Poetry competition CLOSED 27th July 2016 6:28pm
WINNER
Anonymous
Anonymous
your first deep underground poem
highwaytohell
Greg
Joined 24th Sep 2015
Forum Posts: 449
Greg
Thought Provoker
Forum Posts: 449
Here's an interesting thought and my first poem.
Nothing
99.9% of an atom is nothing
So I'm told
Is earth
simply nothing?
Are my words
simply nothing?
Is life
simply nothing?
Interesting thought
People in their world's
Thinking that they are actually doing something
Or saying something
When their worlds
Actually are nothing
Great
I love nothing then
Nothing
99.9% of an atom is nothing
So I'm told
Is earth
simply nothing?
Are my words
simply nothing?
Is life
simply nothing?
Interesting thought
People in their world's
Thinking that they are actually doing something
Or saying something
When their worlds
Actually are nothing
Great
I love nothing then
Simon_III_Msibi
Mandla Msibi
Forum Posts: 92
Mandla Msibi
Thought Provoker
5
Joined 29th June 2013Forum Posts: 92
I felt like it
Maybe today was one of those days
when nothing productive happens
Is there something like having too much fun
Read a book start,look for a pun
Sorry if this poem is crappy
im a bit bored,i dont feel that happy
Well you are reading this arent you
so are part of the understanding few
so let us be us
just like that
I wrote this because i felt like it
Maybe today was one of those days
when nothing productive happens
Is there something like having too much fun
Read a book start,look for a pun
Sorry if this poem is crappy
im a bit bored,i dont feel that happy
Well you are reading this arent you
so are part of the understanding few
so let us be us
just like that
I wrote this because i felt like it
Countrygirl96
Forum Posts: 64
Thought Provoker
2
Joined 20th July 2016Forum Posts: 64
Fierce love ! extreme content !
She squirms against my fingers
Going deeper and deeper into her
Her scent now lingers in the air
Steeper and steeper her climax climbs
She screams "Please stop your hurting me!"
I laugh and shove my fist all the way in
Pain gleams in her tearful eyes
Oh how I love to torture you my whore
I take my juicy fist out and hear her sigh
If she only knew what was coming soon
Lucy my slut I'm going to fuck you now
My cock grew and now is a rod of steel
Ram my cock so deep she let out a screech
"No master please" is all Lucy pleads
I reach up and pull her hair ramming in deep
This leads her into sweet climax
Fierce Love is what I gave her
And now she answers my every order
She calls me sir and master
Tristy
Sredni Vashtar
Forum Posts: 76
Sredni Vashtar
Twisted Dreamer
1
Joined 18th May 2014Forum Posts: 76
First poem I published on DUP, also the first poem I wrote that had a real meaning to me. Still has.
I used to be only your friend
But I just want to be much more
That's why I'm going on this errand
I'll make sure it won't be a bore
Do you know where I'm heading ?
Do you know what I'm thinking ?
Do you know why I'm fighting ?
Do you know who I'm loving ?
Sure you don't know, why would I ask ?
But you aren’t dumb, you can guess it !
I'm sure you can see through my mask
But you just don't realize it.
As you cannot, I will guide you.
To the depths of my twisted mind
I can tell you what I've been through
You'll accept it, you're enough kind.
Right, I'd just want to tell you that
All of my mornings are for you
All of my thoughts stand up for you
All of my struggles are for you
And all my love belongs to you
Right, I'd just want to tell you that…
I love you.
http://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/162525-does-love-need-a-title/
I used to be only your friend
But I just want to be much more
That's why I'm going on this errand
I'll make sure it won't be a bore
Do you know where I'm heading ?
Do you know what I'm thinking ?
Do you know why I'm fighting ?
Do you know who I'm loving ?
Sure you don't know, why would I ask ?
But you aren’t dumb, you can guess it !
I'm sure you can see through my mask
But you just don't realize it.
As you cannot, I will guide you.
To the depths of my twisted mind
I can tell you what I've been through
You'll accept it, you're enough kind.
Right, I'd just want to tell you that
All of my mornings are for you
All of my thoughts stand up for you
All of my struggles are for you
And all my love belongs to you
Right, I'd just want to tell you that…
I love you.
http://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/162525-does-love-need-a-title/
themaskedmaiden
bizarrenomad
Forum Posts: 15
bizarrenomad
Lost Thinker
1
Joined 25th May 2015 Forum Posts: 15
Whispers
You speak to my monsters, calling them by name
You tell them to quiet down, life isn’t the same
You tell them you love me and you’ll protect me from all harm,
you tell them their work is over and they are better off gone.
You speak to my monsters, calling them by name
You tell them to quiet down, life isn’t the same
You tell them you love me and you’ll protect me from all harm,
you tell them their work is over and they are better off gone.
Anonymous
afternoongasm ! extreme content !
As I gaze
upon your beauty
my eyes go down
right to your booty
you do not move
my eyes you trust
will start to arouse
my animal lust
you feel my temperature,
as it starts to rise
as I look into
your sensuous eyes
It is all I can do
to hold myself back
as my pants start to bulging
and naturally react
my cup runneth over
our clothes hit the floor
it is time for you,
to ask of me more
I feel you start
to writhe from your hips
as my swollen flesh,
lays down on your lips
With tingling all over
and goosebumps on your back
I can see a light glistening
in your soft tight pink crack
lets go to that place
We know it exist
that fantasy place
that place of sheer bliss
you scream and you moan,
your pussy so tight
as I throb and you pulsate
the end is insight
We want it to last
before I unload
we both can not help it
but we want to explode
It feels so good
you say faster, go fast
I am rubbing you tits and
your clit, and your ass
It is too late to stop
like a volcano erupting
the euphoric magic begins
and there is no interrupting
The feelings intense
and they start to subside
I feel you quivering
As I stay there inside
now with it over
you lay there while oozing
you in the wet spot
while I am just there snoozing
Written by slowgasm
As I gaze
upon your beauty
my eyes go down
right to your booty
you do not move
my eyes you trust
will start to arouse
my animal lust
you feel my temperature,
as it starts to rise
as I look into
your sensuous eyes
It is all I can do
to hold myself back
as my pants start to bulging
and naturally react
my cup runneth over
our clothes hit the floor
it is time for you,
to ask of me more
I feel you start
to writhe from your hips
as my swollen flesh,
lays down on your lips
With tingling all over
and goosebumps on your back
I can see a light glistening
in your soft tight pink crack
lets go to that place
We know it exist
that fantasy place
that place of sheer bliss
you scream and you moan,
your pussy so tight
as I throb and you pulsate
the end is insight
We want it to last
before I unload
we both can not help it
but we want to explode
It feels so good
you say faster, go fast
I am rubbing you tits and
your clit, and your ass
It is too late to stop
like a volcano erupting
the euphoric magic begins
and there is no interrupting
The feelings intense
and they start to subside
I feel you quivering
As I stay there inside
now with it over
you lay there while oozing
you in the wet spot
while I am just there snoozing
Written by slowgasm
Fetchitnow
Forum Posts: 156
Thought Provoker
2
Joined 20th Apr 2015 Forum Posts: 156
This Is Ghetto
As the gangsta dies
On a hot and humid Florida mornin'
A poor grievin' young wife is torn
This is ghetto
And his crew cries
'cause if there's one thing that they don't need
it's another corner boy to bleed
This is ghetto
Society, don't you understand
the hood needs a helping hand
or they'll grow to be all angry young men one day
Take a look at them and me,
are we too black to see,
do we simply shut our mouths
and speak in another way
While the hood rolls
and an inspired young boy with a funny jive
deals on the corner as he collects high fives
This is ghetto
And his crib burns
so he starts to scare the folks with fright
and he teaches how to deal
and he teaches how to bite
This is ghetto
Then one night in conversation
a young rat screams aloud
She buys a toy, steals a heart,
tries for fun, but it won't even start
Then her man tries
As the crew gathers 'round a stupid young hoe
face down in the pillow with a dildo in her snatch
This is ghetto
As the neighbourhood sighs
On a hot and humid Florida mornin'
Another poor grievin' young wife is torn
This is ghetto
Solomon_Song
Forum Posts: 332
Tyrant of Words
103
Joined 28th Sep 2012 Forum Posts: 332
"Red means danger", they say of signs,
But I'm caught up in your designs.
That silk sheet and your lingerie
Sure weren't meant to deter me.
By the drink that I had taken
My good-bad sense is overtaken.
Like a driver out of control,
Risking parting of body and soul.
No space, time, sense to swerve away,
I crash headlong into the hay,
Where you're sure quick to swoop on me
And nurse me with intimacy.
What clothes I have you pull off me,
Like I'd arrived in A and E.
Responding, careless of my form,
I strip 'nurse' of her 'uniform'!
But I'm caught up in your designs.
That silk sheet and your lingerie
Sure weren't meant to deter me.
By the drink that I had taken
My good-bad sense is overtaken.
Like a driver out of control,
Risking parting of body and soul.
No space, time, sense to swerve away,
I crash headlong into the hay,
Where you're sure quick to swoop on me
And nurse me with intimacy.
What clothes I have you pull off me,
Like I'd arrived in A and E.
Responding, careless of my form,
I strip 'nurse' of her 'uniform'!
ConvOfTheAnon
Joined 26th July 2016
Forum Posts: 1
Strange Creature
Forum Posts: 1
Stripped.
Stripped form the strength of my language
The intensity of my thought
The potency of my words
Stripped from the capacity to know
The scope of my passion
The inquisitiveness of my curiosity
Stripped from the vastness of my heritage
The beauty of my culture
The identity of my Self
Stripped from the sweetness of silence,
the quietude of mind.
the tranquility of heart
Stripped.
Stripped form the strength of my language
The intensity of my thought
The potency of my words
Stripped from the capacity to know
The scope of my passion
The inquisitiveness of my curiosity
Stripped from the vastness of my heritage
The beauty of my culture
The identity of my Self
Stripped from the sweetness of silence,
the quietude of mind.
the tranquility of heart
Stripped.
opheliac
Forum Posts: 2122
Dangerous Mind
9
Joined 29th Aug 2009Forum Posts: 2122
untitled
a name so common
suddenly becomes so significant.
a name so common
suddenly becomes so significant.
Anonymous
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Anonymous
Thinking of You
"Thoughts of you
Will not leave me
So potent
So constant
So real
Can you feel them?
Are they consuming you?
Are they invading your soul?
Thoughts of your words
How they awaken my being
Making me ache for you
Thoughts of your hands
And what I want them to do to me Covering every portion of my flesh
Rough and with great intent
Feeling every rigid fiber
And how they excite my senses
Thoughts of your lips
How they taste
How they make me feel
When you trail them down my body Stopping in all the right places
Pausing
Suckling
How I open and invite you in
Every sensitive nerve awakened
As your tongue swirls
Arching my body
My hands pressing you deeper
Thoughts of your voice
F*cking me with your words
As
I touch you
Taste you
The growl in your chest
As pleasure overtakes you
Your breaths in my ear
Speaking those dirty things
Which only I know
Only I can do
Thoughts of your scent
As my body covers yours
Inhaling you
Your masculinity
Your passionate heat
Claiming my ache
My thirst
My desire
Can you feel me….
Thinking of you"
Anonymous
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beanbandit
David Gonzales
Joined 27th June 2016
Forum Posts: 41
David Gonzales
Fire of Insight
Forum Posts: 41
"Poor me... ! extreme content !"
Poor me...
Nah pour p-pour me
Go ahead and take a sip
I'll watch you owe D
My head is making clouds
I ground, and up more trees
I am LSD
I am heavenly
Come and see you through my eyes
Surprise, nothing for free
I am that random tablet
The one you found in traffic
Go ahead and pop it down
Fuck it, let's see what happens
Find passion in your passage
Extract me and then dab it
I promise it won't hurt
If you can see me, know we damaged
Began this as a man
Now damn, I am a habit
Pure, strong like a brick
Crush half and take a sniff
Praise me for the nod off
God Xan this shit's a trip
Bet that you won't miss
The world of normies
Yeah, Whoa is me
Now pour p-pour me...
Written by beanbandit (David Gonzales)
Published 26th June 2016 11:15pm
Poor me...
Nah pour p-pour me
Go ahead and take a sip
I'll watch you owe D
My head is making clouds
I ground, and up more trees
I am LSD
I am heavenly
Come and see you through my eyes
Surprise, nothing for free
I am that random tablet
The one you found in traffic
Go ahead and pop it down
Fuck it, let's see what happens
Find passion in your passage
Extract me and then dab it
I promise it won't hurt
If you can see me, know we damaged
Began this as a man
Now damn, I am a habit
Pure, strong like a brick
Crush half and take a sniff
Praise me for the nod off
God Xan this shit's a trip
Bet that you won't miss
The world of normies
Yeah, Whoa is me
Now pour p-pour me...
Written by beanbandit (David Gonzales)
Published 26th June 2016 11:15pm
chump
Forum Posts: 417
Thought Provoker
6
Joined 30th Sep 2014Forum Posts: 417
i put it to a vote.... now at least one of us will be able to say their first poem won a trophy..................