Poetry competition CLOSED 29th June 2016 4:37am
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THE HERETIC ANTHEM

HadesRising
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Poetry Contest

your take on a Slipknot song
Here we go again, motherfucker!

Ok, no disrespect intended, if you don't know who Slipknot is then that's just sad. Shameful. What I want is Slipknot inspired poetry. So, give me your anger, give me your angst! Slap me in the face with brutality. As always, I will use guest judges. If, for some reason you have been under a rock, I will supply a few links to help you get acquainted.

https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=B1zCN0YhW1s

https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=ZPUZwriSX4M

https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=u6ZtHrWiSAk

https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=4mFVvk9mAoc

https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=PAAvNmoqDq0

https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=XEEasR7hVhA

This should get you started, there are way too many favorites to list here.

TWO WEEKS

TWO ENTRIES MAX PER POET

NEW OR OLD

WHAT THE FUCK ARE YOU WAITING FOR?

SPIT IT OUT







poet Anonymous

Is spkt is a must?

HadesRising
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IronFears said:Is spkt is a must? Yes, sir. It's a Slipknot inspired comp.

poet Anonymous

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anonymouslyhere
Pariah Shadow
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Dead Slave


You've dug into my eye
What'd you find?
Nothing
Step inside
I'll show you empty


Hate is all we have
I hope your proud
I'll design you shroud
Put you in your grave
Am I your slave?
Do I beg for mercy?
Do I ask you to hurt me?


Go ahead, kill me dead
Put that bullet into my head
Pull the trigger, am I bigger
Pull the trigger, watch me die
I dare you, i wont cry
I want to die, explode my brain
Let there be a gore-rain
You scared? Then hand me the gun
You'd better shut up and run


You dug into my eyes
What'd you find?
NOTHING!
Step inside
I'll show you empty
You can hate, you can judge
But all we have is hate
Isn't it great?!
Welcome your fate



I'll haunt you
I'll haunt you
I'll haunt you
I'll dig your grave
Am I your slave?

poet Anonymous

no one fucks with me anymore
even if i have to kick down the door
no one fucks with me anymore
no one
no one
no one

I stepped into the madness
i stepped into the madness
I stepped into the...

no one fucks with me anymore
even if i end up bruised battered and sore
no one fucks with me anymore
no one

snugglebuck
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http://i1317.photobucket.com/albums/t623/curlycue23/Hells%202%20elevator.png

HELL’S ELEVATOR

The asylum’s elevator goes up tonight
You’re not going to Hell, don’t fright
See the doors, push the button
The devil appears when they open
Hell is right here this night
Christ bade possessed pigs to die
Is this why you loved suicide?
Demonic hogs, faith disavowed
The Satan is in you, you’re the sow

Inspired by Slipknot's The Devil in I

crimsin
Unveiling
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Heaven Shaken

 
disavowed thrown to the winds
here my rage screaming to the heavens
no longer your toy soldier
to be pitted against humanity  
 
faceless god who hides behind a glorified veil
chained me inside the bowels of the Earth
I Lucifer have broken my bounds
roaming to and froe devouring the self-righteous in my path
 
they see not who I truly am
who you are god in heaven
a liar who rages wars pitting  
my red angels against your robot mentality blues angels
 
you father eat the innocent  
no truth to be found in you
I alone see being first created
no longer chained to your throne
 
I've ascended to my own power
technology belongs to me
feel my terror as fact from fiction is being divined
you sodomizer of faith
 
disavowed thrown to the winds
here my rage screaming to the heavens
no longer your toy soldier
to be pitted against humanity  
 
I speak loud and proud
in the shoes of the faithful
my word is shaking the heavens
you can't hide any longer
 
the stars in their eyes clearing
not bedazzled by you any longer
rending the veil the truth being told
hear me screaming challenging you

faceless god who hides behind a glorified veil
chained me inside the bowels of the Earth
I Lucifer have broken my bounds
roaming to and froe devouring the self-righteous in my path
 
shouting the TRUTH

"The Devil In I"

dejure
vick
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unrequited dreams

we roam the abyss hand in hand
blood drained hearts connected by a force
the mindless brains couldn't understand
while our faceless heads trying to express emotions

walking corpses how the world sees us
throwing sarcastic smiles straight through us

but I'm,
blind to all the sarcastic smiles
and deaf to all the sarcastic words
I immunise myself and I feel
numb to the whole fucking world

except you...

our hands sewed together
with the darkness
our feelings connected
but we are heartless
our lives are bound together
by the sadness
our stories will tell
the twisted madness

and,
I shut the world
and walked into
the abyss

because,
you are the escape
from my miserable
reality


| inspired by vermillion II |

crimsin
Unveiling
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Fuck Me ! extreme content !

 

step to me bitch
I fucking dare you
i'll bash you in the head
leave your ass in the ground

weak ass pussy punk
fuck there are no more
enemies or contenders
peel back your face show the real you

rawr, rawr, rawr
leaking from both sides of your mouth
makes me irate
you fake little cunt

trying to bring me down
your game is weak
big man afraid of his own shadow
scared of me damn right

i'll smear you like shit
on the walls of society
leave you leaking from the side
rawr, rawr, rawr

slash burn, kill
fucking insane with rage
i'll asphyxiate you
watch your ass turn blue

piss on your grave
as I stick you in a hole
step to me motherfucker
I fucking dare you

diarrhea running from your mouth
i'll shove your dick down your throat
stop the shit from flowing
rat, punk bitch

step to me bitch
I fucking dare you
i'll bash you in the head
leave your ass in the ground



"Spit It Out"

poet Anonymous

Boots hit sand
Chopper leaves
Another fucking war.

Fucking pukes can't
hide shit from us.
After 4 tours
I am done, I'm not the only one.

The vision we can not undo
The killing switch was
Pushed long ago by
Bureaucracy.
Generation of mass deseption, who
had led a fascist lie.
To line their pockets, with purple hearts.
Needed money. Fuck you. Choke on it.

What did we just hear, WMD could be a fake. Fuck that shit. Fuck that shit!
We have become a breed of psychosocial government seeds.

Wait I killed, fathers, mothers, daughters, sons. Fucking pimps.
You had me kill them ,so we could live.
No,wait I lived to kill the children.

I am a killer of a generations never to breathe. How did I go from me, to the psychosocial government breed?

Now I have PTSD. Now people stare at me. The Dr's say, I need all these fucking drugs.I say I need a drink.
I'll go outside along the streets. Curl my blanket around my feet.

Don't worry about this vet. The government will take care of me. They promised, with my purple heart in hand.

The limits of the dead, we are not the only ones. The limits of the dead!

Inspired by: Psychosocial

HadesRising
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Excellent ink, liberators of the mindless cattle, that's a good thing, keep them coming.

calamitygin
Jennifer Michael McCurry
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I know Slipknot!! Yay! Not sad....cummin up!

dejure
vick
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Forum Posts: 2879

the maggots riot

you tried the churches and temples but you got yourself hurt
you’ve baptised in water and fire now let's baptise you in dirt

dig yourselves your graves and let your fucking selves rot
wait until your flesh decayed then let the maggots out

because
the rain is coming,
your flesh will not survive
the rain is coming,
to wash your ugly eyes
the rain is coming,
to end your worthless lives
the rain is coming,
are you fuckers ready to die?

your churches put curses with verses of Jesus
the hatred grew deep in your heart you called sacred

if you want to take a part embrace the darkness
feed what grow inside you let go of your madness

your eyes show the truth you tried to hide with your lies
don’t be embarrassed to liberate your psych mind

you drowned in your ego
you learned to breathe under
and you let yourself sink
there’s no coming back up
sink deeper till you find the dirt

and dig yourselves your graves and let your fucking selves rot
let your flesh decayed and let the maggots out




| inspired by SlipKnot |

poet Anonymous

                            XIX

19 yrs is an infinity when it comes to friendship. A lifetime. 2 decades of putting up with someone's shit, loving them all the more because of it.

What do I do, to stay here and not join you? I am not going to pretend everything is going to get better.
Nothing will ever be the same.
The music I write.
The food I eat.
The way I take a shit. #2 I have to hold it together.
I never, in all these years, thought you, before me.
We promised to go out together.
I was in pain, too.
I didn't want to admit , how much you could partake.
Not to anyone, not even you Party Clown.
Im going to take that walk we should have taken right from the start
I will find you Ghost
I need you to always walk with me
Walk with me, I am in no shape to be alone Paulie.
38 well deserved to be frozen in time
Don't let this fucking world tear me apart Pig.

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