Poetry competition CLOSED 27th May 2016 1:45am
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diamonddave75
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RUNNERS-UP: Jade-Pandora and Artemios

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It's Miss Jackson If Ya Nasty!

MsRockyJackson
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Poetry Contest

Write a tribute poem in honor of Janet Jackson
Since Janet Jackson's birthday is coming up and she is officially pregnant with her first child I decided to make a competition in honor of her.
Simply just write her a tribute poem about her.

Rules:
- has to have a picture of her next to your poem

- you don't have to necessarily be a hardcore fan to write one you can just write one in honor of her

- No, and I repeat NO backlash or disrespectful poems towards her or her family! The whole point of this competition is to honor her not bash her!

- can be as long or as short as you want it

- tell me what makes her special

- one entry only


You have two weeks, good luck.

[UPDATE]: Since I am very disappointed with the fact that only one entry is in this I decided to extend it to one last week.

diamonddave75
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When I Think Of You

passionate lady
talent and vigor
younger sister
who pushed hard

overshadowed
by brothers
at first
coming of age

musical family
she’s a diamond
who scratched
and clawed

stole spotlight
in shadows
of a king
who ruled pop

left her mark
sexy goddess
rhythm nation
in control

Ms. Jackson
pleasure principle
miss you much
come back to me

velvet rope
nasty boys
an escapade
runaway

in awe..
when i think of you!!

MsRockyJackson
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Wonderful poem entry Dave!
Hope to see more entries :)

diamonddave75
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Thanks, Ms. Jackson.. i hope there are more entries as well.. great comp idea..



Dave

MsRockyJackson
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I have extended this competition to one last week since I want to see more entries, come on now!

kriticool
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.:Wissam's Girl:.


The
Pleasure Principal
the weight
kept respectable

Damita Jo

pro- induced to them
nice flows

caught
rhythm from the
five funky fresh Bros.

Unbreakable

Yeah you know
Known all
ova The Planet
aka
Known as Janet
She that femme fatale Jackson
five, four, three, two

Each line a maxim

Sis.
Control
tell us,
what a Knowles
really know?

This here
Number one
She dot calm the
whole of
radio

Look sir, Aunty ain’t
NO Fredo

Eye
gotta hunch

of the
Girly Girls
Flyest of the bunch
still kicking at fifty
still wishing got
with me

DAMMN - Baby

JohnnyBlaze
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I Saw Her Flash Before My Eyes

Krittercool and Billy Joel
Say whuuuut ?
were a couple of nasteeeeeee
backstreet boys to men kinda guys
looking for a classy uptown girl
No, not you, Latoya!
Don't be such a fool

Janet
she's out of this world
from another planet
and out of their league
I don't have a decent rhyme for this
so I'm just going to dance it out
uhuh

ooops
wardrobe malfunction

one titty that rocked the world
imagine if they both were bared
Michael's hair would have come uncurled
and she paid the price long after
though nowadays
no one would even have cared
Big deal

Say whuuuut! ever you want
She's still Bad
Dig?
I sure do, Diamond Dave
and I wouldn't mind copping a feel

diamonddave75 said:http://i1243.photobucket.com/albums/gg557/diamond_dave75/1442913676_zpsir8qrljc.jpg

MsRockyJackson
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So far seeing some good entries :)

Artemios
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It feels so right

These cat eyes always loving somebody
thinking of lovers again and again
sensual movement is born with you
the 80’s dance will always have a tone of you.

Feelings start and end with your voice in my dreams
when you sing “come back to me”
I suddenly call my lover and he comes to find me
with candles, flowers and red wine words.

When you say the word “baby”
It feels like you are proud of the music
every time you move your glance
it seems that someone is falling in love somewhere.

You appear on stage like the breeze in the air
and people write on their diaries
the experience of an ecstasy moment
going back home without voice, without other choice.

Your shoulders cannot sleep at all since you were born
Asking yourself what have you done lately
it will never take away the small world you created.

These cat eyes will never wear sunglasses
in front of music and its melody
because music and you just feels so right
and that´s the way love goes.

Jade-Pandora
jade tiger
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FLIGHT: Janet Damita-Jo Jackson
(a tribute on her 50th)


A little girl, so sweet and shy of face,
With voice like tender bird when e'er she spoke,

Surrounded by her older siblings then,
With harmonies of music everywhere.

And when melodic nestlings had all flown,
She wondered if she'd ever fly one day.

Where were her wings, she must've asked herself,
To fulfill this young songbird's destiny.

And so she'd warble, letting go her song,
To let it be her wings to make her soar.

What Janet honed to be the gift of heart,
The songbird who'd been known the girl next door.

Her voice with wings has spread around the world,
As sibling flock of bloodline is her wind.

For she has grown while climbing to the heights,
Her voice uplifts the masses with its prime.

And from her flight a rhythm nation thrives,
From wings to earthly limbs, the art of dance.

Examples of what other girls can be,
Her powers as a woman, proud and strong.

In beauty both without and heaven-sent,
The little one she's blessed with grows within.

http://i48.photobucket.com/albums/f248/jadepandora/janet%20jackson%20smile%2000.png

calamitygin
Jennifer Michael McCurry
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Oh Mz Jackson...
One of my first girl fantasies
Many a night had Rhythm Nation between my thighs...

You started thick...
And i loved that ass
Plump and round and thrusting...

Then you show up on the cover
Of Rolling Stone...
Two hands holding your own..

Oh God...my kitty went spastic..

Girl you've come a long way
Since those "Good Times" days
And teenage years doing Different Strokes..

Now darlin you are your own woman
I'd kill Latoya to be yours...
Or if Daddy Jackson was alive
One of your folks....

It feels a little less strange..
Since your brother left the stage...
For a second thought you might be one and the same....

So have your lovely daughter...
And hide her from the slaughter..
Of your crazy ass families publicity.

Then call me up soon...
Cuz id cherrish your poon...
I would have you rollin in ecstasy...

JohnnyBlaze
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Congrats, DDave!  And to the runner upses, Jade Panda and Artemeows.

I almost had this trophy, if not for accidental exposure of my hairy man moob.

Artemios
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Congratulation to Dave for the trophy! Lovely poem!

Thank you very much for the runner-up MsRocky, happy to share it with you Jade!

Thank you for the opportunity to listen to Janet´s songs again and remember childhood moments.
Thank you Johnny! I enjoyed a lot your poem

Congratulations to all!

Kisses!
Art


kriticool
Fire of Insight
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CONGRATS!! Nice drops y'all.. The affection for the lady was evident

Jade-Pandora
jade tiger
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Congratulations to Dave for the win on your great piece!

My thanks to our host MsRocky for the wonderful comp theme, and the opportunity, and for the runner-up shared with my friend, Art!

Cheers to all, till next time,
Jadey


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