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cunningstunt
Strange Creature
Joined 4th Mar 2014
Forum Posts: 2

The wind has shown me which way to go; just how to bend, without breaking. I was picked up in a whirlwind of confusion and fear, and now I'm being thrown around like plastic bag in a wind storm on hastings. I am lost, and the wind is gone, at least in chaos I kept moving. The air is still, and slightly muggy, and I'm struggling to catch my breath... I gulp down the stale air without fear, and Iput up new sails, I'm waiting for the next whirlwind

cunningstunt
Strange Creature
Joined 4th Mar 2014
Forum Posts: 2

Little miss White
Is mad as a rabbit
In a Teapot.

So pure,
So innocent,
So easy to taint.

You see, little Miss,
Mania, madness,
Is not all it's
C r a c k e d
Up to be.



got in touch with my wounded inner child. The little bitch is packing an assault rifle and she's flipping you off.

poet Anonymous

Hello. Are you looking for constructive feedback on your pieces or are you looking to share your poems? It's worth mentioning that the 'submit poem' button on the top left of the tool bar allows you to publish your pieces, sharing them with the rest of the community. Please feel free to look around other people's poems to read, learn and leave a comment on people's work to receive comments back on your own pieces.

Thanks and welcome to the DU.

AscensionES
Aptilneilrionaltion
Dangerous Mind
Australia 9awards
Joined 22nd Jan 2013
Forum Posts: 1797

My god Missy, why so Vanilla? Keep it up and you'll be well on your way to 'Guarding the shadows' with the rest of 'em.

MadameLavender
Guardian of Shadows
United States 86awards
Joined 17th Feb 2013
Forum Posts: 5594

Vanilla? Should the Guardians carry Uzis and blow away anyone who's just learning their way around here and hasn't quite got the hang of it yet?

Welcome CunningStunt and thank you to Missy for the gentle instruction. Please have a browse around our site and give a heads up if you need assistance in any way or direction. :)

AscensionES
Aptilneilrionaltion
Dangerous Mind
Australia 9awards
Joined 22nd Jan 2013
Forum Posts: 1797

Not at all Lavender, but then again. We're poets, not desk jockeys emailing memos for fuck's sake.

poet Anonymous

You're right: We're poets. That doesn't mean we're collosal assholes last time I read the dictionary. If you've got a problem with how I conduct myself on this forum, I'll happily discuss it with you if you want to state your case. Though I severely doubt you'll have much of a leg to stand on.  

AscensionES
Aptilneilrionaltion
Dangerous Mind
Australia 9awards
Joined 22nd Jan 2013
Forum Posts: 1797

Haha, I was taking the piss. If this thread is here, might as well make good use of it.

poet Anonymous

You're the trouble with this site. If you just shut your god damn hole once in a while, I wouldn't be frankly offended and newer people might not have to see the drama you and your big mouth create. You bang on about wanting the site to be better and yet you do nothing to help the situation. You're an asshole. Plain as that.

Don't talk to me, I can't be arsed with you. Neither will I be replying further to this thread. Good day to you sir.


AscensionES
Aptilneilrionaltion
Dangerous Mind
Australia 9awards
Joined 22nd Jan 2013
Forum Posts: 1797

The 'harder side of poetry' is due for a slogan change.

Madintellect
Mike stew
Fire of Insight
Canada 4awards
Joined 29th Mar 2014
Forum Posts: 232

I'm passing the car

Don't ask how fast or how far


Double the limit

Trouble? I'm in it

I admit it



 I'm literally swerving

Attention deserving

Detention conserving

Invention? Un nervine


Cooking along

Shook by a song

Look in the arm

Took out to a farm


Straight up gibberish

I'm a genie, give your wish

I'm a good swimming fish


Mike has Kush

Likes your tush

 Baby you're lush

This may be a crash wink


You look incredible

Almost edible

I if I take you to bed I will....


Powerdown your phone

Give you wish shower.

make you moan

Take the bone

My cake has grown

And I'm awake alone

That's I seen what you shown

I'm taking you home

I'm not going to let you roam


Over the bridge

Sober pledge

 Grown in the

Four leaf clover hedge!

I'm swinging the sledge

Well I'm climbing the ridge


Count the flop

Mount on top

Orgasms?

Will amount to a lot

I got the coin for you slot

Time to join think you're hot

Lick your loin in that spot

Have you screaming a lot


Take her home


Make her moan


Don't leave her alone


 When she's needing the bone


To be continued


 By Mike Stewart. 8:20 PM. March 17, 2014 – Monday



Madintellect
Mike stew
Fire of Insight
Canada 4awards
Joined 29th Mar 2014
Forum Posts: 232

I'm passing the car

Don't ask how fast or how far


Double the limit

Trouble? I'm in it

I admit it



 I'm literally swerving

Attention deserving

Detention conserving

Invention? Un nervine


Cooking along

Shook by a song

Look in the arm

Took out to a farm


Straight up gibberish

I'm a genie, give your wish

I'm a good swimming fish


Mike has Kush

Likes your tush

 Baby you're lush

This may be a crash wink


You look incredible

Almost edible

I if I take you to bed I will....


Powerdown your phone

Give you wish shower.

make you moan

Take the bone

My cake has grown

And I'm awake alone

That's I seen what you shown

I'm taking you home

I'm not going to let you roam


Over the bridge

Sober pledge

 Grown in the

Four leaf clover hedge!

I'm swinging the sledge

Well I'm climbing the ridge


Count the flop

Mount on top

Orgasms?

Will amount to a lot

I got the coin for you slot

Time to join think you're hot

Lick your loin in that spot

Have you screaming a lot


Take her home


Make her moan


Don't leave her alone


 When she's needing the bone





mn8
Strange Creature
Joined 6th May 2014
Forum Posts: 3

i need credits!

mn8
Strange Creature
Joined 6th May 2014
Forum Posts: 3

and one more credit... chaos created.

savior_5150
Strange Creature
Joined 4th Mar 2014
Forum Posts: 5

Nicely stated. Keep up the good work

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