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New to the site. Tons of writing I've never shared. Thoughts
Loky
Joined 18th Sep 2014
Forum Posts: 3
Strange Creature
Forum Posts: 3
Roses once red
Are roses now dead
She lays in my bed
And fucks with my head
We met when once small
And returned once were tall
All in the while feelings had stayed
It all turned to shit once they had laid
Now it's all gone and and back to once was
The rose that was dead is now new and red
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Always Forgive but not forget
Dry my face with an old towelette
I've done things and so have you
Now it's time to start over new
All this hurt along with pain
Makes me use his name in vein
It doesn't matter how hard we try
I still always seem to make you cry
It's not fair to you nor is it for me
It breaks my heart to have set you free
In the end I know it's best
To be a man and put us to rest
I hope I see you out real soon
Dancing free to a brand new tune
I'll always cherish what we had
But it's finally time to end the bad
-loky
Are roses now dead
She lays in my bed
And fucks with my head
We met when once small
And returned once were tall
All in the while feelings had stayed
It all turned to shit once they had laid
Now it's all gone and and back to once was
The rose that was dead is now new and red
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Always Forgive but not forget
Dry my face with an old towelette
I've done things and so have you
Now it's time to start over new
All this hurt along with pain
Makes me use his name in vein
It doesn't matter how hard we try
I still always seem to make you cry
It's not fair to you nor is it for me
It breaks my heart to have set you free
In the end I know it's best
To be a man and put us to rest
I hope I see you out real soon
Dancing free to a brand new tune
I'll always cherish what we had
But it's finally time to end the bad
-loky
Grace
IDryad
Forum Posts: 16069
IDryad
Tyrant of Words
122
Joined 25th Aug 2011Forum Posts: 16069
Loky please post your poems in
http://deepundergroundpoetry.com/forum/workshop/read/7129/
http://deepundergroundpoetry.com/forum/workshop/read/7129/