Love Poems Seeking Friendly Advice
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Poetry about lost love, heartbreak and relationship problems
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White Lie
#breakup
#heartbroken
#MovingOn
#sadness
#secrets
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The Hole
There’s a hole
Inside my soul
I’ve never told
So you don’t know
And it gets bigger every day
Ever since you walked away
I wanna say I want you back
I wanna say your love I lack
But I don’t want relationships
Cause of you I don’t want shit
I’m happier in my new hell
Did you know I wasn’t well?
Did you think I was a burden?
I’m not sure, I’m not quite certain
When you came into my life
I thought perhaps, this could be right
I wanted us to have a chance
So I gave in...
Inside my soul
I’ve never told
So you don’t know
And it gets bigger every day
Ever since you walked away
I wanna say I want you back
I wanna say your love I lack
But I don’t want relationships
Cause of you I don’t want shit
I’m happier in my new hell
Did you know I wasn’t well?
Did you think I was a burden?
I’m not sure, I’m not quite certain
When you came into my life
I thought perhaps, this could be right
I wanted us to have a chance
So I gave in...
#betrayal
#breakup
#heartbroken
#MovingOn
#sadness
38 reads
9 Comments
Always A Rose Tinted Veiw
when looking
in ocean blue eyes
want to drink thirstly waters
beyond my fill
yearning
like a lost puppy
inside doing actobatics
feeling akwardly
teenage again
where i am
totally ongue tied
sleep evades
as thoughts swirl
you bring
colourful visions
inspiring the artist's pallette
capturing summer's
vibrancy on canvas
beautiful flower
blooming petals
opening towards sunlight
white amonst red fields
beauty never tires
tthrough an...
in ocean blue eyes
want to drink thirstly waters
beyond my fill
yearning
like a lost puppy
inside doing actobatics
feeling akwardly
teenage again
where i am
totally ongue tied
sleep evades
as thoughts swirl
you bring
colourful visions
inspiring the artist's pallette
capturing summer's
vibrancy on canvas
beautiful flower
blooming petals
opening towards sunlight
white amonst red fields
beauty never tires
tthrough an...
#love
#UnrequitedLove
41 reads
4 Comments
your kiss (senryu)
i accept the kiss
you sowed into my garden
watch if love will sprout
you sowed into my garden
watch if love will sprout
#admiration
#hope
#kindness
#love
#senryu
43 reads
13 Comments
They Danced
They danced in the vale
of the shining waters,
chests heaving with anticipation
as smiling lips touched
and fingers brushed, a subtle
collarbone while the
stars fell away,
in the midst of
their embrace.
of the shining waters,
chests heaving with anticipation
as smiling lips touched
and fingers brushed, a subtle
collarbone while the
stars fell away,
in the midst of
their embrace.
#dance
#hope
#love
29 reads
4 Comments
Love Like Dishes
Love like dishes
The end of the day
When a chore has to be made
Love is like dishes
(A 5-7-5 haiku)
The end of the day
When a chore has to be made
Love is like dishes
(A 5-7-5 haiku)
#love
#relationships
131 reads
3 Comments
Interior Redesign
This cacophony of thoughts
penetrate my core
(as I disembowel myself
on your thorn-clad
embrace) infecting
this already darkened
soul with delicious oblivion,
when velvet night brushes
fingers
along
my
spine,
skin blissfully crawls
as vestigial light
diminishes,
this baptism of dysphoria constrains
a love of the disposable,
meaningless provides the escape
of ill fated promises.
penetrate my core
(as I disembowel myself
on your thorn-clad
embrace) infecting
this already darkened
soul with delicious oblivion,
when velvet night brushes
fingers
along
my
spine,
skin blissfully crawls
as vestigial light
diminishes,
this baptism of dysphoria constrains
a love of the disposable,
meaningless provides the escape
of ill fated promises.
#dark
#hurt
46 reads
2 Comments
Heartbeats
hear heartbeats
on the breaths of wind
as nocturnal fires
intensify beyond touch
eyes close soaking in
such wonderful feelings
this is how love
should be about
silohetted lovers under
moonlight magic
pure flaming souls
never quieting
looking into
bright blue orbs
where their gravity effect becomes more apparent
sinking tenderty inwards
flowing within veins
floating like vapour
a breath from lips
senses swirling high
finding true heaven
becoming spirits ...
on the breaths of wind
as nocturnal fires
intensify beyond touch
eyes close soaking in
such wonderful feelings
this is how love
should be about
silohetted lovers under
moonlight magic
pure flaming souls
never quieting
looking into
bright blue orbs
where their gravity effect becomes more apparent
sinking tenderty inwards
flowing within veins
floating like vapour
a breath from lips
senses swirling high
finding true heaven
becoming spirits ...
#love
#NaPoWriMo2024
49 reads
2 Comments
Kintsugi Eulogy
Your kintsugi kisses
linger still, their legacy
binds this once fractured soul
and made life beautiful again,
For a time, there was no shade
just the warmth of love,
a promise of the future
until the shadows of deceit
fell upon your lips.
You left some damage
in your wake, but
I never thanked you
for the inspiration.
linger still, their legacy
binds this once fractured soul
and made life beautiful again,
For a time, there was no shade
just the warmth of love,
a promise of the future
until the shadows of deceit
fell upon your lips.
You left some damage
in your wake, but
I never thanked you
for the inspiration.
#hurt
#love
#sadness
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Bring it
bring me your enthusiasm
bring me your joy
bring me your unbridled laughter
share your indecency
share your too much
share your obscene dirty jokes
don’t hold it back
don’t give too much slack
don’t make any excuses
I want all your feelings
I want all your truth
I want all your sensitive spots
show me your passion
show me your delight
show me your secret nerd-dom
let me witness your pain
let me witness your rage
let me witness the wounds you’ve defeated
I don’t need...
bring me your joy
bring me your unbridled laughter
share your indecency
share your too much
share your obscene dirty jokes
don’t hold it back
don’t give too much slack
don’t make any excuses
I want all your feelings
I want all your truth
I want all your sensitive spots
show me your passion
show me your delight
show me your secret nerd-dom
let me witness your pain
let me witness your rage
let me witness the wounds you’ve defeated
I don’t need...
#crush
#love
#NaPoWriMo2024
#relationships
#vulnerability
42 reads
7 Comments
Adieu To The Taste Of Honey
Could it be, that
I lost my
way when
those final words
dripped
from
your
lips
like
sour
honey.
A taste in my mouth
to spell the end;
I missed the night
train to your heart
so I will
walk
this
road
alone...
Until perhaps
we meet again at a
crossed road in my dreams,
where I can atone for things I
said, but never did (and
did, but never said).
Until then dream girl.....adieu.
I lost my
way when
those final words
dripped
from
your
lips
like
sour
honey.
A taste in my mouth
to spell the end;
I missed the night
train to your heart
so I will
walk
this
road
alone...
Until perhaps
we meet again at a
crossed road in my dreams,
where I can atone for things I
said, but never did (and
did, but never said).
Until then dream girl.....adieu.
#dreams
#hope
#love
50 reads
1 Comment
i cannot see (too well)
i cannot
see
too well,
each picture
of her,
each happy
remembrance
blocks
my vision
from seeing
everything
else.
see
too well,
each picture
of her,
each happy
remembrance
blocks
my vision
from seeing
everything
else.
#admiration
#beauty
#kindness
#relationships
#romantic
58 reads
8 Comments
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