Poetry competition CLOSED 27th July 2016 6:28pm
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Anonymous
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your first deep underground poem

highwaytohell
Greg
Thought Provoker
South Africa
Joined 24th Sep 2015
Forum Posts: 449

Here's an interesting thought and my first poem.

Nothing
99.9% of an atom is nothing
So I'm told
Is earth
simply nothing?

Are my words
simply nothing?

Is life
simply nothing?

Interesting thought
People in their world's
Thinking that they are actually doing something
Or saying something
When their worlds
Actually are nothing

Great
I love nothing then

Simon_III_Msibi
Mandla Msibi
Thought Provoker
South Africa 5awards
Joined 29th June 2013
Forum Posts: 92

I felt like it

Maybe today was one of those days
when nothing productive happens
Is there something like having too much fun
Read a book start,look for a pun

Sorry if this poem is crappy
im a bit bored,i dont feel that happy
Well you are reading this arent you
so are part of the understanding few

so let us be us
just like that
I wrote this because i felt like it

Countrygirl96
Thought Provoker
United States 2awards
Joined 20th July 2016
Forum Posts: 64


Fierce love ! extreme content !

She squirms against my fingers 
Going deeper and deeper into her 
Her scent now lingers in the air 
Steeper and steeper her climax climbs 

She screams "Please stop your hurting me!" 
I laugh and shove my fist all the way in 
Pain gleams in her tearful eyes 
Oh how I love to torture you my whore 

I take my juicy fist out and hear her sigh 
If she only knew what was coming soon 
Lucy my slut I'm going to fuck you now 
My cock grew and now is a rod of steel 

Ram my cock so deep she let out a screech 
"No master please" is all Lucy pleads 
I reach up and pull her hair ramming in deep 
This leads her into sweet climax 

Fierce Love is what I gave her 
And now she answers my every order 
She calls me sir and master

Tristy
Sredni Vashtar
Twisted Dreamer
France 1awards
Joined 18th May 2014
Forum Posts: 76

First poem I published on DUP, also the first poem I wrote that had a real meaning to me. Still has.

I used to be only your friend
But I just want to be much more
That's why I'm going on this errand
I'll make sure it won't be a bore

Do you know where I'm heading ?
Do you know what I'm thinking ?
Do you know why I'm fighting ?
Do you know who I'm loving ?

Sure you don't know, why would I ask ?
But you aren’t dumb, you can guess it !
I'm sure you can see through my mask
But you just don't realize it.

As you cannot, I will guide you.
To the depths of my twisted mind
I can tell you what I've been through
You'll accept it, you're enough kind.

Right, I'd just want to tell you that

All of my mornings are for you
All of my thoughts stand up for you
All of my struggles are for you
And all my love belongs to you
Right, I'd just want to tell you that…

                      I love you.


http://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/162525-does-love-need-a-title/

themaskedmaiden
bizarrenomad
Lost Thinker
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Joined 25th May 2015
Forum Posts: 15

Whispers
You speak to my monsters, calling them by name

You tell them to quiet down, life isn’t the same

You tell them you love me and you’ll protect me from all harm,

you tell them their work is over and they are better off gone.

poet Anonymous

afternoongasm ! extreme content !
As I gaze
upon your beauty
my eyes go down
right to your booty

you do not move
my eyes you trust
will start to arouse
my animal lust

you feel my temperature,
as it starts to rise
as I look into
your sensuous eyes

It is all I can do
to hold myself back
as my pants start to bulging
and naturally react

my cup runneth over
our clothes hit the floor
it is time for you,
to ask of me more

I feel you start
to writhe from your hips
as my swollen flesh,
lays down on your lips

With tingling all over
and goosebumps on your back
I can see a light glistening
in your soft tight pink crack

lets go to that place
We know it exist
that fantasy place
that place of sheer bliss

you scream and you moan,
your pussy so tight
as I throb and you pulsate
the end is insight

We want it to last
before I unload
we both can not help it
but we want to explode

It feels so good
you say faster, go fast
I am rubbing you tits and
your clit, and your ass

It is too late to stop
like a volcano erupting
the euphoric magic begins
and there is no interrupting

The feelings intense
and they start to subside
I feel you quivering
As I stay there inside

now with it over
you lay there while oozing
you in the wet spot
while I am just there snoozing
Written by slowgasm

Fetchitnow
Thought Provoker
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Joined 20th Apr 2015
Forum Posts: 156


This Is Ghetto


As the gangsta dies
On a hot and humid Florida mornin'
A poor grievin' young wife is torn
This is ghetto
And his crew cries
'cause if there's one thing that they don't need
it's another corner boy to bleed
This is ghetto

Society, don't you understand
the hood needs a helping hand
or they'll grow to be all angry young men one day
Take a look at them and me,
are we too black to see,
do we simply shut our mouths
and speak in another way

While the hood rolls
and an inspired young boy with a funny jive
deals on the corner as he collects high fives
This is ghetto

And his crib burns
so he starts to scare the folks with fright
and he teaches how to deal
and he teaches how to bite
This is ghetto

Then one night in conversation
a young rat screams aloud
She buys a toy, steals a heart,
tries for fun, but it won't even start
Then her man tries

As the crew gathers 'round a stupid young hoe
face down in the pillow with a dildo in her snatch
This is ghetto

As the neighbourhood sighs
On a hot and humid Florida mornin'
Another poor grievin' young wife is torn
This is ghetto

Solomon_Song
Tyrant of Words
United Kingdom 103awards
Joined 28th Sep 2012
Forum Posts: 332

"Red means danger", they say of signs,
But I'm caught up in your designs.
That silk sheet and your lingerie
Sure weren't meant to deter me.

By the drink that I had taken
My good-bad sense is overtaken.
Like a driver out of control,
Risking parting of body and soul.

No space, time, sense to swerve away,
I crash headlong into the hay,
Where you're sure quick to swoop on me
And nurse me with intimacy.

What clothes I have you pull off me,
Like I'd arrived in A and E.
Responding, careless of my form,
I strip 'nurse' of her 'uniform'!

ConvOfTheAnon
Strange Creature
Joined 26th July 2016
Forum Posts: 1

Stripped.

Stripped form the strength of my language
The intensity of my thought
The potency of my words

Stripped from the capacity to know
The scope of my passion
The inquisitiveness of my curiosity

Stripped from the vastness of my heritage
The beauty of my culture
The identity of my Self

Stripped from the sweetness of silence,
the quietude of mind.
the tranquility of heart

Stripped.

opheliac
Dangerous Mind
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Joined 29th Aug 2009
Forum Posts: 2122

untitled

a name so common
suddenly becomes so significant.

poet Anonymous

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poet Anonymous


Thinking of You

"Thoughts of you 

Will not leave me

So potent 

So constant 

So real

Can you feel them?

Are they consuming you? 

Are they invading your soul?

Thoughts of your words 

How they awaken my being 

Making me ache for you

Thoughts of your hands 

And what I want them to do to me 
Covering every portion of my flesh 

Rough and with great intent 

Feeling every rigid fiber 

And how they excite my senses

Thoughts of your lips 

How they taste 

How they make me feel 

When you trail them down my body 
Stopping in all the right places 

Pausing 

Suckling 

How I open and invite you in 

Every sensitive nerve awakened 

As your tongue swirls 

Arching my body 

My hands pressing you deeper

Thoughts of your voice 

F*cking me with your words 

As
I touch you 

Taste you 

The growl in your chest 

As pleasure overtakes you 

Your breaths in my ear 

Speaking those dirty things 

Which only I know 

Only I can do

Thoughts of your scent 

As my body covers yours 

Inhaling you 

Your masculinity 

Your passionate heat 

Claiming my ache 

My thirst 

My desire
Can you feel me….

Thinking of you"

poet Anonymous

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beanbandit
David Gonzales
Fire of Insight
United States
Joined 27th June 2016
Forum Posts: 41

"Poor me... ! extreme content !"
Poor me...
Nah pour p-pour me
Go ahead and take a sip
I'll watch you owe D
My head is making clouds
I ground, and up more trees
I am LSD
I am heavenly
Come and see you through my eyes
Surprise, nothing for free
I am that random tablet
The one you found in traffic
  Go ahead and pop it down
Fuck it, let's see what happens
Find passion in your passage
Extract me and then dab it
I promise it won't hurt
If you can see me, know we damaged
Began this as a man
Now damn, I am a habit
Pure, strong like a brick
Crush half and take a sniff
Praise me for the nod off
God Xan this shit's a trip
Bet that you won't miss
The world of normies
Yeah, Whoa is me
Now pour p-pour me...
Written by beanbandit (David Gonzales)
Published 26th June 2016 11:15pm

chump
Thought Provoker
United States 6awards
Joined 30th Sep 2014
Forum Posts: 417

i put it to a vote.... now at least one of us will be able to say their first poem won a trophy..................

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