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Lovely Poison
My mistress I must please
Kneeling in front of her willingly
I give myself to her
On her thrown
Blood pooling all around
Dipping rivers over pale skin
Crawling forward kissing her feet
Lapping at the bloody rivers staining her skin
She grabs my hair
Yanking my head back
Looking into sights eyes
Eyes of no end
She pulls me toward her open legs
Poison seeps out of her woman
I can't help myself
Lapping up her womanly poison
Drinking deeply of her
Dying slowly and oh so painfully
Held up only by my hair
She laughs statically at my pain
Pushing me deeper into her death
I can't stop
My Queen needs pleased
Till death does take me
As her orgasm hits
Pouring poison into my gullet
I scream foaming at the mouth
Pain clenching my entrails
As she leans in
Licking her essence from my mouth
Drawing a blade across my throat
Sucking my life force from my bleeding throat
My Queen was pleased
And is done with me
Kneeling in front of her willingly
I give myself to her
On her thrown
Blood pooling all around
Dipping rivers over pale skin
Crawling forward kissing her feet
Lapping at the bloody rivers staining her skin
She grabs my hair
Yanking my head back
Looking into sights eyes
Eyes of no end
She pulls me toward her open legs
Poison seeps out of her woman
I can't help myself
Lapping up her womanly poison
Drinking deeply of her
Dying slowly and oh so painfully
Held up only by my hair
She laughs statically at my pain
Pushing me deeper into her death
I can't stop
My Queen needs pleased
Till death does take me
As her orgasm hits
Pouring poison into my gullet
I scream foaming at the mouth
Pain clenching my entrails
As she leans in
Licking her essence from my mouth
Drawing a blade across my throat
Sucking my life force from my bleeding throat
My Queen was pleased
And is done with me
Published 29th Dec 2013
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29th Dec 2013 9:47am
29th Dec 2013 9:32pm
I loved the way you blended the pain with love and pleasure, it's obvious your character still wants to please the other person despite the consequences of receiving the pain. it gave me that sick twisted thrill.
30th Dec 2013 9:03pm
30th Dec 2013 7:19pm
30th Dec 2013 9:03pm
1st Jan 2014 4:58am
"Pouring poison into my gullet
I scream foaming at the mouth
Pain clenching my entrails
" I loved the way you described it. Also getting to pleasure someone and getting pain in return sounds pretty amazing, cause I love the feeling of pain.
I scream foaming at the mouth
Pain clenching my entrails
" I loved the way you described it. Also getting to pleasure someone and getting pain in return sounds pretty amazing, cause I love the feeling of pain.
1st Jan 2014 5:00am
14th Jan 2014 8:31pm
the Queen must have been a fuckin lesbian
didn't play with urs
long strong pole handsome
you should have
shoved it in her mouth
and cum cum and cum
till she had tasted
ur sweet concentrated poison
didn't play with urs
long strong pole handsome
you should have
shoved it in her mouth
and cum cum and cum
till she had tasted
ur sweet concentrated poison
15th Jan 2014 3:35am
Hahahaha it is what she wanted. So I pleased her to her greatest and she rewarded me in the end.
15th Sep 2014 7:58am
The darkness of the human passion for pleasure.. ooh it gives me chills. I like it for allowing us to experience passion in this way. It's transparent. Other poems may show desire all light-heartedly, but sometimes it's fierce and ferocious and painful and dangerous and still pleasing nonetheless because it leads to pleasure.
