lonely riding

Concise and effective... a good write

thx thx.. this is always a touch subject matter for me..

I've heard of addiction referred to as the monkey - beast - demon - devil ...

... Dragon is a first and an excellent word choice juxtaposed against the idea of a saddle to ride it ...

... Definitive ink!

LSP

would love to take credit for the dragon reference but opiates grip goes back hundreds of year.. thanks for the kindness..

i like the last line, the need is always new.
beyond that, and the idea of the commonly used phrase, chasing the dragon,

it didnt really catch me.

x

if it didn't catch you.. then may i applaud you for not living in the world of opiates addiction..  but to those of us who live by its grip every inhale, every ingestion, every injection is a new ride to come crashing down from..

lol im only talking about ur poem, not the 2 strips of morphine and a bottle of wine breakfast life style.

no need to spike ur britles, im just here to provide my view on the poetry u left open for the world to view.

if u cant handle that, then leave.
id like u to learn to.

x

Wouldn't have marked this write for commenting if I didn't wish to receive feedback was offering insight to to my vantage.. I welcome all equally with applause..

good.

i dont really look to be fair, so im glad/ i hope i didnt upset u, as i seemed to.

all the best

xx