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JUST SO U KNOW
The thought of your voice is like
Vinegar being poured into an open wound...
Your Name reminds me of gritted teeth and
nails on chalk boards...
A grating vexation to
my souls exsistance
Insufferable beast...
walking around in a mans skin...
Wearing empathetic faces like a halloween mask...
Wandering to & fro...
Seeking whom you may devour.....
and...
I know youre hungry....
since I cut your belly open and freed myself
when you tried to devour me....
See....
My heart...
Is NOBODY"S free meal....
My emotions....
were not designed to be licked
of the tips of claws like yours...
Nor my soul....
to be a blazing memory of sweetness
In YOUR mind....
Just knowing you think of me...
Makes me feel the need for
a sage bath....
You...
are NOTHING more than a two headed beast
hunting in circles
Chasing your pissy- ass tail
The only women you catch ...
are the ones who got lost...
and ended up there
somehwere near
your Hellacious crossroads....
Well...
Better THEM
than me....
As far as I'm concerned...
If you ate shit & died....
Thats Reason enough for me to throw
a party!!!!
Now ...
Hows THAT for
A bit of bitter reality
Vinegar being poured into an open wound...
Your Name reminds me of gritted teeth and
nails on chalk boards...
A grating vexation to
my souls exsistance
Insufferable beast...
walking around in a mans skin...
Wearing empathetic faces like a halloween mask...
Wandering to & fro...
Seeking whom you may devour.....
and...
I know youre hungry....
since I cut your belly open and freed myself
when you tried to devour me....
See....
My heart...
Is NOBODY"S free meal....
My emotions....
were not designed to be licked
of the tips of claws like yours...
Nor my soul....
to be a blazing memory of sweetness
In YOUR mind....
Just knowing you think of me...
Makes me feel the need for
a sage bath....
You...
are NOTHING more than a two headed beast
hunting in circles
Chasing your pissy- ass tail
The only women you catch ...
are the ones who got lost...
and ended up there
somehwere near
your Hellacious crossroads....
Well...
Better THEM
than me....
As far as I'm concerned...
If you ate shit & died....
Thats Reason enough for me to throw
a party!!!!
Now ...
Hows THAT for
A bit of bitter reality
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Re: JUST SO U KNOW
18th Apr 2014 6:27am
Oh man... Sounds like u dated a red head.
Really liked the intro/ first 4 paragraphs!
Really liked the intro/ first 4 paragraphs!
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re: Re: JUST SO U KNOW
18th Apr 2014 6:30am
thanks man...
I dated an arrogant manipulator....UGH!
MY BADD!!
thanks for reading!
FIre
I dated an arrogant manipulator....UGH!
MY BADD!!
thanks for reading!
FIre
Re: JUST SO U KNOW
18th Apr 2014 6:30am
Beautiful Fire you're expressing in potent waves dear lady.. love this deadly blow to the two headed beast.. with love Crim :)
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re: Re: JUST SO U KNOW
18th Apr 2014 10:16pm
thank u Lady Crim!
I much appreciate your pressence on my pages....
XOXO
Fire
I much appreciate your pressence on my pages....
XOXO
Fire
Re: JUST SO U KNOW
18th Apr 2014 6:31am
DAMN!! I wouldn't want to get you angry... :)
Absolutely love the rage your pen displayed. Felt the anger trapped in you, and you released it beautifully,Fire. Xo
Absolutely love the rage your pen displayed. Felt the anger trapped in you, and you released it beautifully,Fire. Xo
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18th Apr 2014 10:31pm
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18th Apr 2014 2:08pm
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Re: JUST SO U KNOW
18th Apr 2014 2:37pm
love this Fire!!!Excellent Ink...
"A grating vexation to
my souls exsistance" sums it all up wonderfully!
"A grating vexation to
my souls exsistance" sums it all up wonderfully!
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re: Re: JUST SO U KNOW
18th Apr 2014 10:32pm
Re: JUST SO U KNOW
19th Apr 2014 2:27am
Lovely tells the person about himself, exposing his guise before his eyes glad u got away
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19th Apr 2014 4:21am
Re: JUST SO U KNOW
19th Apr 2014 8:26pm
Feeding on the Devourer LOL!!
Who's licking their claws now!
Great write Fire!
much love!
Who's licking their claws now!
Great write Fire!
much love!
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re: Re: JUST SO U KNOW
22nd Apr 2014 10:31pm
Re: JUST SO U KNOW
30th Apr 2014 11:07pm
Fire)))))
Are you sure we ain't hating the same MAN?!
Good grief but your words sound like my thoughts!!!
Nicely done darling, sounds like You are almost there, almost completely mentally ready to
moved on for good and not have to need to write about it anymore. You are almost there honey keep going forward!
Love this!
Zazzles Xo
Are you sure we ain't hating the same MAN?!
Good grief but your words sound like my thoughts!!!
Nicely done darling, sounds like You are almost there, almost completely mentally ready to
moved on for good and not have to need to write about it anymore. You are almost there honey keep going forward!
Love this!
Zazzles Xo
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re: Re: JUST SO U KNOW
30th Apr 2014 11:15pm
THANK U sooooo MUCH zAZZ... ( LOVE UR NAME)
i APPRECIATE YOUR KIND WORDS OF SOOTHING N WISDOM
AND I DO HAVE ONE MORE POEM IN ME ABOUT THIS....
IM WRITING IT TODAY
XOXO
FIRE
i APPRECIATE YOUR KIND WORDS OF SOOTHING N WISDOM
AND I DO HAVE ONE MORE POEM IN ME ABOUT THIS....
IM WRITING IT TODAY
XOXO
FIRE
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1st May 2014 00:37am
lol my name derives from the big bang theory
"Sheldon" named one of his cats Zazzles :D
And yes let it out darling, let it rip!
Zazzles
"Sheldon" named one of his cats Zazzles :D
And yes let it out darling, let it rip!
Zazzles
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Re: JUST SO U KNOW
1st May 2014 1:48am
re: Re: JUST SO U KNOW
1st May 2014 2:09am
thank YOU Atarliss...
I appreicate you stopping by to read my work!
XOXO
Fire
I appreicate you stopping by to read my work!
XOXO
Fire