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Very deep addiction poem, please leave feedback

johnrot
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i steal all my shit from dirt.......

Ghoulie
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johnrot said:i steal all my shit from dirt.......

At least you're honest about it. :P

Magdalena
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To let you know, I sent a private message to the person in the link I posted, and they have now replied saying they are one in the same person and it is their work.

MadameLavender
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Thanks for the research Magdalena!

Still_So_Troubled
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It's not plagiarized... This is my work, I posted it to other websites before for more feedback then you all assume it's stolen... Get per yourselves. I actually put a lot into this. How annoying

johnrot
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Ghoulie said:[quote-263207-johnrot]i steal all my shit from dirt.......

At least you're honest about it. :P[/quote]


not dirtfarm even though he's awesome. i really dig holes....

lepperochan
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Still_So_Troubled said:Yes this is a piece of mine I penned down after many sleepless nights. I wrote it about 3-4 months ago



fact is, one way or the other you lied. you're a liar, that's not an assumption

Magdalena
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...............

crackofdawn
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this is just some sad ass shit....what pride is there in putting up works that aint yours??
am new i just have 3 poems..all of which i have posted in other sites.....but never have i ever put up another poets works...
i dont care if he is right and that he is the same person, the fact that he was asked if its a work of his he simply said yes and he penned it down recently only for it to have been published a year ago made me lose any respect i had for still so troubled...

crackofdawn
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thank you.....my sentiments exactly.
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MadameLavender
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Still_So_Troubled said:It's not plagiarized... This is my work, I posted it to other websites before for more feedback then you all assume it's stolen... Get per yourselves. I actually put a lot into this. How annoying


Don't take this too personally, because it's not directed entirely at you, but in general, overall;  I know that not everyone thinks ahead, or thinks like this at all, but I would like to see just a simple heads-up posted along with any pieces of writing that are posted elsewhere online and/or under different usernames, that yes, I wrote this, and I also post here under this name, etc.

It would certainly help a lot with the many plagiarism investigations we must do around here, if there were a disclaimer, and it would certainly quell the masses a bit, because as you've now seen, we'll be all over you like flies on horse shit, if plagiarism is suspected.  

But, like I say--I'm about as anal as it comes, when crossing-T's and dotting-I's, and I certainly don't expect the rest of the world to follow suit, because it's just impossible.  So that's just my personal opinion.

:)

Lachrimae
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Nice poem! A bit long, but quite good! I have seen people struggle with addiction, it is tough, but deciding to try and overcome it is the biggest step towards defeating it. You can do it, Still_So_Troubled! Good luck!

MidnightOil
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Well, regardless of who or when it was really written, there are some raw emotions being expressed in this rather lengthy joint...many editing opportunities are present, but the overall feel was dark, hopeless and filled with despair. Slightly repetitive and insightful into the outlook of the world through the eyes of an addict. C+ at best in my book.

poet Anonymous

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vortexman
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Lot of El - Lamearino's that can't think for themselves...

Greater writers must think of their behalf I guess?

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