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~Sweet Sensual You~
You drift over my vivacious hips
whispering on my skin,tempting,
tasting, licking, our journey begins
Awaking every part of my delicate
flesh with your soft beautiful lips,
our bodies drift gracefully
You cover my valleys gently with
burning passion leaving nothing
untouched enjoying my hills
Entwined in your softness hearts
beat in rhythm with every caress
you give to me I give back to you
Our bodies tremble, quiver, shake
underneath you I rise and fall with
each thrust, probe, kiss you give
Lacing our hands together holding
such pleasures deep within our
sweet sensual union
whispering on my skin,tempting,
tasting, licking, our journey begins
Awaking every part of my delicate
flesh with your soft beautiful lips,
our bodies drift gracefully
You cover my valleys gently with
burning passion leaving nothing
untouched enjoying my hills
Entwined in your softness hearts
beat in rhythm with every caress
you give to me I give back to you
Our bodies tremble, quiver, shake
underneath you I rise and fall with
each thrust, probe, kiss you give
Lacing our hands together holding
such pleasures deep within our
sweet sensual union
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Re: ~Sweet Sensual You~
1st Jun 2013 3:13pm
'underneath you I rise and fall with
each thrust, probe, kiss you give ' mmmm well said,nice writing girl.
each thrust, probe, kiss you give ' mmmm well said,nice writing girl.
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1st Jun 2013 4:18pm
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Anonymous
1st Jun 2013 3:29pm
another spiral here tl
strider
strider
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1st Jun 2013 4:20pm
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1st Jun 2013 6:10pm
:-D...Just keep them coming, because I looove to read them, more then once actually!!!
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1st Jun 2013 6:49pm
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Anonymous
3rd Jun 2013 9:52pm
Sensual topography! This is a romantic piece. You might enjoy my "Worshiping Hill and Valley" poem. I know you'd enjoy "Too Hot For Sex" and "Wake Up Call." Sorry for the shameless plug but I just want you to have something of me.
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re: Re: ~Sweet Sensual You~
3rd Jun 2013 10:06pm
What else are you offering ...lol.;))
See, I'm hilarious too ;)
I am checking them out right now!
See, I'm hilarious too ;)
I am checking them out right now!
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Anonymous
3rd Jun 2013 11:17pm
I've got a rabbit's foot ;) Everything else is negotiable ;D
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Keep the rabbit's foot..for luck ;)
Begin the negotiation ;-D
Your poems are beautiful and sensual!!
Begin the negotiation ;-D
Your poems are beautiful and sensual!!
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Anonymous
4th Jun 2013 00:13am
Thank you...yeah I think if it were you I'd need the luck to survive...but it would be oh such a sweet passing ;) But if I'm rubbing the rabbit's foot I can't use my magic fingers elsewhere. Thank you for the kind words about my poetry...when you have more time, please read "The Mail Slot" it's my first attempt at erotic prose..."Lucky Lover's" pretty hot as well. I humble really. I just lie to hear from the erotic elite.
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4th Jun 2013 00:27am
Oh you would need EMT's on standby ...lmao!
You're very welcome, I thought your poems I read were
beautifully written!I will look at your other work!
You're very welcome, I thought your poems I read were
beautifully written!I will look at your other work!
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Anonymous
4th Jun 2013 3:11am
Or we can have them join in, maybe one of each, just so they're immediately on hand
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Anonymous
4th Jun 2013 3:58am
Okay Okay! Nobody really likes to share dessert anyway...I certainly don't...I lick the plate clean when nobody's watching ;)
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