creating chaos
cunningstunt
Joined 4th Mar 2014
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The wind has shown me which way to go; just how to bend, without breaking. I was picked up in a whirlwind of confusion and fear, and now I'm being thrown around like plastic bag in a wind storm on hastings. I am lost, and the wind is gone, at least in chaos I kept moving. The air is still, and slightly muggy, and I'm struggling to catch my breath... I gulp down the stale air without fear, and Iput up new sails, I'm waiting for the next whirlwind
cunningstunt
Joined 4th Mar 2014
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Little miss White
Is mad as a rabbit
In a Teapot.
So pure,
So innocent,
So easy to taint.
You see, little Miss,
Mania, madness,
Is not all it's
C r a c k e d
Up to be.
got in touch with my wounded inner child. The little bitch is packing an assault rifle and she's flipping you off.
Is mad as a rabbit
In a Teapot.
So pure,
So innocent,
So easy to taint.
You see, little Miss,
Mania, madness,
Is not all it's
C r a c k e d
Up to be.
got in touch with my wounded inner child. The little bitch is packing an assault rifle and she's flipping you off.
Anonymous
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Thanks and welcome to the DU.
Thanks and welcome to the DU.
AscensionES
Aptilneilrionaltion
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Aptilneilrionaltion
Dangerous Mind
9
Joined 22nd Jan 2013Forum Posts: 1797
My god Missy, why so Vanilla? Keep it up and you'll be well on your way to 'Guarding the shadows' with the rest of 'em.
MadameLavender
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Guardian of Shadows
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Joined 17th Feb 2013Forum Posts: 5594
Vanilla? Should the Guardians carry Uzis and blow away anyone who's just learning their way around here and hasn't quite got the hang of it yet?
Welcome CunningStunt and thank you to Missy for the gentle instruction. Please have a browse around our site and give a heads up if you need assistance in any way or direction. :)
Welcome CunningStunt and thank you to Missy for the gentle instruction. Please have a browse around our site and give a heads up if you need assistance in any way or direction. :)
AscensionES
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Aptilneilrionaltion
Dangerous Mind
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Joined 22nd Jan 2013Forum Posts: 1797
Not at all Lavender, but then again. We're poets, not desk jockeys emailing memos for fuck's sake.
Anonymous
You're right: We're poets. That doesn't mean we're collosal assholes last time I read the dictionary. If you've got a problem with how I conduct myself on this forum, I'll happily discuss it with you if you want to state your case. Though I severely doubt you'll have much of a leg to stand on.
AscensionES
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Dangerous Mind
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Haha, I was taking the piss. If this thread is here, might as well make good use of it.
Anonymous
You're the trouble with this site. If you just shut your god damn hole once in a while, I wouldn't be frankly offended and newer people might not have to see the drama you and your big mouth create. You bang on about wanting the site to be better and yet you do nothing to help the situation. You're an asshole. Plain as that.
Don't talk to me, I can't be arsed with you. Neither will I be replying further to this thread. Good day to you sir.
Don't talk to me, I can't be arsed with you. Neither will I be replying further to this thread. Good day to you sir.
AscensionES
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Dangerous Mind
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Joined 22nd Jan 2013Forum Posts: 1797
The 'harder side of poetry' is due for a slogan change.
Madintellect
Mike stew
Forum Posts: 232
Mike stew
Fire of Insight
4
Joined 29th Mar 2014Forum Posts: 232
I'm passing the car
Don't ask how fast or how far
Double the limit
Trouble? I'm in it
I admit it
I'm literally swerving
Attention deserving
Detention conserving
Invention? Un nervine
Cooking along
Shook by a song
Look in the arm
Took out to a farm
Straight up gibberish
I'm a genie, give your wish
I'm a good swimming fish
Mike has Kush
Likes your tush
Baby you're lush
This may be a crash wink
You look incredible
Almost edible
I if I take you to bed I will....
Powerdown your phone
Give you wish shower.
make you moan
Take the bone
My cake has grown
And I'm awake alone
That's I seen what you shown
I'm taking you home
I'm not going to let you roam
Over the bridge
Sober pledge
Grown in the
Four leaf clover hedge!
I'm swinging the sledge
Well I'm climbing the ridge
Count the flop
Mount on top
Orgasms?
Will amount to a lot
I got the coin for you slot
Time to join think you're hot
Lick your loin in that spot
Have you screaming a lot
Take her home
Make her moan
Don't leave her alone
When she's needing the bone
To be continued
By Mike Stewart. 8:20 PM. March 17, 2014 – Monday
Don't ask how fast or how far
Double the limit
Trouble? I'm in it
I admit it
I'm literally swerving
Attention deserving
Detention conserving
Invention? Un nervine
Cooking along
Shook by a song
Look in the arm
Took out to a farm
Straight up gibberish
I'm a genie, give your wish
I'm a good swimming fish
Mike has Kush
Likes your tush
Baby you're lush
This may be a crash wink
You look incredible
Almost edible
I if I take you to bed I will....
Powerdown your phone
Give you wish shower.
make you moan
Take the bone
My cake has grown
And I'm awake alone
That's I seen what you shown
I'm taking you home
I'm not going to let you roam
Over the bridge
Sober pledge
Grown in the
Four leaf clover hedge!
I'm swinging the sledge
Well I'm climbing the ridge
Count the flop
Mount on top
Orgasms?
Will amount to a lot
I got the coin for you slot
Time to join think you're hot
Lick your loin in that spot
Have you screaming a lot
Take her home
Make her moan
Don't leave her alone
When she's needing the bone
To be continued
By Mike Stewart. 8:20 PM. March 17, 2014 – Monday
Madintellect
Mike stew
Forum Posts: 232
Mike stew
Fire of Insight
4
Joined 29th Mar 2014Forum Posts: 232
I'm passing the car
Don't ask how fast or how far
Double the limit
Trouble? I'm in it
I admit it
I'm literally swerving
Attention deserving
Detention conserving
Invention? Un nervine
Cooking along
Shook by a song
Look in the arm
Took out to a farm
Straight up gibberish
I'm a genie, give your wish
I'm a good swimming fish
Mike has Kush
Likes your tush
Baby you're lush
This may be a crash wink
You look incredible
Almost edible
I if I take you to bed I will....
Powerdown your phone
Give you wish shower.
make you moan
Take the bone
My cake has grown
And I'm awake alone
That's I seen what you shown
I'm taking you home
I'm not going to let you roam
Over the bridge
Sober pledge
Grown in the
Four leaf clover hedge!
I'm swinging the sledge
Well I'm climbing the ridge
Count the flop
Mount on top
Orgasms?
Will amount to a lot
I got the coin for you slot
Time to join think you're hot
Lick your loin in that spot
Have you screaming a lot
Take her home
Make her moan
Don't leave her alone
When she's needing the bone
Don't ask how fast or how far
Double the limit
Trouble? I'm in it
I admit it
I'm literally swerving
Attention deserving
Detention conserving
Invention? Un nervine
Cooking along
Shook by a song
Look in the arm
Took out to a farm
Straight up gibberish
I'm a genie, give your wish
I'm a good swimming fish
Mike has Kush
Likes your tush
Baby you're lush
This may be a crash wink
You look incredible
Almost edible
I if I take you to bed I will....
Powerdown your phone
Give you wish shower.
make you moan
Take the bone
My cake has grown
And I'm awake alone
That's I seen what you shown
I'm taking you home
I'm not going to let you roam
Over the bridge
Sober pledge
Grown in the
Four leaf clover hedge!
I'm swinging the sledge
Well I'm climbing the ridge
Count the flop
Mount on top
Orgasms?
Will amount to a lot
I got the coin for you slot
Time to join think you're hot
Lick your loin in that spot
Have you screaming a lot
Take her home
Make her moan
Don't leave her alone
When she's needing the bone
mn8
Joined 6th May 2014
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i need credits!
mn8
Joined 6th May 2014
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and one more credit... chaos created.
savior_5150
Joined 4th Mar 2014
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Nicely stated. Keep up the good work