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"Mascara"
Women are aware
of this sorry condition
Most males and mascara
share a common trait
Boys stop here
read no further
You'll just shrug
and nurse your denial
Note, the term 'Boys'
Real men may wish to study
what I am about to reveal
For a genuine man will agree
and know he can improve
The two are much alike
due to this simple truth
Both typically run
at the first sign of emotion
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Re: "Mascara"
11th Apr 2014 6:11pm
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11th Apr 2014 6:24pm
Thank you, Lovely Lady.
Some will agree, others shall deny and deceive themselves.
Some will agree, others shall deny and deceive themselves.
Re: "Mascara"
11th Apr 2014 6:15pm
Working my mind to think here on this one. Your words bare much truth. Run and hide from a hint of feeling. Never to find what they truly look for cause they turn their heart off. Sorry.....just rattling. LOL!!! Enjoyed as usual. :)
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re: Re: "Mascara"
11th Apr 2014 6:30pm
Sweet flowergirl, thank you.
Rattle on. I'm happy to listen. :)
Nature teaches, we all 'should' be good listeners. This is why we are given two ears, but one tongue. We 'should' listen twice more than we speak.
There should be some prose for this, methinks. :)
Rattle on. I'm happy to listen. :)
Nature teaches, we all 'should' be good listeners. This is why we are given two ears, but one tongue. We 'should' listen twice more than we speak.
There should be some prose for this, methinks. :)
Re: "Mascara"
Anonymous
11th Apr 2014 6:21pm
A genuine write, refreshing, creative and original!!! Well done....
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11th Apr 2014 6:32pm
Re: "Mascara"
11th Apr 2014 9:40pm
Informative, and although I'm a guy, I know what you're talking about. Straight though I am, my emotions and my desire to talk about them share a remarkable resemblance to that of females, and I have found that my male friends are NOT the people to go to when I want to talk about them. All the more reason to be straight, though, right? XD
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12th Apr 2014 11:05am
Re: "Mascara"
12th Apr 2014 6:07pm
Like the fact it differs between boys and men, good work, however women are not without faults neither. But good job :3
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12th Apr 2014 8:54pm
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