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daddy says.. i'm amazing
hello daddy..
happy valentines day
let us prey.
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..
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dear lord..
we come to you tonight
to feed daddies high..
he
likes it when i
pretend to cry
reply like i'm shy
or play like i'm five..
it
drives him crazy
says. "i'm amazing!"
lady.love.less
undressed to impress
perverse sweats
close to death
that's how we connect..
confess me your pleasure
as you sever my treasure..
daddy.
.
.
.
.
.
.
.
will you be
my valentine?
happy valentines day
let us prey.
.
.
.
.
..
.
dear lord..
we come to you tonight
to feed daddies high..
he
likes it when i
pretend to cry
reply like i'm shy
or play like i'm five..
it
drives him crazy
says. "i'm amazing!"
lady.love.less
undressed to impress
perverse sweats
close to death
that's how we connect..
confess me your pleasure
as you sever my treasure..
daddy.
.
.
.
.
.
.
.
will you be
my valentine?
Published 14th Feb 2014
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14th Feb 2014 2:23pm
Anonymous
15th Feb 2014 6:54am
Much agreed with Envoy and in-depth write.
15th Feb 2014 4:31pm
Mistress of Darkness I agree with John about you dad but you are so very beautiful and amazing.. much love Crim
9th Mar 2014 2:56am
2nd Jul 2014 5:32am
Hmmm. The lines are truly drawing Miss D. It's what's between the lines that's even more intriguing. Raw, edible ink. Thanks for that. :)
10th Nov 2014 9:29am
Reminds me of Freudian free word association used in therapy, which is not a bad thing...just unique.
19th Oct 2015 9:11pm
6th Mar 2017 10:42am
My father your father are demented and diabolical monstrosities, pathetic and weak mangy dogs. Written with class, beauty and great strength, Much Respect,
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