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Me
Rubber soles on my stilettos,
Water on my dying roses,
Sunshine on my darkest days...
You feed me...
Iron on my wrinkled soul,
Rain on my thirsty lips,
See thru me with tantalizing eyes...
You feel me?
Melt on me, sink into my pores,
Take me thru all seasons,
All at once..
Forecast me.
Make war within,
Shoot and kill it..
Eruptions as I shake..
You took me.
Water on my dying roses,
Sunshine on my darkest days...
You feed me...
Iron on my wrinkled soul,
Rain on my thirsty lips,
See thru me with tantalizing eyes...
You feel me?
Melt on me, sink into my pores,
Take me thru all seasons,
All at once..
Forecast me.
Make war within,
Shoot and kill it..
Eruptions as I shake..
You took me.
Published 23rd Apr 2014
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23rd Apr 2014 4:16am
This is a unique poem.The imagery is ultra new, the feelings seamless. I got the feeling you really mean what you're saying.
23rd Apr 2014 4:20am
30th Jan 2019 8:26pm
Incredibly vivid, sensual, beautiful, and creatively written. Fantastic poem, Pashion, your name is befitting!
Great work :)
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Great work :)
- Newbeginnings
