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Little Brother
The devil is unkind
He stole my lunchbox from me
Can't bother playing nice
For one moment
He's all apologies
Now with wings confiscated
Brooding from a throne made of bone
Maybe I'll see you around
Paradise lost
No wonder you burn
Upside down cross in bloom
Now listen close
That's why you eat alone
You struck our father so long ago
Home is looking nice
I like the lake of fire feature
A hell of an investment
Fits you nicely
So it's Satan now
You never were creative
Tell Behemoth I said come over
We'll have lunch
Paradise lost
No wonder you burn
Upside down cross in bloom
Now listen close
That's why you eat alone
You struck our father so long ago
Your lover is gross
Zombie queen ain't that hot
No comparison to mine
Maybe next time
Father isn't pleased
You didn't ask for permission
But I'll be your best man
Just this one time
Paradise lost
No wonder you burn
Upside down cross in bloom
Now listen close
That's why you eat alone
You struck our father so long ago
He stole my lunchbox from me
Can't bother playing nice
For one moment
He's all apologies
Now with wings confiscated
Brooding from a throne made of bone
Maybe I'll see you around
Paradise lost
No wonder you burn
Upside down cross in bloom
Now listen close
That's why you eat alone
You struck our father so long ago
Home is looking nice
I like the lake of fire feature
A hell of an investment
Fits you nicely
So it's Satan now
You never were creative
Tell Behemoth I said come over
We'll have lunch
Paradise lost
No wonder you burn
Upside down cross in bloom
Now listen close
That's why you eat alone
You struck our father so long ago
Your lover is gross
Zombie queen ain't that hot
No comparison to mine
Maybe next time
Father isn't pleased
You didn't ask for permission
But I'll be your best man
Just this one time
Paradise lost
No wonder you burn
Upside down cross in bloom
Now listen close
That's why you eat alone
You struck our father so long ago
Published 18th Apr 2014
| Edited 2nd Jun 2014
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21st Apr 2014 7:24pm
This is really well written, and very expressive. I felt like it was inspired a little from Kurt Cobain (of the band Nirvana, for those who don't know whom I'm talking about).
I did notice this line though, "Father isn't please." Was there supposed to be a 'D' at the end of please though, to make it pleased? Just curious.
Keep up the great work.
I did notice this line though, "Father isn't please." Was there supposed to be a 'D' at the end of please though, to make it pleased? Just curious.
Keep up the great work.
