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Let me Inside
Let me touch you with finger tips of my thoughts
nestled within the creases of your heat
caressing the bud of your inner desires
blooming wet petals as they open for much need
hear me as gripping hands hold you
within the depth of your soul contorting
My hands whispering to your lusting body
taking your shape to my forming
Visualize my strength from your blind eyes
gliding your wet brush onto my skin
as your canvas wraps around mine
taste the sultry flavors of my sin
Feel my loves embrace soft as mature leather
its hold unbreakable infused with my trust
rage filled passion cutting your fears
sweet nectar igniting my carnal lust
My fire throbbing desperately seeking your nectar
your essence the wind fueling my flame
I shiver to the wet kiss of your lips
as my shaft glides through slit untamed
exposed to my elicit thoughts of granite
I soak into the glory of your folds
inch by inch you clinch to my thickness
forming to the depth that I hold
Opening for me your arch begins to lift
"That is right my sweet angel
Let me inside
Let me set you free"
nestled within the creases of your heat
caressing the bud of your inner desires
blooming wet petals as they open for much need
hear me as gripping hands hold you
within the depth of your soul contorting
My hands whispering to your lusting body
taking your shape to my forming
Visualize my strength from your blind eyes
gliding your wet brush onto my skin
as your canvas wraps around mine
taste the sultry flavors of my sin
Feel my loves embrace soft as mature leather
its hold unbreakable infused with my trust
rage filled passion cutting your fears
sweet nectar igniting my carnal lust
My fire throbbing desperately seeking your nectar
your essence the wind fueling my flame
I shiver to the wet kiss of your lips
as my shaft glides through slit untamed
exposed to my elicit thoughts of granite
I soak into the glory of your folds
inch by inch you clinch to my thickness
forming to the depth that I hold
Opening for me your arch begins to lift
"That is right my sweet angel
Let me inside
Let me set you free"
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Re: Let me Inside
22nd Apr 2014 5:45pm
Whoa it's as if you made sweet love to flesh as well as the soul this is poetic, erotic genius Soul.. Wow is all I can say this is deep and sensually hot!!! with love and respect Crim :)
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22nd Apr 2014 6:28pm
Thank you lovely Crim, The mind, body and soul all crave attention and deserve such attention.
Re: Let me Inside
22nd Apr 2014 7:55pm
*swallows hard* goodness it feels like you're speaking directly to me... *I look around at all the other ladies in the room* hum.. okay.. submissively submitting to you... flesh awakens to intense arousals. Your ink melts me. Thank you, should I say Master? It seems appropriate:)
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re: Re: Let me Inside
22nd Apr 2014 8:47pm
My words indeed were meant for you, the one exposed at the end of my leash, The girl who woke within my lines, not the girl who melted away.
No greater compliment than to captivate, You are a rare gem, thank you
No greater compliment than to captivate, You are a rare gem, thank you
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22nd Apr 2014 8:44pm
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re: Re: Let me Inside
22nd Apr 2014 8:54pm
Thank you kind sir, humbled by your visits. Your comments are always great
Re: Let me Inside
22nd Apr 2014 8:49pm
Holy Purple!!! What a sexy sensual write. Shower time again I think. LOL!!! Beautiful piece. You just keep getting better. Mmmmmm! Xo :)
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22nd Apr 2014 8:53pm
Re: Let me Inside
22nd Apr 2014 11:21pm
mmmmmm I can close my eyes and picture this much as a voyeur would... on the outside but with perfect imagery.. very hot ink
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re: Re: Let me Inside
23rd Apr 2014 1:51am
What a great comment, To see images from someone's work is a high compliment, thank you
Re: Let me Inside
23rd Apr 2014 4:53am
You have been on an erotic roller coaster lately, and I'm so glad I'm along for the ride.
...third stanza was my favorite, so sensual...
Who wouldn't want to let you inside? Loved! Xo
...third stanza was my favorite, so sensual...
Who wouldn't want to let you inside? Loved! Xo
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23rd Apr 2014 1:29pm
Erotic Roller coaster...Hmmmmm Maybe a good title for a poem, gonna think about this one.
Thank you always
Thank you always
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4th Jun 2014 5:18pm
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re: Re: Let me Inside
5th Jun 2014 5:12pm
It is with great pleasure to offer the silver linings in which you prefer to mingle within.
Thank you for all your support and love
Thank you for all your support and love
Re: Let me Inside
29th Jul 2014 8:25pm
Mmmmm....u have such a way about u and the way u write. Never knew that words could corrupt a grl so.
Belle
Belle
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re: Re: Let me Inside
31st Jul 2014 1:04pm
Thank you Southern Belle, your words encourage me, to think I can do such with my words is still shocking to me.
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1st Aug 2014 8:32pm
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1st Aug 2014 11:14pm
DUP is my first affair with poetry, I have only discovered the power of words recently. I have been more of - let my actions speak for me - kind of guy, A man of few words. So I find this journey to be very enlightening as I do exciting. I believe it is making a better me.
Thank you hun
Thank you hun