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SONNET SLAM 2 - Anything Goes

poet Anonymous

"in between" - A Sonnet

Fierce loves' caress, gripping to pierce breasts peaks
Bending arch I'm brought close by lifted waist
Flicking wet tongue, clenched pink within sharp teeth
Opened wider, plunging tips with no haste

Allowing the slide to grind in tight tease
Wrapping in silk to encase in warm wet
Perhaps in my hot mouth on wide spread knees?
With hungered strokes, cause to explode - "not yet"

Delve in to darkness, forcing your swift thrust
Stretching the hole of your good little whore
Feel your bad girl meet your pull in synced push
Hard and fast you take and fuck what is yours

Pumping thick cream, cum flows along with me
Walls are now dripping silk from in between


Copyright © 2016 Schiitaryn McKenna. All Rights Reserved.

poet Anonymous

Long After Dusk - Made to Sonnet

Fingers gliding the length of my curved spine
along the trail of inked, milky-white flesh
Follow the path towards a treasure to find
'tween inner thigh and where delicate's mesh

In the small of my back I feel your lips
tongue takes a lick and then teeth take a bite
Shoulder is hooked, body bends twisting hips
turning me over while tips stay in tight

Forcing it in I beg to feel your greed
making it last watch a tail wag in beg
Cause me to pant sinking deep in your need
eager thighs tighten with trembling to legs

Hearts ev'ry time always sync the same beat
Tones do the same as I drench with release


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Hepcat61
geoff cat
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Artemios said:My red high heels

Art later tonight I break the poem by syllable and show the stressed and unstressed to try to illuminate the meter.  I need to have my dinner first.. . I'll be back later...

poet Anonymous

Visceral Sighs - Made to Sonnet

Life force throbbing conjures a wet silk wand
hearts are found mirror'ed in quickly timed beats
Rallying flow in hard suck we'll soon bond
arousal sparked and surge felt to repeat

Parting of thighs I will mount atop waist
once your spine reclines swiftly to the bed
Petals are draped with a sweet berry taste
passions surface on a chest splashed in red

Lip is bitten when your thickness goes in
slowly you vanish within shades of pink
Piercing hard peaks we're grinding tight rhythm
hearing "you are mine" in deep burrowed sink

"Cum" from tongue whispered felt in trembling thighs
Flow soon follows after visceral sighs


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Hepcat61
geoff cat
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Taryn said:Visceral Sighs - Made to Sonnet

Miss Taryn... sorry for the delay... something required my attention...
and I needed to let my glasses defog...

Thank you for your entries... ah-hem...
*sorry, had to clear my throat*

geoff

dejure
vick
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Hepcat61 said:

Well done...  

A fine sonnet... a simple note: check lines 2 and 3, there seem to be subject/verb agreement errors - unless they are a poetic conceit.

Thank you for your entry,

geoff


thanks geoff
I hope now its fine

poet Anonymous

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Hepcat61
geoff cat
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@Artemois and @IronFears and any other non-native speakers - I was raised in the Southern United States - so my syllable counts are always messed up  - for me "poem" is a one syllable word and "fire" is a two syllable (which is odd because "desire" is also a two syllable word in my pronunciation...)

this is the site I use - when I can remember - http://www.howmanysyllables.com/


Hepcat61
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dejure said:

thanks geoff
I hope now its fine


yes, that took care of it...



geoff

calamitygin
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Taryn said:Visceral Sighs - Made to Sonnet

Life force throbbing, conjuring a wet wand
hearts are found mirrored, in quickly timed beats
Rallying the flow, in hard suck we will bond
arousal sparked and surge felt to repeat

Parting of thighs, I will mount atop waist
once your spine reclines swiftly to the bed
Petals are draped, with a sweet berry taste
passions surface, on a chest splashed in red

Lip is bitten, when your thickened goes in
slowly you vanish, within shades of pink
Piercing hard peaks, we grind in tight rhythm
hearing "you are mine", in deep burrowed sink

'Cum' from tongue whispered, felt in trembling thighs
Flow soon follows, after visceral sighs


Copyright © 2016 Schiitaryn McKenna. All Rights Reserved.


Thoroughly enjoyed!

calamitygin
Jennifer Michael McCurry
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His Goddess


I stand my legs wide across tremblin man
Colossus view of my clit danglin gold
Reaching down cupping scrotum in my hand
"Understand pet, not just your nuts I hold"

"I hold your devotion and treasure it"
"I trust you will bend to my will my love"
"Take your !Smack! glad with commanded quiet"
"As your excitement grows beneath black glove..."

Bend exposed bare over my waiting lap
My thighs capture your cock between their grip..
I feel it thrust against my velvet nap..
As paddle and whip brings sweet precum drip

"On your back!..Call me Lilith as i ride!"
"My Lilith!!"  he screams as he spends inside...


calamitygin
Jennifer Michael McCurry
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Hep...my first..so please...let me know what's wrong...want to learn...thanks for this wild comp!

Hepcat61
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calamitygin said:His Goddess

JEN!  
so happy you posted... your first!

A great first effort... I am between things right now... but I will be back on later... and I can show you a few things that might be beneficial...

Thanks so much for posting on the competition ...

geoff

Jade-Pandora
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( a sonnet EXAMPLE of mine for participants of the SLAM )


BLACK SWAN
(an English sonnet)

As crickets stridulate while summer dies,    
And so their generation as it fades,
The outline of a black swan mutely flies
To gentle glide through reeds of gentle glades.
   
Into the chorus of a million songs,
Identical and different in the words.
She settles, folds her wings where she belongs,
In coming back, disturbing other birds.
   
From spreading ripples to crescendo's crash,  
The lover waits ashore to covet her.
Then calling back & forth in moonlight's flash
Their courtship ritual between assured.
   
Sunrise, her quick eyes spy his prick'ly beard,
His black swan comes to preen, her love revered.

Hepcat61
geoff cat
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Jade-Pandora said:( a sonnet EXAMPLE of mine for participants of the SLAM )


BLACK SWAN
(an English sonnet)

As crickets stridulate while summer dies,    
And so their generation as it fades,
The outline of a black swan mutely flies
To gentle glide through reeds of gentle glades.
   
Into the chorus of a million songs,
Identical and different in the words.
She settles, folds her wings where she belongs,
In coming back, disturbing other birds.
   
From spreading ripples to crescendo's crash,  
The lover waits ashore to covet her.
Then calling back & forth in moonlight's flash
Their courtship ritual between assured.
   
Sunrise, her quick eyes spy his prick'ly beard,
His black swan comes to preen, her love revered.


Thank you, Jade, for another wonderful example of a sonnet...

I loved this one the first time I read it, and it gets better every time.

geoff

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