THE WORD AND VERSE
Guy's first edition of Word and Verse is finished.
please give it the once over and give suggestions on how to make it better.
thanks.
Muggle.
http://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/34637-the-word-and-verse/
http://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/34636-the-word-and-verse/
http://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/34674-the-word-and-verse-1-p3/
please give it the once over and give suggestions on how to make it better.
thanks.
Muggle.
http://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/34637-the-word-and-verse/
http://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/34636-the-word-and-verse/
http://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/34674-the-word-and-verse-1-p3/
Anonymous
Aaah, and I thought your coments were funny. Thats the bomb...
Anonymous
I'm up to about 80%? I had for some reason thought it was much higher than that! "laughs" very much enjoyed that...very much interesting indeed ;)
Thanks guys,
well my rainbow warrior friend, page three has two comps in it. Due to post restrictions only two can be posted at a time.
Readers are encouraged to p.m the 'love doc -EV' with personal problems(serious problems will be treated with much laughter among the staff) all will be kept annon.
If you would like to see a poet considered for the 'featured poet' p.m link to muggle with the heading/subject 'poet-EV'
Any and all complaints should be directed to SPIRIT
Get the latest editions hot off the press by clicking 'follow poet'
-SR
well my rainbow warrior friend, page three has two comps in it. Due to post restrictions only two can be posted at a time.
Readers are encouraged to p.m the 'love doc -EV' with personal problems(serious problems will be treated with much laughter among the staff) all will be kept annon.
If you would like to see a poet considered for the 'featured poet' p.m link to muggle with the heading/subject 'poet-EV'
Any and all complaints should be directed to SPIRIT
Get the latest editions hot off the press by clicking 'follow poet'
-SR
Question: How to make it better?
Answer: Continue on to provide more data for consideration.
Besides not actually giving you any help, (a limnited time service from yours truly) I have laready developed a fondness and liking for it. I really would like to see where this goes.
Interesting comment about Heslop by the way, though methinks you need to do more profile research!
Informative sarcasm about the Erotic section regulars.
One point though, where are the other points about weekly events and by that I mean the new members and the amazing tricks of the revered members. Or better yet, where am I? On second thoughts avoid that last bit, I doubt you could flatter and insult me at the same time!
Answer: Continue on to provide more data for consideration.
Besides not actually giving you any help, (a limnited time service from yours truly) I have laready developed a fondness and liking for it. I really would like to see where this goes.
Interesting comment about Heslop by the way, though methinks you need to do more profile research!
Informative sarcasm about the Erotic section regulars.
One point though, where are the other points about weekly events and by that I mean the new members and the amazing tricks of the revered members. Or better yet, where am I? On second thoughts avoid that last bit, I doubt you could flatter and insult me at the same time!
OMG: Now that was hilarious! I mean really. This is like an internal bulletin that everybody can read especially when you have not visited for a while. I hope this continue ad infinitum. hahaha!!..burnt cats to piss me off? I don't know. Try burning a few and run it by me....hmmm. :D
Viddax, thanks a lot for the feeding, and oh! be careful what you wish for
Grace, in all the time you have been here muggle has never seen you get angry or even slightly angry. muggle reckons a few burned kittens might just do the trick.
the question is just how many would it take
-SR
Grace, in all the time you have been here muggle has never seen you get angry or even slightly angry. muggle reckons a few burned kittens might just do the trick.
the question is just how many would it take
-SR
