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Collaboration anyone?

M4dM4tt
Strange Creature
Joined 1st Oct 2014
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Hey dear undergrounders,

I started my new Progrock/Metal/Crossover Band in december 2013
and we are in dire need for some one that can come up with deep, dark, sometimes even offending rhymes that draw pictures and tell stories.
i've written lots of lyrics myself earlier but since i'm not the singer in this project and the music we do now is so much more of a workload that i wanted to give away the lyrics department to some one who lives just for that, writing!

check our songs out on fb:
https://www.facebook.com/audioinception

and get in touch if you are interested.
Best regards,
Matt for AI

johnrot
Tyrant of Words
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Joined 10th Oct 2012
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yo you guys got a lil swagger m4....



production is gr8
i like the thick digital distortion


you guys are busy enough it doesn't linger too much


overall fantastic,good stuff
rock on
write your own fn lyrics tho

it's like a rule somewhere....

song 2 doesn't even need them.........
it's awesome alone






M4dM4tt
Strange Creature
Joined 1st Oct 2014
Forum Posts: 6

tnx for reply john.
and tnx for your over all review :).

there's lots of bands that don't write their own lyrics, so i don't know if that rule applies actually, but i know what you mean.

i'd also appreciate some one who'd give permission to use his/her poems and see where it leads. credits are granted of course.

Magdalena
Spartalena
Tyrant of Words
Wales 62awards
Joined 21st Apr 2012
Forum Posts: 2993

Great sound, I'm listening to you now.  I'm already a member on Reverb, so I will follow you when I finished listening.  My brothers band is on there, hence I joined.

I would have no problem with you using any of mine, as you asked and didn't just take, but I don't think any of what I have written here would be what you're looking for.

diddi
StephenPaul Summerscales
Dangerous Mind
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Joined 18th Dec 2009
Forum Posts: 1701

To Walk With Lightning    
              (lyrics)

Heads
are turning
as the ground
is burning                          
where am I going
I don't know
but I'm floating  
eyes of crystal
they are looking
I think I'm lifting  
chapter closing

what is this place
with many
a stone face                          
this is the end
my friend
no more life race .    

Lightning of fork          

walk

with me .

it's time to die
it's time to leave                
the eagles eye
is stalking me
he doesn't fly
nor do I breathe .
your third eye
is how to see

lightning of fork

walk

with me .  

                         

Spiney
charges
step cracks
through
the sky
but there
is no thunder
and I don't
wonder why
as all the
numbers
subtracted
to die
I'm a Hawk
gliding over
the striding
night

lightning of fork

walk

with me

let's charge over
electrically

lightning of fork
turn me to a sheet
so

I shine brightly

before

I leave .













 



diddi
StephenPaul Summerscales
Dangerous Mind
United Kingdom 42awards
Joined 18th Dec 2009
Forum Posts: 1701

De-Stringed    




I am the lightning      
that's not seen        
I strike the nerves
you cannot feel          
I am the curve
on a world flat screen    

I re-inburse what's    
never been

my value , worth's      
in a purse de-stringed
I quench your thirst
but only post drink

I am the first
thought you can't think

am I the only float  
that sinks .

                   
If you see me        
don't despair
I am not real
I am not there
a memory
an after glare
no solidity
so don't be scared
don't be scared
.  
                       
                   
I am a ghost
a former self
trying to post
these words from hell
I live in hope
like a joke
you can't sell.
I feel alone
does it show
can you tell .

                   
If you see me
don't despair
I am not real
I am not there
a memory
an after glare
no solidity
so don't be scared .
don't be scared

                     
                         
I am the lightning
that's not seen
I strike the nerves
you cannot feel
I am the curve
on a world flat screen
I re-inburse what's
never been

never been

never been
I am the lightning
that's not seen .






 

M4dM4tt
Strange Creature
Joined 1st Oct 2014
Forum Posts: 6

Hey thanks for permission magdalena.
just browsed through your work for a while now, quite some good stuff there. But i guess you're right it's not exactly fitting well i guess. But i haven't read em all yet ; ).
Main problem is i think that most of the time there are no rhymes there which makes it even harder to adapt as song lyrics (even if rhyming is not a necessity).
Tnx again anyway and i'd let you know if i use anything.

M4dM4tt
Strange Creature
Joined 1st Oct 2014
Forum Posts: 6

Well Paul,
we're getting closer to what i'm lookin for :).
tnx a lot! Got any more of these?

diddi
StephenPaul Summerscales
Dangerous Mind
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Joined 18th Dec 2009
Forum Posts: 1701

yeah I have loads dude

diddi
StephenPaul Summerscales
Dangerous Mind
United Kingdom 42awards
Joined 18th Dec 2009
Forum Posts: 1701

A Tazer Won't Phase Her    
            lyrics


             1

I sit in the tunnel
alone and listen
no one is coming
my thoughts are wishful

blue

where are you .

            2

I don't know why
I come here sometimes
echoeing , falling
I keep on calling

you

where are you

where are you
   
          ( long intermediate part)

          3
Wandering I'm lost
in the frost you frozen
beholden
I'm folding
untold
in the cold
of

you

where are you .


        4

A lazer she sent down
broke my emotions
a tazer won't phase her
no commotion or frown
at all

she'll never crawl

she'll never crawl


      ( short intermediate part into E )

          5


Was it nice
did it feel good
my insides you diced
then you boiled my blood ,
how does it feel
to taste my spleen ,
was I clean enough
for your taste buds ,
distraction
detraction
subtraction love ,
a fraction
or fracture
is all I ever

was

that's all I was  

that's all I am

that's all I was  .










lepperochan
Craic-Dealer
Guardian of Shadows
Palestine 67awards
Joined 1st Apr 2011
Forum Posts: 14449

I would also echo the great sounds sentiment

here's an idea for song 6

from :29
[low voice]

there's some-thing coming from inside E-den
I hear
fruit falling and heavy breathing
a god
is cursing the birth of heathens
the serpent's
got
the girl

break til :52

:52
[higher voice]

the
serpent
got
the
girl
a
gain

break

I would envisage the vocals coming back in much higher at 1:11  to a different vocal rhythm. I'd like to throw down more lyrics but alas I'm just not stoned enough



poet Anonymous

Passes Craic the virtual bong

I can see (hear) that fitting there perfectly
Damn! You got a great ear for timing

lepperochan
Craic-Dealer
Guardian of Shadows
Palestine 67awards
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Forum Posts: 14449

Missus moon, you flatterer :)'  a bong would be most welcome, most welcome indeed

Carpe_Noctem
Tyrant of Words
Spain 8awards
Joined 3rd Mar 2013
Forum Posts: 2915

lepperochan said:Missus moon, you flatterer :)'  a bong would be most welcome, most welcome indeed

and so we picked it
packed it
passed the bong

sitting by the campfire
wondering
why the fuck cant we get along

marveling at the indians
transfixed
in some tribal song

as the lepperochan
got up and sang
the pipes are calling
mrs moon

alive
alive o
better pack another before you go


M4dM4tt
Strange Creature
Joined 1st Oct 2014
Forum Posts: 6

Aye Craic thats some good work right there!
You really have a good ear it seems!
Please keep goin' when you're stoned enough ;).

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