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I Want U Baby.....
"....a little after 1:30, something in the way she spoke, a smoldering flame"
I want you.......
every moment,
every hour
every day
I want you
we can talk about work
or we can talk about nothing at all
we can debate the existentialist view of life
talk about stocks and bonds
their rise and fall......
….but invariably
the words always give in to
feelings
sensations,
elation
arousal,
nervous palpitations
incessant tingling
sensual erotic desire
touching you burns like fire
like a moth to a flame
I must surrender my soul,
this regal warrior aspires to give all control
to you.....
…..damn, how badly I want you
and I want to
taste you
intimately
I want to be your sun
ripen your fruit
I want to till your fertile soil
allowing my *tool*
to get down to the very root....
...of the restlessness growing
there between your
thick mahogany thighs
I want to be your drug
I want to get you high
Squirting , exploding
splashing , oozing
fire, mutual desire
friction, ignition
release...a kaleidescope
of exotic delights
...the ferociousness in the way we make love tonight
the twaining of our flesh
we are one, no longer two
letting me live inside your love
you're my air, you are my food....
shapely brown thighs,
legs wrapped around my waist
nothing left to be desired
medicine for my sexual healing
You are my reason for being....
…..small talking
spirit reaching
holding on tightly
giving her all,
always believing
touching me right now
as we speak....whispering
“….I want you now "
Published 14th Apr 2014
| Edited 15th Apr 2014
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15th Apr 2014 1:52am
I love the urgency in the beginning and you had this really cool build going on in the rhythm. It fell apart a little in the 8th full stanza is my only criticism, but, damn, you should have a warning on this, like "make sure your man isn't out of town." This is super hot.
15th Apr 2014 5:35am
....I felt the same rhythmic detachment there; made a revision. Hope it's better : )
15th Apr 2014 3:46am
15th Apr 2014 5:35am
"we can talk about work
or we can talk about nothing at all
we can debate the existentialist view of life
talk about stocks and bonds
their rise and fall......
….but invariably
the words always give in to
feelings
sensations,
elation
arousal,
nervous palpitations
incessant tingling
sensual erotic desire"
^^^^^ these two stanzas are remedies for relationships, where a conversation that covers everything, ending with a moment of deep yearning that leaves your body screaming, “I want you baby”. Teaspoon of this everyday is all you need.. Xoxo
or we can talk about nothing at all
we can debate the existentialist view of life
talk about stocks and bonds
their rise and fall......
….but invariably
the words always give in to
feelings
sensations,
elation
arousal,
nervous palpitations
incessant tingling
sensual erotic desire"
^^^^^ these two stanzas are remedies for relationships, where a conversation that covers everything, ending with a moment of deep yearning that leaves your body screaming, “I want you baby”. Teaspoon of this everyday is all you need.. Xoxo
7:00 am Tuesday morning, "Rain" is pouring heavily upon my world and my heart...."because I'm Happy" : )
So glad that you know the meaning of my message. Letting the one that you love know of your love in small ways.....everyday. Keeping that fire alive : )
#iblesstherains
So glad that you know the meaning of my message. Letting the one that you love know of your love in small ways.....everyday. Keeping that fire alive : )
#iblesstherains
