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note to my submissive
i try to break you
bring you to your knees
you resist the thoughts
i say i need

i often try to make you show
the true submissive you bestow
you hold true to your beliefs
but never the less i know what you seek

you play the part but say you don,t like
the thought of me putting you down
for the wrongs you have done
you resist the facts that i want you to be
my sweet woman who listens to me

so just remember to do as your told
 never talk back or criticize me  
as you know what i will do
to take control of you


Written by carlg   View profile carlg
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Published 10th April 2013 9:20pm  
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