Introduce yourself....
ItalianKOKO
Salvatore Didato
Joined 6th Mar 2015
Forum Posts: 8
Salvatore Didato
Lost Thinker
Forum Posts: 8
I will do my best. Thank you
DeathnoteWhovian
Forum Posts: 33
Thought Provoker
2
Joined 7th Mar 2015Forum Posts: 33
Hello fellow poets!
I'm an insecure individual who is never satisfied with her work so I would greatly appreciate honest critique on my work.
There is always room for improvement
Beat wishes and many thanks,
Deathnotewhovian
I'm an insecure individual who is never satisfied with her work so I would greatly appreciate honest critique on my work.
There is always room for improvement
Beat wishes and many thanks,
Deathnotewhovian
Dead_Poet
Joined 13th Mar 2015
Forum Posts: 3
Strange Creature
Forum Posts: 3
Hello I'm new here I thought there would be some deadly craic in this and we can all use some craic every now and again.
stormiwyndz
Forum Posts: 28
Thought Provoker
2
Joined 17th Mar 2015 Forum Posts: 28
Hi, I am Stormi. I have been writing for quite some time now, just never really seriously. I used to have a LOT on Poesie, but that site went under and took my 6 years worth of work with it. Then poetry changed and i had to hunt down the work i put on there. Frustrating to have worked so hard on building a compilation of my work, only to have it disappear. Anyway, this is the first place I gave posted any of my sexual work, and to be honest, I think it's crap. It all sounds childish. SO...all that for this. I am on here to garner some honest critique on my work, and hope to become a better writer with all of your help! Thanks for listening! -Stormi
hemihead
hemi
Forum Posts: 1749
hemi
Dangerous Mind
13
Joined 1st Nov 2010 Forum Posts: 1749
Welcome, you needy sons of bitches...I hope you are good, but not toooo fuckin' good, yaknowhatI'msayin'?
Watch out for the mods....power-mad fuckers to a man....
Also, send money now.....Now!
Watch out for the mods....power-mad fuckers to a man....
Also, send money now.....Now!
berzerk
meme machine
Joined 18th Apr 2013
Forum Posts: 12
meme machine
Lost Thinker
Forum Posts: 12
i just read this after 2 years n i am vOMITING
case28
Alexander Case
Forum Posts: 2077
Alexander Case
Dangerous Mind
42
Joined 16th June 2013Forum Posts: 2077
Homesick or you gagging on hemi?
Welcome back.
Welcome back.
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DystopianMelody
Forum Posts: 1391
Dangerous Mind
9
Joined 9th Dec 2012Forum Posts: 1391
Gagging on hemi... A lot of us have been there.
Autumn
Pensplat
Forum Posts: 25
Pensplat
Twisted Dreamer
1
Joined 17th Jan 2015Forum Posts: 25
I posted two poem than took them off because no one commented or cared except one fine gentleman whose name I can't even recall. I'm not on the radar screen here so I just visit.
DystopianMelody
Forum Posts: 1391
Dangerous Mind
9
Joined 9th Dec 2012Forum Posts: 1391
Autumn said:I posted two poem than took them off because no one commented or cared except one fine gentleman whose name I can't even recall. I'm not on the radar screen here so I just visit.
Please repost your poems. I (and almost everyone who joined at the same time as me) had exactly the same experience. But from commenting and offering critiques, however small they may be, others will in turn offer their critiques on your poems. It takes a little time to get the ball rolling, and if you have any specific questions, ask a member Who's work you admire. That always worked for me, I've annoyed plenty of people with questions that were either too vague or too specific.
I know it can be painful when nobody reads your work, it happens occasionally. More when you first join, but the results when people do eventually respond is well worth the wait.
(Fucking hell, I think that might have been sincere and almost encouraging. I'm going soft)
Please repost your poems. I (and almost everyone who joined at the same time as me) had exactly the same experience. But from commenting and offering critiques, however small they may be, others will in turn offer their critiques on your poems. It takes a little time to get the ball rolling, and if you have any specific questions, ask a member Who's work you admire. That always worked for me, I've annoyed plenty of people with questions that were either too vague or too specific.
I know it can be painful when nobody reads your work, it happens occasionally. More when you first join, but the results when people do eventually respond is well worth the wait.
(Fucking hell, I think that might have been sincere and almost encouraging. I'm going soft)
case28
Alexander Case
Forum Posts: 2077
Alexander Case
Dangerous Mind
42
Joined 16th June 2013Forum Posts: 2077
Welcome to Deep Underground... the softer side of poetry.
Magdalena
Spartalena
Forum Posts: 2993
Spartalena
Tyrant of Words
62
Joined 21st Apr 2012Forum Posts: 2993
I read something somewhere asking when the DU started. The relaunch was around about August 8th 2009. First post on intro by the Webmiss.
lepperochan
Craic-Dealer
Forum Posts: 14449
Craic-Dealer
Guardian of Shadows
67
Joined 1st Apr 2011Forum Posts: 14449
Where’s Viddax gone, you bastards. ...ever notice how Viddax and Atakti are never in the same room at the same time ? one goes and neither are here ? and how both names are a perfect annagram for Viddaxatakti ...that’s some twighlight zone shit right there I tell you what