Introduce yourself....
this is not just a methaphore
i realy am a crack hoar
hold on a second theres another man at my front door
my life is like a simile im like a gypsy
i never stay in a place too long for you find me
this poison is my remedy
its just another parody
its a new version of the same song
thats now just poking fun at me
i dont need your sympathy
im caught in this paradox
like a little brown box
cause whats killing me only makes me stonger.
the crack in my pipe makes live one day longer.
i dont need your judgements you just dont what its like
when yur life is at the bottom of a bottle and at the end of a crack pipe.
no you dont know what its like to sell your love for a few hits
feel all that pain and so numb it with some wrist slits
then you wake up and the downer is in full swing
and you like a fallen angel with more than just a broken wing
i dont need you to save me im doing just fine
excuse me if im slurring it must be from this red wine
yeah its a needle ofcoarse its a syringe
i havint injected in a while so i just thought id go on this drug binge
its fine you dont have to respect me i am just a bitch
if i was sober that would offend me but now my brains just started to twitch
hey mister do youl like drugs?do you get drunk?
drink up mister so i can turn this hour into a minute
and get on my space ship and forget that i did it
it hurts im not gonna lie i got pain
thats why i also got my pipe a bag of cocaine
where the morphine, drinks this brandy clean
i hate humanity fuck this calamity
i want me dead and your just helping me.
i dont need your help you cant fix me
i realy am a crack hoar
hold on a second theres another man at my front door
my life is like a simile im like a gypsy
i never stay in a place too long for you find me
this poison is my remedy
its just another parody
its a new version of the same song
thats now just poking fun at me
i dont need your sympathy
im caught in this paradox
like a little brown box
cause whats killing me only makes me stonger.
the crack in my pipe makes live one day longer.
i dont need your judgements you just dont what its like
when yur life is at the bottom of a bottle and at the end of a crack pipe.
no you dont know what its like to sell your love for a few hits
feel all that pain and so numb it with some wrist slits
then you wake up and the downer is in full swing
and you like a fallen angel with more than just a broken wing
i dont need you to save me im doing just fine
excuse me if im slurring it must be from this red wine
yeah its a needle ofcoarse its a syringe
i havint injected in a while so i just thought id go on this drug binge
its fine you dont have to respect me i am just a bitch
if i was sober that would offend me but now my brains just started to twitch
hey mister do youl like drugs?do you get drunk?
drink up mister so i can turn this hour into a minute
and get on my space ship and forget that i did it
it hurts im not gonna lie i got pain
thats why i also got my pipe a bag of cocaine
where the morphine, drinks this brandy clean
i hate humanity fuck this calamity
i want me dead and your just helping me.
i dont need your help you cant fix me
Hello everyone-
Although I'm new to DU, I've been writing since January 2001. I primarily write Christian theme pieces, on a wide variety of topics. Published one book to date, and have another 10 manuscripts (in need of funding
).
-Joe Breunig
Reaching Towards His Unbounded Glory
Although I'm new to DU, I've been writing since January 2001. I primarily write Christian theme pieces, on a wide variety of topics. Published one book to date, and have another 10 manuscripts (in need of funding
). -Joe Breunig
Reaching Towards His Unbounded Glory
Welcome newbies. I hope you have fun and enjoy your time in DUP. For those who are here to hone their skills at writing, it is recommended that you read and comment on the poems of others; this is to learn how others write. They may reciprocate and read and comment on your works. This interaction will allow you to grow and gain friends in this portal. Once again Welcome...and please click on these sites.
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jjbreunig3 said:Hello everyone-
Although I'm new to DU, I've been writing since January 2001. I primarily write Christian theme pieces, on a wide variety of topics. Published one book to date, and have another 10 manuscripts (in need of funding).
-Joe Breunig
Reaching Towards His Unbounded Glory
If you're short of funds, why don't you try self-publishing just like most starting and established writers are doing nowadays...then if you make a killing, you can go the traditional way of publishing!
Although I'm new to DU, I've been writing since January 2001. I primarily write Christian theme pieces, on a wide variety of topics. Published one book to date, and have another 10 manuscripts (in need of funding
). -Joe Breunig
Reaching Towards His Unbounded Glory
If you're short of funds, why don't you try self-publishing just like most starting and established writers are doing nowadays...then if you make a killing, you can go the traditional way of publishing!
hey peeps ... very glad to be here and to find this HUGE community of writers as i start out ... can't wait to hear/see what everyone's got and lol i miss these smileys im about to go in 
I do community food justice, environmental racism & anti-oppression work with kids in their families in a typical american city and i spend a lot of time thinking about that in addition to science, evolution and connectivity across species.
i love non-human people believe in big non-possessive love. i'm in the middle of a serious transition in my life and am feeling so good about it. it's like i'm stepping into the woman who i am to be. Or least who i am to begin the journey as.
thanks for "listening! hope e-meet soon :-)
and lol i miss these smileys im about to go in I do community food justice, environmental racism & anti-oppression work with kids in their families in a typical american city and i spend a lot of time thinking about that in addition to science, evolution and connectivity across species.
i love non-human people believe in big non-possessive love. i'm in the middle of a serious transition in my life and am feeling so good about it. it's like i'm stepping into the woman who i am to be. Or least who i am to begin the journey as.
thanks for "listening! hope e-meet soon :-)
Hi.
I a middle aged, married, with children, man.
I wrote some when I was in high school, and enjoyed it. Haven't written since.
Mma died a few years back, and went back, and she kept a folder of my writings. I read them, and cried, about the soul that I had lost over years of studying and working.
So, I thought I would try writing some, posted it on Facebook, and received some encouragement, so thought I would would look for a site to write on.
What does "strange creature" mean, are there levels?
I a middle aged, married, with children, man.
I wrote some when I was in high school, and enjoyed it. Haven't written since.
Mma died a few years back, and went back, and she kept a folder of my writings. I read them, and cried, about the soul that I had lost over years of studying and working.
So, I thought I would try writing some, posted it on Facebook, and received some encouragement, so thought I would would look for a site to write on.
What does "strange creature" mean, are there levels?
Anonymous
I am my most recent incarnation of an ever-evolving word tinkerer that many call GoGo.
I've had long-standing and on going affair with babbling nonsense for the better part of my 20some years. At times words fall into place, aligning with poetic happenstance.
With frequent migrations I find I end up losing many of my physical notebooks, so I thought I'd come here to compile a digital library of sorts.
I've had long-standing and on going affair with babbling nonsense for the better part of my 20some years. At times words fall into place, aligning with poetic happenstance.
With frequent migrations I find I end up losing many of my physical notebooks, so I thought I'd come here to compile a digital library of sorts.
