Collaboration anyone?
M4dM4tt
Joined 1st Oct 2014
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Strange Creature
Forum Posts: 6
Hey dear undergrounders,
I started my new Progrock/Metal/Crossover Band in december 2013
and we are in dire need for some one that can come up with deep, dark, sometimes even offending rhymes that draw pictures and tell stories.
i've written lots of lyrics myself earlier but since i'm not the singer in this project and the music we do now is so much more of a workload that i wanted to give away the lyrics department to some one who lives just for that, writing!
check our songs out on fb:
https://www.facebook.com/audioinception
and get in touch if you are interested.
Best regards,
Matt for AI
I started my new Progrock/Metal/Crossover Band in december 2013
and we are in dire need for some one that can come up with deep, dark, sometimes even offending rhymes that draw pictures and tell stories.
i've written lots of lyrics myself earlier but since i'm not the singer in this project and the music we do now is so much more of a workload that i wanted to give away the lyrics department to some one who lives just for that, writing!
check our songs out on fb:
https://www.facebook.com/audioinception
and get in touch if you are interested.
Best regards,
Matt for AI
johnrot
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Tyrant of Words
21
Joined 10th Oct 2012Forum Posts: 3645
yo you guys got a lil swagger m4....
production is gr8
i like the thick digital distortion
you guys are busy enough it doesn't linger too much
overall fantastic,good stuff
rock on
write your own fn lyrics tho
it's like a rule somewhere....
song 2 doesn't even need them.........
it's awesome alone
production is gr8
i like the thick digital distortion
you guys are busy enough it doesn't linger too much
overall fantastic,good stuff
rock on
write your own fn lyrics tho
it's like a rule somewhere....
song 2 doesn't even need them.........
it's awesome alone
M4dM4tt
Joined 1st Oct 2014
Forum Posts: 6
Strange Creature
Forum Posts: 6
tnx for reply john.
and tnx for your over all review :).
there's lots of bands that don't write their own lyrics, so i don't know if that rule applies actually, but i know what you mean.
i'd also appreciate some one who'd give permission to use his/her poems and see where it leads. credits are granted of course.
and tnx for your over all review :).
there's lots of bands that don't write their own lyrics, so i don't know if that rule applies actually, but i know what you mean.
i'd also appreciate some one who'd give permission to use his/her poems and see where it leads. credits are granted of course.
Magdalena
Spartalena
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Spartalena
Tyrant of Words
62
Joined 21st Apr 2012Forum Posts: 2993
Great sound, I'm listening to you now. I'm already a member on Reverb, so I will follow you when I finished listening. My brothers band is on there, hence I joined.
I would have no problem with you using any of mine, as you asked and didn't just take, but I don't think any of what I have written here would be what you're looking for.
I would have no problem with you using any of mine, as you asked and didn't just take, but I don't think any of what I have written here would be what you're looking for.
diddi
StephenPaul Summerscales
Forum Posts: 1701
StephenPaul Summerscales
Dangerous Mind
42
Joined 18th Dec 2009Forum Posts: 1701
To Walk With Lightning
(lyrics)
Heads
are turning
as the ground
is burning
where am I going
I don't know
but I'm floating
eyes of crystal
they are looking
I think I'm lifting
chapter closing
what is this place
with many
a stone face
this is the end
my friend
no more life race .
Lightning of fork
walk
with me .
it's time to die
it's time to leave
the eagles eye
is stalking me
he doesn't fly
nor do I breathe .
your third eye
is how to see
lightning of fork
walk
with me .
Spiney
charges
step cracks
through
the sky
but there
is no thunder
and I don't
wonder why
as all the
numbers
subtracted
to die
I'm a Hawk
gliding over
the striding
night
lightning of fork
walk
with me
let's charge over
electrically
lightning of fork
turn me to a sheet
so
I shine brightly
before
I leave .
(lyrics)
Heads
are turning
as the ground
is burning
where am I going
I don't know
but I'm floating
eyes of crystal
they are looking
I think I'm lifting
chapter closing
what is this place
with many
a stone face
this is the end
my friend
no more life race .
Lightning of fork
walk
with me .
it's time to die
it's time to leave
the eagles eye
is stalking me
he doesn't fly
nor do I breathe .
your third eye
is how to see
lightning of fork
walk
with me .
Spiney
charges
step cracks
through
the sky
but there
is no thunder
and I don't
wonder why
as all the
numbers
subtracted
to die
I'm a Hawk
gliding over
the striding
night
lightning of fork
walk
with me
let's charge over
electrically
lightning of fork
turn me to a sheet
so
I shine brightly
before
I leave .
diddi
StephenPaul Summerscales
Forum Posts: 1701
StephenPaul Summerscales
Dangerous Mind
42
Joined 18th Dec 2009Forum Posts: 1701
De-Stringed
I am the lightning
that's not seen
I strike the nerves
you cannot feel
I am the curve
on a world flat screen
I re-inburse what's
never been
my value , worth's
in a purse de-stringed
I quench your thirst
but only post drink
I am the first
thought you can't think
am I the only float
that sinks .
If you see me
don't despair
I am not real
I am not there
a memory
an after glare
no solidity
so don't be scared
don't be scared
.
I am a ghost
a former self
trying to post
these words from hell
I live in hope
like a joke
you can't sell.
I feel alone
does it show
can you tell .
If you see me
don't despair
I am not real
I am not there
a memory
an after glare
no solidity
so don't be scared .
don't be scared
I am the lightning
that's not seen
I strike the nerves
you cannot feel
I am the curve
on a world flat screen
I re-inburse what's
never been
never been
never been
I am the lightning
that's not seen .
I am the lightning
that's not seen
I strike the nerves
you cannot feel
I am the curve
on a world flat screen
I re-inburse what's
never been
my value , worth's
in a purse de-stringed
I quench your thirst
but only post drink
I am the first
thought you can't think
am I the only float
that sinks .
If you see me
don't despair
I am not real
I am not there
a memory
an after glare
no solidity
so don't be scared
don't be scared
.
I am a ghost
a former self
trying to post
these words from hell
I live in hope
like a joke
you can't sell.
I feel alone
does it show
can you tell .
If you see me
don't despair
I am not real
I am not there
a memory
an after glare
no solidity
so don't be scared .
don't be scared
I am the lightning
that's not seen
I strike the nerves
you cannot feel
I am the curve
on a world flat screen
I re-inburse what's
never been
never been
never been
I am the lightning
that's not seen .
M4dM4tt
Joined 1st Oct 2014
Forum Posts: 6
Strange Creature
Forum Posts: 6
Hey thanks for permission magdalena.
just browsed through your work for a while now, quite some good stuff there. But i guess you're right it's not exactly fitting well i guess. But i haven't read em all yet ; ).
Main problem is i think that most of the time there are no rhymes there which makes it even harder to adapt as song lyrics (even if rhyming is not a necessity).
Tnx again anyway and i'd let you know if i use anything.
just browsed through your work for a while now, quite some good stuff there. But i guess you're right it's not exactly fitting well i guess. But i haven't read em all yet ; ).
Main problem is i think that most of the time there are no rhymes there which makes it even harder to adapt as song lyrics (even if rhyming is not a necessity).
Tnx again anyway and i'd let you know if i use anything.
M4dM4tt
Joined 1st Oct 2014
Forum Posts: 6
Strange Creature
Forum Posts: 6
Well Paul,
we're getting closer to what i'm lookin for :).
tnx a lot! Got any more of these?
we're getting closer to what i'm lookin for :).
tnx a lot! Got any more of these?
diddi
StephenPaul Summerscales
Forum Posts: 1701
StephenPaul Summerscales
Dangerous Mind
42
Joined 18th Dec 2009Forum Posts: 1701
yeah I have loads dude
diddi
StephenPaul Summerscales
Forum Posts: 1701
StephenPaul Summerscales
Dangerous Mind
42
Joined 18th Dec 2009Forum Posts: 1701
A Tazer Won't Phase Her
lyrics
1
I sit in the tunnel
alone and listen
no one is coming
my thoughts are wishful
blue
where are you .
2
I don't know why
I come here sometimes
echoeing , falling
I keep on calling
you
where are you
where are you
( long intermediate part)
3
Wandering I'm lost
in the frost you frozen
beholden
I'm folding
untold
in the cold
of
you
where are you .
4
A lazer she sent down
broke my emotions
a tazer won't phase her
no commotion or frown
at all
she'll never crawl
she'll never crawl
( short intermediate part into E )
5
Was it nice
did it feel good
my insides you diced
then you boiled my blood ,
how does it feel
to taste my spleen ,
was I clean enough
for your taste buds ,
distraction
detraction
subtraction love ,
a fraction
or fracture
is all I ever
was
that's all I was
that's all I am
that's all I was .
lyrics
1
I sit in the tunnel
alone and listen
no one is coming
my thoughts are wishful
blue
where are you .
2
I don't know why
I come here sometimes
echoeing , falling
I keep on calling
you
where are you
where are you
( long intermediate part)
3
Wandering I'm lost
in the frost you frozen
beholden
I'm folding
untold
in the cold
of
you
where are you .
4
A lazer she sent down
broke my emotions
a tazer won't phase her
no commotion or frown
at all
she'll never crawl
she'll never crawl
( short intermediate part into E )
5
Was it nice
did it feel good
my insides you diced
then you boiled my blood ,
how does it feel
to taste my spleen ,
was I clean enough
for your taste buds ,
distraction
detraction
subtraction love ,
a fraction
or fracture
is all I ever
was
that's all I was
that's all I am
that's all I was .
lepperochan
Craic-Dealer
Forum Posts: 14449
Craic-Dealer
Guardian of Shadows
67
Joined 1st Apr 2011Forum Posts: 14449
I would also echo the great sounds sentiment
here's an idea for song 6
from :29
[low voice]
there's some-thing coming from inside E-den
I hear
fruit falling and heavy breathing
a god
is cursing the birth of heathens
the serpent's
got
the girl
break til :52
:52
[higher voice]
the
serpent
got
the
girl
a
gain
break
I would envisage the vocals coming back in much higher at 1:11 to a different vocal rhythm. I'd like to throw down more lyrics but alas I'm just not stoned enough
here's an idea for song 6
from :29
[low voice]
there's some-thing coming from inside E-den
I hear
fruit falling and heavy breathing
a god
is cursing the birth of heathens
the serpent's
got
the girl
break til :52
:52
[higher voice]
the
serpent
got
the
girl
a
gain
break
I would envisage the vocals coming back in much higher at 1:11 to a different vocal rhythm. I'd like to throw down more lyrics but alas I'm just not stoned enough
Anonymous
Passes Craic the virtual bong
I can see (hear) that fitting there perfectly
Damn! You got a great ear for timing
I can see (hear) that fitting there perfectly
Damn! You got a great ear for timing
lepperochan
Craic-Dealer
Forum Posts: 14449
Craic-Dealer
Guardian of Shadows
67
Joined 1st Apr 2011Forum Posts: 14449
Missus moon, you flatterer :)' a bong would be most welcome, most welcome indeed
Carpe_Noctem
Forum Posts: 2915
Tyrant of Words
8
Joined 3rd Mar 2013Forum Posts: 2915
lepperochan said:Missus moon, you flatterer :)' a bong would be most welcome, most welcome indeed
and so we picked it
packed it
passed the bong
sitting by the campfire
wondering
why the fuck cant we get along
marveling at the indians
transfixed
in some tribal song
as the lepperochan
got up and sang
the pipes are calling
mrs moon
alive
alive o
better pack another before you go
and so we picked it
packed it
passed the bong
sitting by the campfire
wondering
why the fuck cant we get along
marveling at the indians
transfixed
in some tribal song
as the lepperochan
got up and sang
the pipes are calling
mrs moon
alive
alive o
better pack another before you go
M4dM4tt
Joined 1st Oct 2014
Forum Posts: 6
Strange Creature
Forum Posts: 6
Aye Craic thats some good work right there!
You really have a good ear it seems!
Please keep goin' when you're stoned enough ;).
You really have a good ear it seems!
Please keep goin' when you're stoned enough ;).