XXX Haiku
berea440oh
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Dangerous Mind
2
Joined 25th June 2015Forum Posts: 3208
Pete walked into
The sleep lab and saw Brian
Fucking Sharon in bed.
The sleep lab and saw Brian
Fucking Sharon in bed.
Hepcat61
geoff cat
Forum Posts: 1028
geoff cat
Dangerous Mind
33
Joined 27th Nov 2015Forum Posts: 1028
Haiku/Senryu Renga: COCK TALES
(new stanzas in italics)
1
cock replaces tongue
mouth conforms on rigid shaft
she prefers its spit
2
fingers deep inside
wet thumb finds her deeper cave
she loves spelunking
3
bent over spreading
her ass inviting response
he won’t spare the rod
4
billed as Thunder Storm
squirting like a tanker truck
cums with a raincoat
5
bukkake drowning
takes loads from one hundred cocks
can’t face another
6
she has a talent
one in each hand, all holes filled
five of a kind wins
7
in devil’s costume
she spits back his enjoyment
snowballs chance in hell
8
works her core daily
she cums with uncanny force
you’re in the splash zone
9
trying to lose weight
she has him cumming gallons
saves on protein shakes
10
rides him like a bronc
cumming at a gallop’s pace
how she cowgirl’s up
11
uncontrolled facials
eye stinging in blizzard’s blast
needs her ski goggles
12
dessert with dinner
he loves eating her cream pie
coffee with that, sir?
(new stanzas in italics)
1
cock replaces tongue
mouth conforms on rigid shaft
she prefers its spit
2
fingers deep inside
wet thumb finds her deeper cave
she loves spelunking
3
bent over spreading
her ass inviting response
he won’t spare the rod
4
billed as Thunder Storm
squirting like a tanker truck
cums with a raincoat
5
bukkake drowning
takes loads from one hundred cocks
can’t face another
6
she has a talent
one in each hand, all holes filled
five of a kind wins
7
in devil’s costume
she spits back his enjoyment
snowballs chance in hell
8
works her core daily
she cums with uncanny force
you’re in the splash zone
9
trying to lose weight
she has him cumming gallons
saves on protein shakes
10
rides him like a bronc
cumming at a gallop’s pace
how she cowgirl’s up
11
uncontrolled facials
eye stinging in blizzard’s blast
needs her ski goggles
12
dessert with dinner
he loves eating her cream pie
coffee with that, sir?
Jade-Pandora
jade tiger
Forum Posts: 5134
jade tiger
Tyrant of Words
154
Joined 9th Nov 2015 Forum Posts: 5134
The following describes a night at a fetish club that friends and I used to go to when I lived "the lifestyle".
erotic haiku renga: on the strip
(renga = linked haiku)
i:
underground sex club
Saturday's BDSM—
weekend-Dom/mes and subs
ii:
crowded dance floor vibes
penetrating naked cheeks
the music's loud too
iii:
a contest later—
bridled pony boys in line
whinny, toss and stomp
iv:
several pony studs
cut, bulging, eyeing the girls
feathered plumes, and plugs
v:
like wheel spokes turning
more doors lead to other rooms
live stage shows of kink
vi:
one, curious crowds
filling ev'ry open space
leather whips flogging
vii:
another, smoke-filled—
leather-clad Dom drizz'ling wax
on his writhing wife
viii:
I stay, watching them
he hands me a red taper
I join them onstage
ix:
crawling 'cross the stage
I kneel close, candle held high
red drops stain her back
x:
her moans say subspace
I'm mesmerized at the sight
my bare skin, goose flesh
xi:
her Dom stops, reaching
his hands and fingers raking
wax flakes off her back
xii:
I go to the next—
private booths & beaded drapes
titillating moans
xiii:
a "slave" comes to me
exotic music begins
we go to a booth
xiv:
he's totally nude
with only a single cloth
hanging o'er his cock
xv:
his movements graceful
his gestures fluid and firm
eager to please me
xvi:
our call and reply
so natural while I grasp him
clear precum oozing
xvii:
slick lubrication—
my fingers coated, shining
offer to his mouth
xviii:
he coos as he sucks
I feel how strong he pulls me
he yearns to serve me
xix:
my sexed thoughts wander
he'd make such a great fuck toy—
that staying power
xx:
but there's his suckling
and not much more time for that
I must break the spell
xxi:
i straighten my thong
I came with friends, not with him—
our first eye contact
Copyright ©2016 Jade Pandora. All Rights Reserved
erotic haiku renga: on the strip
(renga = linked haiku)
i:
underground sex club
Saturday's BDSM—
weekend-Dom/mes and subs
ii:
crowded dance floor vibes
penetrating naked cheeks
the music's loud too
iii:
a contest later—
bridled pony boys in line
whinny, toss and stomp
iv:
several pony studs
cut, bulging, eyeing the girls
feathered plumes, and plugs
v:
like wheel spokes turning
more doors lead to other rooms
live stage shows of kink
vi:
one, curious crowds
filling ev'ry open space
leather whips flogging
vii:
another, smoke-filled—
leather-clad Dom drizz'ling wax
on his writhing wife
viii:
I stay, watching them
he hands me a red taper
I join them onstage
ix:
crawling 'cross the stage
I kneel close, candle held high
red drops stain her back
x:
her moans say subspace
I'm mesmerized at the sight
my bare skin, goose flesh
xi:
her Dom stops, reaching
his hands and fingers raking
wax flakes off her back
xii:
I go to the next—
private booths & beaded drapes
titillating moans
xiii:
a "slave" comes to me
exotic music begins
we go to a booth
xiv:
he's totally nude
with only a single cloth
hanging o'er his cock
xv:
his movements graceful
his gestures fluid and firm
eager to please me
xvi:
our call and reply
so natural while I grasp him
clear precum oozing
xvii:
slick lubrication—
my fingers coated, shining
offer to his mouth
xviii:
he coos as he sucks
I feel how strong he pulls me
he yearns to serve me
xix:
my sexed thoughts wander
he'd make such a great fuck toy—
that staying power
xx:
but there's his suckling
and not much more time for that
I must break the spell
xxi:
i straighten my thong
I came with friends, not with him—
our first eye contact
Copyright ©2016 Jade Pandora. All Rights Reserved
snugglebuck
Forum Posts: 1873
Dangerous Mind
77
Joined 3rd Feb 2014Forum Posts: 1873
http://i1317.photobucket.com/albums/t623/curlycue23/spanking-orgasm_420x294.jpg
Lay over my knee
So I may attend your needs
Scream in ecstasy
Lay over my knee
So I may attend your needs
Scream in ecstasy
snugglebuck
Forum Posts: 1873
Dangerous Mind
77
Joined 3rd Feb 2014Forum Posts: 1873
http://i1317.photobucket.com/albums/t623/curlycue23/323_900.jpg
Prehensile muscle
Please tease, flick, lick and suckle
Watch my cum dribble
Prehensile muscle
Please tease, flick, lick and suckle
Watch my cum dribble
Hepcat61
geoff cat
Forum Posts: 1028
geoff cat
Dangerous Mind
33
Joined 27th Nov 2015Forum Posts: 1028
Haiku/Senryu Renga: COCK TALES
(complete)
1
cock replaces tongue
mouth conforms on rigid shaft
she prefers its spit
2
fingers deep inside
wet thumb finds her deeper cave
she loves spelunking
3
bent over spreading
her ass inviting response
he won’t spare the rod
4
billed as Thunder Storm
squirting like a tanker truck
cums with a raincoat
5
bukkake drowning
takes loads from one hundred cocks
can’t face another
6
she has a talent
one in each hand, all holes filled
five of a kind wins
7
in devil’s costume
she spits back his enjoyment
snowballs chance in hell
8
works her core daily
she cums with uncanny force
you’re in the splash zone
9
trying to lose weight
she has him cumming gallons
saves on protein shakes
10
rides him like a bronc
cumming at a gallop’s pace
how she cowgirl’s up
11
uncontrolled facials
eye stinging in blizzard’s blast
needs her ski goggles
12
dessert with dinner
he loves eating her cream pie
coffee with that, sir
13
she's his smorgasbord
serving nooks cracks and crannies
he loves to eat out
14
loves his long distance
cock keeping up with her pace
L. A. Marathon
15
in hot lustrous pools
cummings and goings mingle
we need more stain stick
(complete)
1
cock replaces tongue
mouth conforms on rigid shaft
she prefers its spit
2
fingers deep inside
wet thumb finds her deeper cave
she loves spelunking
3
bent over spreading
her ass inviting response
he won’t spare the rod
4
billed as Thunder Storm
squirting like a tanker truck
cums with a raincoat
5
bukkake drowning
takes loads from one hundred cocks
can’t face another
6
she has a talent
one in each hand, all holes filled
five of a kind wins
7
in devil’s costume
she spits back his enjoyment
snowballs chance in hell
8
works her core daily
she cums with uncanny force
you’re in the splash zone
9
trying to lose weight
she has him cumming gallons
saves on protein shakes
10
rides him like a bronc
cumming at a gallop’s pace
how she cowgirl’s up
11
uncontrolled facials
eye stinging in blizzard’s blast
needs her ski goggles
12
dessert with dinner
he loves eating her cream pie
coffee with that, sir
13
she's his smorgasbord
serving nooks cracks and crannies
he loves to eat out
14
loves his long distance
cock keeping up with her pace
L. A. Marathon
15
in hot lustrous pools
cummings and goings mingle
we need more stain stick
Anonymous
I like your panties
when their wet I can see through
I do love the view
when their wet I can see through
I do love the view
berea440oh
Forum Posts: 3208
Dangerous Mind
2
Joined 25th June 2015Forum Posts: 3208
I saw Jeff fucking Lee
In the ass while Bonnie was
Sucking both his balls.
In the ass while Bonnie was
Sucking both his balls.
Anonymous
Thank you all for the "Orgasmic'" entries; enjoyed reading all of them, but, and however, only 1 can be a winner. . .so CONGRATS to:
SNUGGLEBUCK. . .It was your blue ball's that made me smile!
and
Congrats to Berea as Runner-up and for always keeping it "Hardcore" in every sexually themed comp I host!
Jade-Pandora
jade tiger
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jade tiger
Tyrant of Words
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Joined 9th Nov 2015 Forum Posts: 5134
My congratulations to Snugglebuck for the win, you got one in the can, yaay! And all the best to berea as well, Devlin's right about you lol!
And to madam host Devlin, I enjoyed playing along, believe me, and thanks for the opportunity!
See you all again,
Jade xo
And to madam host Devlin, I enjoyed playing along, believe me, and thanks for the opportunity!
See you all again,
Jade xo
Hepcat61
geoff cat
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geoff cat
Dangerous Mind
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Joined 27th Nov 2015Forum Posts: 1028
Congratulations to Snugglebuck and berea440oh. What a fun competition, I really loved playing with the form...
Thank you, Devlin, for hosting... Really enjoyed contributing...
geoff
Thank you, Devlin, for hosting... Really enjoyed contributing...
geoff
snugglebuck
Forum Posts: 1873
Dangerous Mind
77
Joined 3rd Feb 2014Forum Posts: 1873
Thank you sweet Devlin
berea440oh
Forum Posts: 3208
Dangerous Mind
2
Joined 25th June 2015Forum Posts: 3208
I want to thank you for the runner-up prize and my family and friends for standing by me no matter what.