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crimsin (Unveiling)
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Disney with a twist

Poetikmind
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Tyrant of Words
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Nice spill! I'm not sure IF this is how one posts to this contest, but here's mine...



The (Ly)ing 'King...'



He ruled... the King, dumb...
To the rise of wise words whispered,
formed from the mouths of 'knew' better babes...

'Children'who knew not that what was uttered as truth, this 'sooth
sayer' layered his tongue in lies
he disguised to make wayward
youth follow his lost odyssey...

A prophecy, SHEEP flock around
the leader...

So don't perpetuate further false
fate ahead on the road to life, because a 'Lying  King' can only
rule tediously until the 'Trump Card'
had been exposed...

DevilsChild
Tyrant of Words
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Thanks LobodeSanPedro and Poetikmind Both great reads ^^

LobodeSanPedro
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Size none is not for me

It's the same old song in every Disney flick
The boy [in the closet] wants the size none chick

Call me crazy but gimme curves and sass
Like Beyonce's hydraulic hips and J-Lo's ass

Yeah those Disney princesses all sing real pretty
But can they dance bachata or whine in the dark city

Those Disney dolls with never a hair out of place
... Nah ...
Gimme that babe that Snaps Chats her,  Come fuck me face

Whether see eats cornbread and grits
or bangers with mash
Whatever it takes to fill out her jeans with that Apple ass

Forget the flowing hair with the perfect locks
Gimme buzzed cut Amber Rose with a body that rocks

Those Disney puppets make love in bed
My ride to die takes it bent over her bike instead  

Some Disney boys may Wish Upon a Star
I keep my magic wand in her rabbit hole doing 70 in my car








ilovescarystories
Thought Provoker
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Snow white and seven d!cks

Snow white ran away from home.
With a face as pale as snow.
And lips as red as blood.
She ran away to seven players.
Who only kept her around for her beauty.
She cleaned their house like a slave.
She made their food like she was their bitch.
Snow white ran away from slavery.
Only to work for seven horny men.
They used her craving for life to fuel their appetite.
After the queen put on the red shoes.
I guess ya can say snow white isn't so white anymore

chump
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what really happened with the dwarves that total seven
the shit that they did wouldnt get them in heaven
when that scared little bitch came out of the woods
the first thing they did was check out her goods
sure little lady you can stay at our place
for the next three days you can sit on our face
well all have our way
a few times through each day
if you think seven a day you cant handle
its ok you can work at night i have a candle
sneaky might fuck you when you sleep
but he wont make a peep
when you fuck plumpy i suggest you get on top
its really fucking messy when that fat fuck goes pop
rumpy on your pussy might pass
but hell hop right on your butt white ass
freaky doesent like  to fuck when hes bored
who knows what hell want for his turn that youre whored
humpy might be who you fuck most
he fucks faster and longer he likes to boast
cocky is the one youll have to watch out for
his huge dick will have you gaping and real sore
lippy like mouths better than the other hole
and hell cover your mountains like the north and south pole
when we see the cunt that wants you dead
youll be inside still giving head
well tell all the gaurds there is nothing weve seen
then well have rumpy butt fuck the queen

JohnnyBlaze
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Behind The Scenes

Listen to her moan and wail
simply to no avail
in sadness more so than malice

No one sees her standing there
Did anyone ever really care
about poor little Alice ?

Always lacking in attention
eager for her parent's affection
never did she grow up to understand

Never did she come to know
what love means

and
she continues to roam
the house that strangers after strangers
call their home

What few years of life she was blessed with
was lived behind the scenes

followed by decades of a paler existence
wandering in a catacomb
taking refuge from wicked stepmothers
and Red Queens

Bedtime stories she can't even read
without warm smiles tucking her in bed
No kind souls to give her whatever she might need
or to tell her

she is fucking dead  




poet Anonymous

Alternative Disney endings

They chased Olaf with a blowtorch until he began to drip
Scar took full control of the pride and Simba perished in the wilderness
The hunter came back and shot Bambi  
Hades brought Olympus to its knees  
The toys were melted down in the incinerator
Dumbo hit the ground
sheer khan ate Mowgli  
Snow White never woke up
Aladdin went to jail
Sebastian was served with butter
and the less said about Quasimodo the better

LobodeSanPedro
Tyrant of Words
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Forum Posts: 3304

http://cdn.watchloud.com/wp-content/uploads/2014/09/Amber-Rose-motorcycle.jpg

No pumpkin carriage
Black on black on sweet Amber
Slip her on, she fits

DevilsChild
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The winners 😁

Crim
Deviant Alice

Jade
ALICE REVISITED

Poetikmind
The (Ly)ing 'King..

I want to thank everyone that entered. It was fun reading what people came up with 😁

Jade-Pandora
jade tiger
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( bows )

Thank you host DC for a fun comp and the opportunity ...and for the honor of sharing the podium with Crim and Poetikmind.  My congratulations to you both!

LobodeSanPedro
Tyrant of Words
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I always knew under those locks Alice was a bad ass ... Congrats Crim!

snugglebuck
Dangerous Mind
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Devil's Child, your 'When Beauty Left the Beast' made me sad.  I haven't cried that much since Tipper Gore left Al.

crimsin
Unveiling
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thank you DC for a great comp. and choosing me the winner

congrats to Poe and Jade as well

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