Love Poems Seeking Honest Critique
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Poetry about lost love, heartbreak and relationship problems
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Phony
directing my positivity mixed with reality
choosing genuine kindness over the phony
it's easy to be nice if it is returned to you
loving people and making an effort to see the good in people
even if after a while I thought they were worthless
for the sake of peace I put it aside and walk on
vengeance isn't in my hands and I'm grateful
not wanting to make the call
containing my hurt when others inflict harm with the intent to
all the while smiling at my face
I allow them to think I don't see their smile doesn't reach their...
choosing genuine kindness over the phony
it's easy to be nice if it is returned to you
loving people and making an effort to see the good in people
even if after a while I thought they were worthless
for the sake of peace I put it aside and walk on
vengeance isn't in my hands and I'm grateful
not wanting to make the call
containing my hurt when others inflict harm with the intent to
all the while smiling at my face
I allow them to think I don't see their smile doesn't reach their...
#friendship
#love
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5 Comments
tailor-made abrasion
#love
#obsession
#sadness
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4 Comments
Bored Women
arbitrary need defiled
in quiet's depths, I contemplate
dreams may come and go naturally
to stifle a feeling isn't in me
suppressing the feeling of anger...causes hurt
because society says it is dangerous we put it away
not able to vent I suppress a lot
releasing it to the universe when I can
holding things back when I can't
the rage simmers but I fight to control it
even when as a sensitive soul
people go out of their way to provoke it
my anger is not directed at them
but some people eat sorrow
other women will...
in quiet's depths, I contemplate
dreams may come and go naturally
to stifle a feeling isn't in me
suppressing the feeling of anger...causes hurt
because society says it is dangerous we put it away
not able to vent I suppress a lot
releasing it to the universe when I can
holding things back when I can't
the rage simmers but I fight to control it
even when as a sensitive soul
people go out of their way to provoke it
my anger is not directed at them
but some people eat sorrow
other women will...
#love
#women
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Every Heart Breaks
At one time or another
When love has played out
In a disappointing way
It's only natural to
Retreat in pain
Once in a while
Every Heart breaks
When love has played out
In a disappointing way
It's only natural to
Retreat in pain
Once in a while
Every Heart breaks
#breakup
#heartbroken
#hurt
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A sample of love
The sound of your voice brings me peace in my core
Pulls me back from the edge and Im lonely no more
Your eyes are like windows to the beauty i adore
Your heart has a tender kindness I have never felt before
You have a smile that can chase away the doubt and fear
The brightness of your essence makes me want you always near
The completeness of your love makes my insecurities disappear
The stormy clouds roll back and your love makes my skies clear
A simple touch from you sends a tingle from head to toe
A hug feels like home, I never...
Pulls me back from the edge and Im lonely no more
Your eyes are like windows to the beauty i adore
Your heart has a tender kindness I have never felt before
You have a smile that can chase away the doubt and fear
The brightness of your essence makes me want you always near
The completeness of your love makes my insecurities disappear
The stormy clouds roll back and your love makes my skies clear
A simple touch from you sends a tingle from head to toe
A hug feels like home, I never...
#beauty
#happiness
#hope #love
#hope #love
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Busted
Brought up on
Charges of loving you
It's true I love you
Through and through
There's no way
That I can win
It's official now
That the jury's in
Charges of loving you
It's true I love you
Through and through
There's no way
That I can win
It's official now
That the jury's in
#love
#lover
#prison
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in April
I'm getting up
with your give.
with your give.
#love
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When my hand touches the fire
I am
even I did not know
In my heart
I shed tears in pain
waving hands
I am
even I did not know
In my heart
I shed tears in pain
waving hands
My ears,
Someone
When they praise themselves
When gossiping who is not in front
Without much thought
Soul and body,
They are frozen
Like then.
even I did not know
In my heart
I shed tears in pain
waving hands
I am
even I did not know
In my heart
I shed tears in pain
waving hands
My ears,
Someone
When they praise themselves
When gossiping who is not in front
Without much thought
Soul and body,
They are frozen
Like then.
#love
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While Her Husband Was On A Business Trip
Ryder was soaking up
some sun and allowing
her secret love Selena
to rub some Hawaiian
Tropic on her bare back
while her husband David
was on a business trip.
some sun and allowing
her secret love Selena
to rub some Hawaiian
Tropic on her bare back
while her husband David
was on a business trip.
#deception
#fiction
#FreeVerse
#lesbian
#lover
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A Loving Commitment
Love is what we share
I trust her and she trusts me
Nothing else matters
I trust her and she trusts me
Nothing else matters
#haiku
#honesty
#love
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Immortal Companions With Understanding
intensity glows black until it shines white
so white as to attract all the night beings
a terrible golden shine they think will warm
it is my intent to love unconditionally
I literally burn with the passion to love
my intense feelings, honest with their presentation, stun most people
it throws them off guard my knowledge of them
it's not my intent to frighten or make people feel threatened
but I do, well, not really me but what I come with
since childhood the powers that be have guard me
leveling...
so white as to attract all the night beings
a terrible golden shine they think will warm
it is my intent to love unconditionally
I literally burn with the passion to love
my intense feelings, honest with their presentation, stun most people
it throws them off guard my knowledge of them
it's not my intent to frighten or make people feel threatened
but I do, well, not really me but what I come with
since childhood the powers that be have guard me
leveling...
#angels
#love
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Opposites
Love’s Hate's
gentle touch enraged strikes
embraces thrashes
the connection. the affection.
Love Hate
is wounded, is laughing,
scared, cruel,
and confused. and amused.
Opposites
stemming
from the same
place.
gentle touch enraged strikes
embraces thrashes
the connection. the affection.
Love Hate
is wounded, is laughing,
scared, cruel,
and confused. and amused.
Opposites
stemming
from the same
place.
#conflict
#relationships
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8 Comments
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