Poetry competition CLOSED 7th August 2016 7:28pm
WINNER
afriendoftina (Hendy)
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Why Does it Hurt

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MrBuchanan
Twisted Dreamer
United States
Joined 5th Aug 2016
Forum Posts: 25

Beautifully worded, the emotions really pour out of this one! Thank you for sharing.

MrBuchanan
Twisted Dreamer
United States
Joined 5th Aug 2016
Forum Posts: 25

A very painful write, my condolences.. I hope you find the strength you require

MrBuchanan
Twisted Dreamer
United States
Joined 5th Aug 2016
Forum Posts: 25

I'll never love another girl,
The way that I loved you.
Even if she's beautiful,
She simply will not do.

She may be both smart and fun,
And take care of me,
But you're still the only one,
How can you not see?

I could try every day,
Just to give this heart away,
But she'll never get it all,
Because I guess i'm afraid,

I'll never need another smile,
The way that I need yours.
I would walk ten thousand miles,
Just to see one more.

I'll never hurt on the inside,
The way I have for you,
But telling you how much I've cried,
Is not like me to do.

I'll never write for anyone,
My songs will rot on shelves.
Softly, I will cry alone,
Singing to myself.

snugglebuck
Dangerous Mind
United States 77awards
Joined 3rd Feb 2014
Forum Posts: 1873

Fun comp, congrats to the winners.

rabbitquest
Dangerous Mind
Ukraine 2awards
Joined 20th May 2012
Forum Posts: 2051

Congrates to all the winners

afriendoftina
Hendy
Twisted Dreamer
United Kingdom 5awards
Joined 21st Apr 2016
Forum Posts: 73

Omg i have only just seen this,  I haven't been on DUP for a short time and I have only just noticed this. Thank you so much, it's been a really, really tough year and that poem was the first I ever wrote, it came all at once - organically. This means so much to me. Thanks  :)

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