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Summer Still Life Sexuality
Sitting in the park
Watching the parade
In human form
A still life sexuality
Vibrates
Beauty, aura, fulfillment
Stream in summer's clutch
Your imagination working hard
Pulsating
You can't have what you want
Because you want to claim all
Summer rocks your world
Collects your streaming desires
Visually
Then it's time to leave
Reality beckons you elsewhere
You'll be back though
Sensual as the day is long
Calling
Watching the parade
In human form
A still life sexuality
Vibrates
Beauty, aura, fulfillment
Stream in summer's clutch
Your imagination working hard
Pulsating
You can't have what you want
Because you want to claim all
Summer rocks your world
Collects your streaming desires
Visually
Then it's time to leave
Reality beckons you elsewhere
You'll be back though
Sensual as the day is long
Calling
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Re: Summer Still Life Sexuality
30th Jun 2014 6:38pm
Re: Summer Still Life Sexuality
Anonymous
30th Jun 2014 6:41pm
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re: Re: Summer Still Life Sexuality
30th Jun 2014 6:46pm
Thx Jack
this one had been in my head for awhile
A work in progress always ..
this one had been in my head for awhile
A work in progress always ..
Re: Summer Still Life Sexuality
30th Jun 2014 6:43pm
Re: Summer Still Life Sexuality
30th Jun 2014 7:27pm
Re: Summer Still Life Sexuality
Anonymous
30th Jun 2014 7:30pm
Very nice PS, very nice indeed
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re: Re: Summer Still Life Sexuality
30th Jun 2014 7:33pm
Re: Summer Still Life Sexuality
30th Jun 2014 7:32pm
Thank you Scarlett
Yes def my style but trying oh so hard to state my point without my usual graphic approaches.
Yes def my style but trying oh so hard to state my point without my usual graphic approaches.
Re: Summer Still Life Sexuality
30th Jun 2014 9:27pm
perfect poet.....
can see what you're getting at....
thanks for the example.....
you definitely are the universal poet.... :)
can see what you're getting at....
thanks for the example.....
you definitely are the universal poet.... :)
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Re: Summer Still Life Sexuality
Yes, you can use this as an example
This could have been very graphic but I like the reader to get a sensual message without what I call "play by play overt sexual tones" of course there is a time and a place for that too. Lord knows I've written hundreds of them. But I'm most proud of my sensual ink when I dance around the sex rather than describe it in detail.
Thx for the reading list add, I worked on this one for awhile.
xx
This could have been very graphic but I like the reader to get a sensual message without what I call "play by play overt sexual tones" of course there is a time and a place for that too. Lord knows I've written hundreds of them. But I'm most proud of my sensual ink when I dance around the sex rather than describe it in detail.
Thx for the reading list add, I worked on this one for awhile.
xx
Re: Summer Still Life Sexuality
30th Jun 2014 9:57pm
This piece reads like a warm and peaceful still life and if that is what you wanted to deliver, you did it perfectly.
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Re: Summer Still Life Sexuality
30th Jun 2014 10:12pm
Yes, a I was going for something very reflective within the moment.
Thx so much for letting me know it worked
xx
Thx so much for letting me know it worked
xx