoughts. ;-) And acts. :-p
4th Jul 2014 2:42pm
precum is like please cummm
and ur first at enjoying a flaccid piece
enamours me
all wait till it hardens
and ur love of precum can your depth fathom
well done so many have read and relished
ur P R E CUMMMMMMMMM
well done
and ur first at enjoying a flaccid piece
enamours me
all wait till it hardens
and ur love of precum can your depth fathom
well done so many have read and relished
ur P R E CUMMMMMMMMM
well done
4th Jul 2014 11:55pm
Thank you, again. I endeavor to keep pace with your convolutions, but confess your serpentine course ofttimes proves elusive to me, luv. My mind feels prepared but meagerly to decipher such encoded mystery.
This time, however, I believe you've penned a small ode in tribute to the success of this piece of poetry and I am honored dually: by the tribute to the success and by your tribute reiterating words from my poem. Thank you, luv. :-*
This time, however, I believe you've penned a small ode in tribute to the success of this piece of poetry and I am honored dually: by the tribute to the success and by your tribute reiterating words from my poem. Thank you, luv. :-*
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6th Jul 2014 11:03am
Why, thank you, Fenom (DiscipleofLife). I rather like the way you put that, like a surfeit of provocation is almost too naughty. :-* How delicious you are, luv!
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28th Aug 2014 5:53am
The only thing missing is the scent :) I love the smile in your voice...you are having fun and that makes me happy.
28th Aug 2014 12:53pm
Gahddess_Worship, luv :-* ~
I will have to go back and listen to this one again. If there's a smile in my voice, it's one of dreamy ecstasy. I truly love this and this poem is an expression of that joy for me. :-*
Thank you, luv, for your wonderful comments. You always, invariably cause me to feel quite marvelous, you know. :-* You are the veriest sweet.
I will have to go back and listen to this one again. If there's a smile in my voice, it's one of dreamy ecstasy. I truly love this and this poem is an expression of that joy for me. :-*
Thank you, luv, for your wonderful comments. You always, invariably cause me to feel quite marvelous, you know. :-* You are the veriest sweet.
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