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Would you please let me be, please
Having been chosen at random,
not for my looks or brains
but only for your need of orifices
as well as for nourishing
your megalomaniac ego
makes me loathe you
more than you can ever imagine
since the only thing you can think of
is your seed in my bed,
theres no perception beyond that.
So, would you please
not for my looks or brains
but only for your need of orifices
as well as for nourishing
your megalomaniac ego
makes me loathe you
more than you can ever imagine
since the only thing you can think of
is your seed in my bed,
theres no perception beyond that.
So, would you please
Published 19th Apr 2014
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19th Apr 2014 7:21pm
19th Apr 2014 8:16pm
Nice to say so :-. Thank you very much, sharneindium, for stopping by and reading me!
19th Apr 2014 8:23pm
20th Apr 2014 9:00pm
:-) Thanks, Paul. Dull ... I don't know. But certainly not as attentive as a woman might expect.
19th Apr 2014 8:36pm
20th Apr 2014 9:05pm
I love comments I don't get fully :-). A reason to look up and learn new things. But the tenor is clear to me. Thank you, Speak!
Anonymous
19th Apr 2014 9:25pm
...sod off? Or words of that ilk? I'm glad you were on the verge of telling him where to get off. Short but sweet & to the point; Let me be.
20th Apr 2014 9:20pm
You got the meaning, Hydrodgones :-)! I tguess I have to say good-bye to him. And from you I learned "to sod off" and "of that ilk". Thanks for that and your kind comment!
19th Apr 2014 11:38pm
20th Apr 2014 9:22pm
Haha! Yes, could be an invitation of any kind, right? And I'm torn between various possibilities, sigh.
20th Apr 2014 00:34am
was this written with a younger Warren Beatty or Donald Trump in mind? (joke) One of the moments when the pen can be so effective in highlighting delusions of grandeur.
20th Apr 2014 9:26pm
:-). Delusions of grandeur! Whoa! Fabulous expression which I really like! I do not have to look so far as to Warren Beatty or Donald Trump, sadly.
21st Apr 2014 2:16am
That expression stuck in my head when Han Solo, just released from the carbonite, says that to Princess Leia in Return Of The Jedi, about Luke becoming a Jedi Knight. I have also heard historians use it to describe haughty generals.
22nd Apr 2014 10:56pm
I remember that scene ... but unfortunately I do not remember Han Solo's words although they fit :-). An expression I will always remember from now on.
20th Apr 2014 3:11am
you sensed that there was no affection. & you're being very polite in your anger...
20th Apr 2014 9:29pm
There is affection but also a kind of hurting indifference. That HAS to be okay and yet, and yet ... I was too polite, huh? Next time I'll try harder to express my anger :-). Thank you, John!
20th Apr 2014 6:54am
20th Apr 2014 9:31pm
Anonymous
20th Apr 2014 7:46am
Limits are not enough for the limited...
20th Apr 2014 9:33pm
Though finding happiness within the limits is possible. But there's never enough, I can tell.
21st Apr 2014 1:08am
22nd Apr 2014 10:15pm
That's a very pretty and typical Britsh form for kicking someone's ass. So sweet. Get out of my garden :-). Like it so much!
23rd Apr 2014 1:43am
Love to see you here again, J.! Hope you're doing well! Thanks for stopping by and you surely know that my joy goes beyond your kind comment :-).
