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Jade-Pandora (jade tiger)
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Lady cracks the whip!

calamitygin
Jennifer Michael McCurry
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Jade-Pandora said:LEATHER
(Sestina)

Mistress comes, he whimpers, on his back, naked,    
Moist-eyed, face flushed, with fingers digging in.      
Boot heels tap a cadence, I strut slowly 'round,      
Expressionless, observing ev'ry gleaming curve,      
Dragging studded belt down at My side, to brush    
Polished wooden floor beneath his sweating form.      
     
Causing him to twitch with each nerve of his form.
I stop to look down at his paleness, naked,
Vulnerable to be touched gently with a brush    
Of leather-glove'ed hand, each finger tight in    
A richly hand-stitched sheath that creaks as they curve    
In shallow hollows of his rise, to wrap 'round.    
     
The boy gasps, his heart leaps, his breath is a brush    
Of exhalation catching, rapid loops 'round.
The moment, a balance of time held still, in    
Increments of fervent looks and brows that form.  
My crimson mouth, an oath, exposed and naked,    
My serpent's lightning flying in a wide curve.  
     
Its black stud leather flailing bites the naked,    
More than the lack of clothing, to endure in    
Sadist turnings of My corset body 'round,    
To fling Myself against his spine's bare curve.    
My fever's what he wants to serve with the brush    
Of flame, to stoke fire's desire's form.    
       
He presents himself to Me in willing curve,      
To please Me, to reward him his joy, to brush    
Aside his fear, for the love of the boy, naked.    
For My pleasure of leather to come 'round,    
With his hairless sex, and that perfect rare form,
He stifles a cry as my strappy slides in.
     
I've got him, I feel him, it shows on his face, to brush    
Into sub space, his flight that weaves 'round,
Evokes bright flashes of galaxies to float in.
While Mistress leans in, hard-fucking his form,    
My own space takes Me into him, naked.    
He shudders & comes as I'm wrapped 'round his curve.    
     
The circle's complete where a trust begins, to brush    
Away the webs of doubt, to invoke a bond in    
A life mystical, where W/we're free to be naked.
 
 
 
Copyright © 2015-2016 Jade Pandora.  All Rights Reserved.  

 Entered in the DUP competition "Lady cracks the whip!"


Oh honey...speechless...is this the same as in Arrti's challenge?

Remember it being beautiful....this is too if not the same...

I love Dom Sub relations expressed with true emotion...not humiliation or violence..
But care and love....

Thank you again Growlin Dove...Jade hugs

calamitygin
Jennifer Michael McCurry
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C#mon Lobo...with the MMA piece....take it like a man! Lol....💋

calamitygin
Jennifer Michael McCurry
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Seriously...any Sub writes from men about Dom's welcome....or Women abour Dominatrix.....it just must be a Dominatrix themed write...
..

Hepcat61
geoff cat
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Jen -

with no offense intended to either our dear hostess or competition or other poets who have graced our Lady with their words...

I am withdrawing from the competition, for reasons I must keep private

Thank you so much for allowing me the privilege of entry and - Jen - for your kindest words...

with nothing but love and respect...

geoff

(the entries - along with a third in the series can be accessed through my gallery...)


calamitygin
Jennifer Michael McCurry
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Hep!!

Oh..doll...i fucking love this!
This is my favorite thing I've read of yours...

She stands so only pointed toes are shown..

Nuff said. Bit of perfection..

LobodeSanPedro
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calamitygin said:C#mon Lobo...with the MMA piece....take it like a man! Lol....💋

I got the crap kicked outta me last night in the gym, then spent 30 minutes working out to perfect a choke hold for my next session ... It'll all add to the writing lol ... I'm coming.

You're a Lisa Lampanelli fan too I see ... I love her!

calamitygin
Jennifer Michael McCurry
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LobodeSanPedro said:

I got the crap kicked outta me last night in the gym, then spent 30 minutes working out to perfect a choke hold for my next session ... It'll all add to the writing lol ... I'm coming.

You're a Lisa Lampanelli fan too I see ... I love her!


Good boy.
Cant wait for you to come....lol

Actually a bit jealous hearing about your workouts...loved them.

calamitygin
Jennifer Michael McCurry
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Actually my son loves her....Lisa L....

But...why? I don't know what i said...but she runs the gammet fur suuure....

LobodeSanPedro
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calamitygin said:Actually my son loves her....Lisa L....

But...why? I don't know what i said...but she runs the gammet fur suuure....


"Take it like a man" is her signature line.

calamitygin
Jennifer Michael McCurry
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LobodeSanPedro said:

"Take it like a man" is her signature line.



Lol...she musta got it from me! I didnt know....

Jade-Pandora
jade tiger
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calamitygin said:

Oh honey...speechless...is this the same as in Arrti's challenge?

Remember it being beautiful....this is too if not the same...

I love Dom Sub relations expressed with true emotion...not humiliation or violence..
But care and love....

Thank you again Growlin Dove...Jade hugs


Reply in 10-syllabic count verse:

I thank you, dear Madam Host Jennifer,
And thank you for the opportunity.

And yes, it is the one, yet not the same.
Was half a year ago since its first write,
Then read it fresh to my mind yesterday,
And then revised to tighten its express.

So what you read the first time is still here,
Presented now the way it should've been.

GD🐦

Hepcat61
geoff cat
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calamitygin said:Hep!!

Oh..doll...i fucking love this!
This is my favorite thing I've read of yours...

She stands so only pointed toes are shown..

Nuff said. Bit of perfection..


Jen -

Thank you so much - I really had a lot of fun with this -

fun thinking about the scenerio, fun playing with the visuals, fun writing it and playing with the language...  I am glad you liked it...  Really enjoying this competition...

geoff

calamitygin
Jennifer Michael McCurry
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Oh Im thrilled you had fun..and entered such a sexy piece Hep...❤

calamitygin
Jennifer Michael McCurry
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[quote-347600-Jade-Pandora]

Reply in 10-syllabic count verse:

I thank you, dear Madam Host Jennifer,
And thank you for the opportunity.

And yes, it is the one, yet not the same.
Was half a year ago since its first write,
Then read it fresh to my mind yesterday,
And then revised to tighten its express.

So what you read the first time is still here,
Presented now the way it should've been.

GD🐦
[/quot

Oh okay....I thought some of it was familiar..but felt different. It is gorgeous...thank you so much GD...

Hepcat61
geoff cat
Dangerous Mind
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Jen -

with no offense intended to either our dear hostess or competition or other poets who have graced our Lady with their words...

I am withdrawing from the competition, for reasons I must keep private

Thank you so much for allowing me the privilege of entry and - Jen - for your kindest words...

with nothing but love and respect...

geoff

(the entries - along with a third in the series can be accessed through my gallery...)



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