Advanced Search

a place to share your original poetry, prose and lyrics

note to my submissive
i try to break you
bring you to your knees
you resist the thoughts
i say i need

i often try to make you show
the true submissive you bestow
you hold true to your beliefs
but never the less i know what you seek

you play the part but say you don,t like
the thought of me putting you down
for the wrongs you have done
you resist the facts that i want you to be
my sweet woman who listens to me

so just remember to do as your told
 never talk back or criticize me  
as you know what i will do
to take control of you


Written by carlg   View profile carlg
like this?more poems by author
Published 10th April 2013 9:20pm  
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.

1 comment
426 reads
Commenting Preference: The author is looking for friendly feedback.

DISCUSS Do you have any tattoos, piercings, or unnatural hair color? - Today at 9:57am by Sparkle Razz (HollyDove)
COMPETITIONS Polyamory - Today at 8:28am by lanooz ( 1 2 )
COMPETITIONS Monsters of the Deep - Today at 7:59am by HadesRising
COMPETITIONS Four letter challenge! - Today at 7:37am by Missy DeMeanour. (Miss_Sub) ( 1 ... 426 427 428 429 430 )
DISCUSS Ask the person below you a question (2) - Today at 7:29am by Ms_Imperfect (Fallen_Angel_194) ( 1 ... 92 93 94 95 96 )
COMPETITIONS for the Love of the New - Today at 5:15am by Savaja
COMPETITIONS Is she pretty? ... Prettier than me? - Today at 4:09am by LobodeSanPedro
COMPETITIONS 6 Word Challenge - Today at 3:05am by LobodeSanPedro ( 1 ... 633 634 635 636 637 )
COMPETITIONS Talking To Yourself - Today at 2:52am by Rina (Vee)
POETRY NYC Flash Fiction ... Entry deadline - 4th July 2015 11:14pm by LobodeSanPedro
Help |Random Poems |Links |Link to Us |Recommend
Comments on this website are the responsibility of the user who posted them and are not the views of DU Poetry.